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Chapter 4

               Drafting

Do task 2, p 130

             Academic Language Centre
Plan
                          argumentative essay
Title: TV Can Be Good for You
TS: Television provides replacement voices that ease loneliness,
    spark healthful laughter, and even educate young children.

A. Television eases loneliness.
   TV: companion to elderly and reduces confusion and depression
   (Bondevik and Skogstad, 1998) (Evidence 1: study )
   TV reduces feelings of isolation and loneliness (New Zealand study 2005)
   (Evidence 2: study )


B. TV: positive effect on health
   Effects of laughter on health (e.g. Griffith, 1996) (Background for claim B)
   Examples of comedy programmes (Evidence for comedy on TV)
   Laughter inspired by TV as healthful as laughter by live comedy
   (Laliberte, 2003) (Evidence 1: study )


                                            Academic Language Centre
Essay plan
C. Television can educate children
1. Education television programmes: information at various
   cognitive levels
   a. Sesame Street : source of leaning (Illustration supporting claim)
1. TV can inspire imaginative play  important for children’s
   cognitive development (Thakkar et al. 2006) (Evidence : study )

D. Harm of TV
   Violent + anti-social behaviour (e.g. Reeks, 2005) (Anticipation of
   objection)
   Children cannot develop language properly by watching TV 
   need for actual interaction (Pinker, 1998) (Anticipation of objection)
   TV not an entirely positive force, but not entirely negative
   force either (Response to objections)


                             Academic Language Centre
Paragraph requirements:
A good paragraph is:
unified, i.e. it deals with one idea only,
represented in the topic sentence (usually the first)
well-developed, in that it contains enough
support for the main point in the form of
explanation, clarification, illustration
Coherent, i.e. it is logically organised and easy to
follow (it flows).
Do tasks 4, 5, 6a, 7, 11, 12, 13, 14 on pp. 133-142


                     Academic Language Centre
Paragraph coherence:
•    Linking words and phrases

•    Repetition of key words and phrases

•    Summary words

•    Use of grammatically parallel constructions

•    Use of pronouns (he, they, our, this, that, their, etc.), reference words

•     Predictable paragraph organisation
    •      Topic sentence in first position (80%)
    •      accepted to controversial, general to specific, problem – solution,
           cause –effect, etc.)

•    Sentence patterns (given – new)

•    Punctuation

                                Academic Language Centre
Coherence and summary words:
As warm surface waters flow north they cool and get
saltier which makes them denser. This denser water sinks
and returns to the south at depth. The Gulf Stream is part
of this circulation system. (= summary word).

Other examples:    phenomenon
                   method

(create your own list of summary words while reading)


                       Academic Language Centre
Linking words and phrases
• Coordinating conjunctions link two parts of the
  sentence in a neutral way, without giving extra
  emphasis to the logical connection between the
  ideas (and, or, so, but, etc.)
• Subordinating conjunctions link an independent
  clause with a dependent clause or v.v. (if, since,
  although, etc.)
• Conjunctive adverbs make the logical connection
  between two complete sentences (however, in
  fact, finally, etc.)
                    Academic Language Centre
Paragraph length
• Paragraphs should be approximately the same
  length
• The length of a paragraph depends on the
  total length of the paper




                 Academic Language Centre
Concluding paragraph:
• Organisation is the opposite of the introductory
  paragraph: specific to general
• Relates back to the thesis statement
• Summarises the main arguments without
  repeating phrases and sentences
• Offers recommendations, shows the wider
  relevance or implications

• Do tasks 28 and 29 on pp. 154-7

                    Academic Language Centre

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Ch 4 ac wr in e

  • 1. Chapter 4 Drafting Do task 2, p 130 Academic Language Centre
  • 2. Plan argumentative essay Title: TV Can Be Good for You TS: Television provides replacement voices that ease loneliness, spark healthful laughter, and even educate young children. A. Television eases loneliness. TV: companion to elderly and reduces confusion and depression (Bondevik and Skogstad, 1998) (Evidence 1: study ) TV reduces feelings of isolation and loneliness (New Zealand study 2005) (Evidence 2: study ) B. TV: positive effect on health Effects of laughter on health (e.g. Griffith, 1996) (Background for claim B) Examples of comedy programmes (Evidence for comedy on TV) Laughter inspired by TV as healthful as laughter by live comedy (Laliberte, 2003) (Evidence 1: study ) Academic Language Centre
  • 3. Essay plan C. Television can educate children 1. Education television programmes: information at various cognitive levels a. Sesame Street : source of leaning (Illustration supporting claim) 1. TV can inspire imaginative play  important for children’s cognitive development (Thakkar et al. 2006) (Evidence : study ) D. Harm of TV Violent + anti-social behaviour (e.g. Reeks, 2005) (Anticipation of objection) Children cannot develop language properly by watching TV  need for actual interaction (Pinker, 1998) (Anticipation of objection) TV not an entirely positive force, but not entirely negative force either (Response to objections) Academic Language Centre
  • 4. Paragraph requirements: A good paragraph is: unified, i.e. it deals with one idea only, represented in the topic sentence (usually the first) well-developed, in that it contains enough support for the main point in the form of explanation, clarification, illustration Coherent, i.e. it is logically organised and easy to follow (it flows). Do tasks 4, 5, 6a, 7, 11, 12, 13, 14 on pp. 133-142 Academic Language Centre
  • 5. Paragraph coherence: • Linking words and phrases • Repetition of key words and phrases • Summary words • Use of grammatically parallel constructions • Use of pronouns (he, they, our, this, that, their, etc.), reference words • Predictable paragraph organisation • Topic sentence in first position (80%) • accepted to controversial, general to specific, problem – solution, cause –effect, etc.) • Sentence patterns (given – new) • Punctuation Academic Language Centre
  • 6. Coherence and summary words: As warm surface waters flow north they cool and get saltier which makes them denser. This denser water sinks and returns to the south at depth. The Gulf Stream is part of this circulation system. (= summary word). Other examples: phenomenon method (create your own list of summary words while reading) Academic Language Centre
  • 7. Linking words and phrases • Coordinating conjunctions link two parts of the sentence in a neutral way, without giving extra emphasis to the logical connection between the ideas (and, or, so, but, etc.) • Subordinating conjunctions link an independent clause with a dependent clause or v.v. (if, since, although, etc.) • Conjunctive adverbs make the logical connection between two complete sentences (however, in fact, finally, etc.) Academic Language Centre
  • 8. Paragraph length • Paragraphs should be approximately the same length • The length of a paragraph depends on the total length of the paper Academic Language Centre
  • 9. Concluding paragraph: • Organisation is the opposite of the introductory paragraph: specific to general • Relates back to the thesis statement • Summarises the main arguments without repeating phrases and sentences • Offers recommendations, shows the wider relevance or implications • Do tasks 28 and 29 on pp. 154-7 Academic Language Centre