The document provides instructions for students to analyze a sample revision of a piece by Hillary Clinton. It asks students to: 1) Notice the extent and nature of revisions between the original and revised versions, whether minor word changes or larger additions. 2) Focus on revisions that change how the audience is addressed. 3) Identify sections that underwent major revision. Students are then asked to apply these skills of analyzing revision by developing revision plans for papers by other authors, suggesting how to address problems, better support the thesis, appeal to audiences, and what content needs more or less emphasis. The plans will be discussed in the next class.