The document provides feedback on magazine design. It notes that the original design needed more blue and less text for the social media details. To address this, the designer added logo images to reduce text and added a blue header. This gives a more modern look. Additional feedback confirmed the good ratio of images to text and liked the amount of images used. The designer further balanced the colors by adding more blue to the front cover.

1. Feedback

2. In my feedback, one of the things that was noted down was
that there was not enough blue to pink ratio and also in
order to add more blue, use a header type rectangle to also
make the text where the social media details are. One thing
that I noticed myself after making the contents page is that
there was too much text at the top with the social media
details. Therefore I decided to add images of the logos and
icons in order to reduce the amount of writing I had used. I
also compared this to other magazines where there was
images instead of writing. Therefore I added in different
icons and cropped the background of most of them and put
them in. This also gives a more modern type of look to the
magazine as they are easily recognisable logos.
Another piece of feedback I got
was that they liked the amount of
images I had used and the ratio
from writing to images was good.
I also added more blue into the
front cover to balance out the
colours.

3. • Another piece of feedback I got was that they liked the
amount of images I had used and the ratio from writing to
images was good. I also added more blue into the front cover
to balance out the colours.
I added the blue circle
which was originally
going to be pink and also
added blue writing to
break the text up more.
Furthermore I also added
the blue behind the small
image on the cover to
break the colours up and
to make them stand out.