2. • My Audience Feedback I received was for my
first draft of the teaser trailer and this was using
Final Cut Pro at the time. I asked each of my
classmates to give me both positive and critical
feedback so that I could improve or change
anything. The feedback helped me to ensure
that my second draft would be better and meet
the demands of my target audience. I had to
make sure that when it came to getting critical
feedback I didn’t take it personally because at
the end of the day it can always be fixed or
changed if need be.

3. • Really good editing & filters
• Nice make up at the end
• Cool title
- Alicia
• Sound will make it more intense!
• If you make the scene look colder it
will be scarier.
• Good editing, filter works really well.
- Eibhilin
• Great titles, some great editing.
• Change font for ‘Out this Autumn’ etc to
something more fitting for the film.
• Assuming voiceovers will be added to make
storyline clearer?
-Leigha

4. • Editing is good – emphasis on genre – filters fit well
• overlay work well with genre
• voiceover/sound will make it better/bring it to life.
-Lauren
• Maybe say ‘This is Autumn’ instead if ‘Out this Autumn’
• very simple fonts
• Good footage
-Natalie
• Good production logo
• good scenes
• better fonts maybe?
• very good frame of Darina getting pulled off the wall screaming!
• intro to movie title screen needs to be shorter?
-Sinead
• Really good production company logos.
• Really good captions
• good editing of layers when the shot of
• writing ‘help’ is played.
• Good use of filters and effects
• Sound will really bring it to life.
-Shannon

5. • It is important that I receive audience
feedback from my target audience as it is
them I am targeting my movie to. The
feedback will enable me to see their thoughts
on what I did right and what I did wrong.
Where I could improve or what I could do to
make them shocked or surprised but keep
their intrigue.
• My second draft I received feedback from my
classmates again because it I was running out
of time to get proper realistic feedback from
my target audience.

6. • After redrafting my teaser trailer for a third
time, fixing the little silly things that needed to
be fixed and including the music for my teaser
trailer I went to facebook with the teaser
trailer to get a more diverse feedback instead
of from my classmates. I got both positive and
critical feedback from facebook.
• The next few slides will show you the
feedback I received.

10. • I even got my feedback from friends off
snapchat a photo messaging app.

11. • After completing my teaser trailer I uploaded
the video to youtube and went a step or two
further and decided to upload it to Facebook,
Twitter and Tumblr all of which a social
networking sites. The idea was to see how
many people would view it and pass it on to
their friends. This is known as Viral Marketing.

12. • From the feedback I received on Facebook I
was quite pleased with it. I got a lot of positive
feedback and a few minor critical comments.
• I received 21 Comments and 42 Likes for my
final draft of ‘The Psychotic.’

13. • For my two ancillary tasks the movie poster
and movie magazine it was essential that I
received target audience feedback. As it is a
key essential in my coursework it is also
important I receive it because it will be target
audience that will be buying the media
products therefore their thoughts and
opinions matter to ensure that the excitement
and intrigue built around the teaser is
increased.

14. • It wasn’t enough just to place a few photos onto
facebook and ask my target audience which one
they thought was best. I needed to preciously
follow my photoshoot plan in order to take the
photos and then choose a select few that would
appeal to my target audience. The choice was
really mine however, I did ask my audience for
feedback on the photos and which would they
specifically liked even though I had already
chosen the one I wanted. By doing this I am
keeping the audience involved with the process
of my media products to further increase their
intrigue and excitement for the possible film.

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16. • Audience feedback was the key essential that
allowed me to create my movie poster that
looked authentic, realistic and professional.
Without the feedback I believe it would look
like a four year old who stuck stickers on it.

17. • Movie magazine is slightly different to the
teaser trailer and movie poster as I have to
take into account that it’s not one specific
genre. Yes the main protagonist is of my
genre, but there are other features on the
front cover that cover a whole range of
different genres. E.g. Thriller, Drama, Horror,
Comedy etc.

18. The audience feedback I received
for this was from my peers. I did
not feel comfortable with putting
this on facebook as I didn’t like it
and it didn’t look to be of the
standard an A2 media studies
should be at.
Like the fonts that you have used.
Not sure about the masthead – bit
tacky.
-Shannon
Can’t read the red words written
beside her.
What’s exclusive inside?
-Rachael
Love the skyline looks really
realistic.
Why is there a white line around
her?
-Emma

19. • Although it’s only my first draft I felt like I still had
a long way to go and even with my audience
feedback I felt there was more criticism than
there was positive comments. So I took to
Photoshop with my audience’s feedback in mind
and written beside me to ensure that I didn’t
make the same mistake twice.
• I even noticed that this was meant to represent a
movie magazine and nothing on the front
represents or shows to the audience that this is
actually a movie magazine. Back to the planning
board again.

20. After some critical feedback and
redrafting I have finally completed
the final draft of my movie
magazine front cover. With the
audience’s feedback I was able to
produce an authentic and realistic
movie magazine that represented
the movie genre and the
professionalism of film.
Feeling confident enough I place
the image on facebook and twitter
to get some more audience
feedback to see whether they
approved with the new changes
that were made.
You can also note that the
magazine does connote that of a
movie magazine as you cans see
where the masthead is there is a
film reel. Which is connected to
film.

21. • To conclude, Throughout the process of creating my
teaser trailer, movie poster and movie magazine I
found that Audience Feedback was the key element of
its success. Without the critical and positive comments
given to me by my target audience I would still be stuck
on the first step. The feedback gives me an insight on
what the audiences thinks about my media products
and informs me of what I could do to change things in
order to meet their demands. Therefore I fully believe
that in any work that I create audience feedback will
always be the number one priority as it is for them I am
creating these media products.