The document discusses strategies for peer assessment in the writing process. It suggests having students work in small groups or pairs to comment on and critique each other's drafts before final assessment. This allows students to learn from each other's interpretations and provides scaffolding. When doing peer assessment, students should give both positive and constructive feedback using a respectful tone. Teachers can provide assessment criteria or rubrics to guide the process.

1. David Bradshaw
TESOL Greece Annual Convention – 31st March, 2013

2. Writing as a process.
When do we assess?
And how?

3. Brainstorming
Organisation
First draft
Revision
Second / Final draft

4. “The use of learners as sources of information,
and interactants for each other in such a way
that learners assume roles and responsibilities
normally taken on by a formally trained teacher,
tutor or editor in commenting on and critiquing
each others’ drafts in both written and oral
formats in the process of writing.”
(Liu and Hansen, 2002:1)

5. Affective filter – correction in small groups
/ pairs before presenting work for final
assessment.
Scaffolding from other members of the
class.
Opportunity to read other interpretations
of the task.

6. “becoming a critical reader of others’
writing may make students more critical
readers and revisers of their own writing.”
(Rollinson, 2005:24)

7. Attitude very important – RESPECT!
Use pencil – suggestions
Don’t just correct errors – make it positive
Act as target reader
Take time to check generic structure

8. Error correction – general
Error correction – specific / limited
Revison of style / structure
Collaborative writing
Application of bands of
achievement

9. Always ensure there are clear instructions
to follow.
Use of rubrics.

10. FCE - Writing Paper, Part 2
An international publishing company intends to publish a
book called Influential People in the Twentieth Century.
The book will include short articles about politicians,
writers, sports personalities and other people who have
been important in some way. You have been invited to
write a short article for this book about a person who has
had either a good or bad influence on your country.
Write your article.

11.  BAND 5:
 The candidate’s writing fully achieves the desired effect on the target reader. All
content points required in the task are included and expanded appropriately.
 Ideas are organised effectively, with the use of a variety of linking devices and a
wide range of structure and vocabulary.
 Language is well developed, and any errors that do occur are minimal and
perhaps due to ambitious attempts at complex language.
 Register and format are consistently appropriate to the purpose of the task and
the audience.

12.  BAND 3:
 The candidate’s writing on the whole achieves the desired effect on the target
reader.
 All content points required in the task are included.
 Ideas are organised adequately, with the use of simple linking devices and an
adequate range of structure and vocabulary.
 A number of errors may be present, but they do not impede communication.
 A reasonable, if not always successful attempt is made at register and format
which are appropriate to the purpose of the task and the audience.

13.  BAND 1:
 The candidate’s writing has a very negative effect on the target reader.
 There is notable omission of content points and / or considerable irrelevance,
possibly due to misinterpretation of the task.
 There is a lack of organisation or linking devices, and there is little evidence of
language control.
 The range of structure and vocabulary is narrow and frequent errors obscure
communication.
 There is little or no awareness of appropriate register and format.

14.  CONTENT: Clear indication of the person and why important. (NB:
Could be a relative as long as the importance to country is
explained). Explanations of what kind of influence the person had.
 RANGE: Language of description and explanation. Tenses should
be appropriate i.e. according to whether the person is still alive or
deceased.
 ORGANISATION AND COHESION: Clear linking between the
person and the influence, the description and the explanation.
 APPROPRIACY / REGISTER / FORMAT: Article form – some
paragraphing. Neutral / formal register.
 TARGET READER: Would have a clear picture of the person
chosen and their influence on the country.

15. 15 Year 5 students in a bilingual school
(10 years old)
Picture story genre (Flyers)
Supported by a reading exercise and
speaking tasks
Checklist for peer response provided

16. (Gray, 2000)

18. 1st Draft
‘He dress up at half past eight at the
morning’
2nd Draft
‘At half past eight he woke up so fast //
that he didn’t have time to have breakfast’

19. Mr Roger and John.
One night a boy called John was studying history in his bedroom
until half past ten. He was very tired.
The next day it was a sunny day. He woke up at half past eight.
John dressed up and left the house.
At 8:45 John was in the bus until he got to school.
When he got to school it was 9:00. The history exam had started.
Mr Roger told him off, but he could do the history exam. The
children had already started the exam.
When they gave him the mark John was surprised because he got
an A. His parents were very proud and congratulated him.

20. Round table editing
Editing teams - each with a specific role
Editing while writing

22. In groups of four, students look at a
picture they are going to describe.
Student 1 dictates the first sentence of the
description. All vote on the sentence. If
accepted all write it down.
Student 2 dictates the second sentence.
The process is repeated.

23. Opportunities to do these activities online
 Google Docs / Drive
 Wikis
Save classroom time
Easier to see who has corrected what
 Use of different colours for each editor

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 ROLLINSON, P. (2005) ‘Using peer feedback in the ESL writing class’ ELT Journal
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 SHARPLES, M (1999) How we Write London,
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