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From other groups
Gabija, Ellen, Leah
Do you think this is a good idea?Do you think this is a good idea?
Yes 5/5
Why?Why?
What can we improve?What can we improve?
Do you think that we will encounter any problemsDo you think that we will encounter any problems
and why?and why?
Solutions to this?Solutions to this?
SummarySummary
Overall no one disliked our film as we got 5/5 yes’ and there was a variety of
reasons why. According to the results there were 3 people that said we do not
need to improve on anything. Whereas two people informed us that it would be
better if we gave a backstory on how her life was before it all happened and if we
filmed in a different area that was run down. On the 4th question people told us
things that we need to look out for when we are filming. Problems we might encounter
include: people walking past, hazards and difficult bathroom scene, the change in
weather and props such as guns can get us into trouble. Some solutions for these
problems are to film after school, to not film the bath tub to give an illusion, to check
weather and to get permission with props. In conclusion, our film should be a success.

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Pitch feedback final

  • 1. LéaLéa Pitch feedback From other groups Gabija, Ellen, Leah
  • 2. Do you think this is a good idea?Do you think this is a good idea? Yes 5/5
  • 4. What can we improve?What can we improve?
  • 5. Do you think that we will encounter any problemsDo you think that we will encounter any problems and why?and why?
  • 7. SummarySummary Overall no one disliked our film as we got 5/5 yes’ and there was a variety of reasons why. According to the results there were 3 people that said we do not need to improve on anything. Whereas two people informed us that it would be better if we gave a backstory on how her life was before it all happened and if we filmed in a different area that was run down. On the 4th question people told us things that we need to look out for when we are filming. Problems we might encounter include: people walking past, hazards and difficult bathroom scene, the change in weather and props such as guns can get us into trouble. Some solutions for these problems are to film after school, to not film the bath tub to give an illusion, to check weather and to get permission with props. In conclusion, our film should be a success.