2. I started with
the title and
the logo.
I got feedback
from the 9
other people
on my
title, overall the
feedback was
good so no
changes were
made.

3. I added a red
background
I added a bar
code
I added a grey tint
which fades from
the side.

4. Bar code has been
Fade has been brightened
reduced slightly
Puff has been
Title and logo added
has been made
smaller and put
Secondary artists
into the corner
has been inserted
of the
above the
magazine
magazine title.
They have been
Red theme has
coloured in a
been pushed to
lighter red to
the side and
further symbolise
made smaller
their secondary
role in the
magazine, the last
Headline and a artist has been
subheading has written in black to
been added become more
visible.

5. Removed the
box around the
title and made
the title
bigger, also
moved the title
back to the
centre
Removed theme
and all the
writing because
it did not look
professional
enough
Removed puff

6. Main image has
been added Secondary artists
names above title
has been made a
lighter colour to
make them more
Bar code has been visible
put on its side
The colour of the
title has been
darkened to match
the main image

7. ‘music to your ears’ Date and issue
slogan has been number has been
added added at the end
of the title
Floating quote has
HHB exclusive
been added
BOMAYE’
underneath the main
First headline has
artist to reinforce that
been added
it is his quote

8. Artists name has
been added above [Music money
the floating quote madness]
which is where he is Has been
added, alliteration
Hhbounce.com has
been added into
the corner

9. Main artists
name has been [music money
improved madness]
Has been
improved
Two secondary
headlines has
been added

10. More secondary
artists has been
added under class of Front cover is
2013 which means complete
they are artists of
the year
Floating quote has
been improved to
match the colour of
the main artists
name