This document provides feedback on a student's work, noting issues like plagiarism, poor spelling and grammar, meaningless research from sources like the first page of Google images or Wikipedia, out of focus images, overuse of Photoshop effects, and a general lack of effort and depth. It recommends that students start a professional website instead of just blogs, and invest in a higher-quality camera if possible. The feedback aims to help students improve their work and take their education seriously rather than just focusing on getting a degree.

1. Exploring
Narra-ve
Through
Meaning
Feedback

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3. General
feedback
1.
Plagiarism
2.
Spelling,
Grammar,
NO
EXCUSES!!
3.
Some
research
included
the
first
whole
page
on
google
images,
this
is
meaningless!
4.
Wikipedia
–
is
not
a
secure
website
5.
Using
unknown
Photographers
for
research
–
Flickr
etc
6.
Research
must
have
some
connec-on
with
the
final
outcomes
7.
Do
not
use
first
name
for
famous
prac--oners
8.
Li9er
evident
in
Por_olio?
This
is
an
academic
presenta-on!
9.
Sloppy
moun-ng
and
presenta-on
(moun-ng
workshops
were
provided
and
apparently
not
well
a9ended)
10.
Book
covers
need
to
be
portrait
format
for
obvious
reasons!
11.
Images
OUT
OF
FOCUS!
12.
One
briefs
are
given
to
offer
you
an
insight
in
how
it
is
to
work
for
real
clients
rather
then
just
having
self
developed
long
term
projects.
Doing
them
quickly
in
your
room
and/or
without
much
effort
is
a
waste
of
your
and
our
-me.
Honestly
ask
yourself
if
you
can
see
the
images
taken
published.
13.
Using
Photoshop
–
lots
of
over
manipula-on
and
unnatural
colours
14.
Using
Photoshop
well
doesn’t
mean
overworking
images.
15.
You
are
learners
not
consumers.
You
have
to
realize
with
paying
for
educa-on,
you
are
buying
educa-on
not
a
degree.
16.
You
can’t
just
think
you
are
given
depth
from
the
outside
you
need
to
develop
depth
and
develop
innova-on
and
crea-vity
from
within
yourself.
17.
If
you
are
just
scraping
through
ask
yourself,
why
are
you
actually
here?
For
the
future
1.
Start
a
real
webpage
with
a
real
domain
rather
then
just
blogs
or
other
social
network
spaces.
Have
both.
2.
If
you
take
on
a
holiday
job
and
are
thinking
to
get
a
new
camera
invest
and
get
a
full
frame
SLR
(Nikon
D600,
D700,
D800
or
Canon
5D
Mark
III
or
6D)

4. Student
Work