1. Mast Head: It’s visible but not clear
enough for the reader to recognise
immediately where and what the mast
head was. The different font of each Layout: The
letter is very un-presentable but they design on the
could also represent the messy font page is portrait
that young children have. Therefore and the page is
this must a primary school. The ripped paper on the outside from a text
portrays the learning of young children book. This
and the stages of learning and drawing. shows that it’s
a school and it
could also
represent that
it’s a child’s
school because
as an older
person we
know that we
no longer use
lined paper.
This make the
front of the
magazine look
young and
childish.
Long shot show the whole
school. All three images re
slanted and the colour
The border of contract and brightness are all
the outside of different. This makes the
the image is magazine look messy, not
the same as clear and poor.
the
masthead.
What does this badge represent? A
student? The school? It’s unclear and
small therefore we don’t know why
there’s a logo in the middle of the page
and what the name of the school is.
The date has just been randomly placed on
the page. How would a reader, reading this in
2009 know that this magazine was from 2008.

2. Mast Head: It’s visible but not clear
enough for the reader to recognise
immediately where and what the mast
head was. The different font of each Layout: The
letter is very un-presentable but they design on the
could also represent the messy font page is portrait
that young children have. Therefore and the page is
this must a primary school. The ripped paper on the outside from a text
portrays the learning of young children book. This
and the stages of learning and drawing. shows that it’s
a school and it
could also
represent that
it’s a child’s
school because
as an older
person we
know that we
no longer use
lined paper.
This make the
front of the
magazine look
young and
childish.
Long shot show the whole
school. All three images re
slanted and the colour
The border of contract and brightness are all
the outside of different. This makes the
the image is magazine look messy, not
the same as clear and poor.
the
masthead.
What does this badge represent? A
student? The school? It’s unclear and
small therefore we don’t know why
there’s a logo in the middle of the page
and what the name of the school is.
The date has just been randomly placed on
the page. How would a reader, reading this in
2009 know that this magazine was from 2008.

3. Mast Head: It’s visible but not clear
enough for the reader to recognise
immediately where and what the mast
head was. The different font of each Layout: The
letter is very un-presentable but they design on the
could also represent the messy font page is portrait
that young children have. Therefore and the page is
this must a primary school. The ripped paper on the outside from a text
portrays the learning of young children book. This
and the stages of learning and drawing. shows that it’s
a school and it
could also
represent that
it’s a child’s
school because
as an older
person we
know that we
no longer use
lined paper.
This make the
front of the
magazine look
young and
childish.
Long shot show the whole
school. All three images re
slanted and the colour
The border of contract and brightness are all
the outside of different. This makes the
the image is magazine look messy, not
the same as clear and poor.
the
masthead.
What does this badge represent? A
student? The school? It’s unclear and
small therefore we don’t know why
there’s a logo in the middle of the page
and what the name of the school is.
The date has just been randomly placed on
the page. How would a reader, reading this in
2009 know that this magazine was from 2008.

4. Mast Head: It’s visible but not clear
enough for the reader to recognise
immediately where and what the mast
head was. The different font of each Layout: The
letter is very un-presentable but they design on the
could also represent the messy font page is portrait
that young children have. Therefore and the page is
this must a primary school. The ripped paper on the outside from a text
portrays the learning of young children book. This
and the stages of learning and drawing. shows that it’s
a school and it
could also
represent that
it’s a child’s
school because
as an older
person we
know that we
no longer use
lined paper.
This make the
front of the
magazine look
young and
childish.
Long shot show the whole
school. All three images re
slanted and the colour
The border of contract and brightness are all
the outside of different. This makes the
the image is magazine look messy, not
the same as clear and poor.
the
masthead.
What does this badge represent? A
student? The school? It’s unclear and
small therefore we don’t know why
there’s a logo in the middle of the page
and what the name of the school is.
The date has just been randomly placed on
the page. How would a reader, reading this in
2009 know that this magazine was from 2008.