How I improved myfront page

1. Improving my front page

2. Front page
Sun model reshoot:

3. Front page
To begin improving my front page I began by
deleting the sun image of the page as I didn’t
like the image and to have space to move my
main sell line. I then straightened all the
edges on the main sell line and mast head.
Once I had completed that I made the mast
head and sell lines smaller to make space to
add more sell lines as in my feedback my page
looked sparse. After that, I placed the
information that goes with the barcode on
top again making space for an additional
poster

4. Front page
I then added a circle ontop of mymain sell line
to make mypage look fuller. I added a new sell
line and added another picture to the shopping
section. Once I did that I added a sky line.
Meanwhile I organised a new shoot for the sun
model to be placed under the sell lines.

5. Front page
I then placed my sun
model where I intended
however I didn’t like it so
I deleted it and decided
to use the images from
my content page to
create a boy section.
Once I had done that I
added page numbers so
to fill my magazine up
however I still had a
problem with accidently
rubbing out a section of
the model.

6. Front page
To fill the gap I asked for feedback and
someone said I need to include more music
references so I added a tours and tickets
section to the page.