The author made several changes to their magazine draft. They removed a red box promotion as it didn't look professional. They changed the background photo as the edited hair was noticeable. They adjusted the length and font of a faded rectangle to stretch across the top as a skyline for easier reading. They also rearranged various elements on the cover like moving barcodes, logos, and cover lines to make the layout more eye-catching.

1. What I
changed
in my third
draft

2. I removed the red
box with the
promotion as I
thought it didn’t
make the
magazine look
professional

3. I changed the
background photo
because the three
girls looked to edited
as bits of the top of
their hair were left out
during the editing
process. In my third
draft I just edited a
few minor things and
placed the image in.

4. After I removed the red circle I
changed the length of the faded
rectangle and the font to stretch
across the top like a skyline. By
doing this it made it easier to read
and a lot more professional looking
which was my aim.

5. I moved the barcode and prices over to the
left hand side of the page. I then moved the
symbols to the right except for the H
Magazine logo, I made it bigger and placed
it beside the masthead and the issue
number and date was placed at the top
beside the skyline. I think this was a smart
move as it makes the front cover more eye-
catching.

6. I moved the cover line
La Cricca across the
page facing diagonally
to make it stand out
more as it splashes
across the page. I then
moved the smaller
cover-lines about and
rotated some to make it
different and not too
straight as it looks quite
boring like that.