The document discusses academic writing and specifically how to write the discussion section of a research paper. It provides examples of student feedback on figures and data presentation in a research article. It also discusses key aspects of writing an introduction, method, results and discussion section for a research paper. The document provides guidance on revising a manuscript that was rejected for a journal publication by addressing issues with the method description, results interpretation, figure formatting and language.
Academic Writing in English - Discussing your ResultsRon Martinez
In this module we present the main "ingredients" commonly found in research article discussion sections, and their connection to other sections in an article.
Academic Writing in English - Discussing your ResultsRon Martinez
In this module we present the main "ingredients" commonly found in research article discussion sections, and their connection to other sections in an article.
Critical Thinking MOD 82 PGS TOTALStart by reading and follo.docxmydrynan
Critical Thinking
MOD 8
2 PGS TOTAL
Start by reading and following these instructions:
1. Quickly skim the questions or assignment below and the assignment rubric to help you focus.
2. Read the required chapter(s) of the textbook and any additional recommended resources. Some answers may require you to do additional research on the Internet or in other reference sources. Choose your sources carefully.
3. Consider the discussion and the any insights you gained from it.
4. Create your Assignment submission and be sure to cite your sources, use APA style as required, check your spelling.
Assignment:
1. What is the difference between Physical Causal Explanations and Behavioral Casual Explanations, and how do they tie into critical thinking?
2. Name the types of explanations and how they are evaluated. Use examples from your life to support your answer.
3. What is an Inference to the Best Explanation and how does it relate to forming a hypothesis?
4. What are the definitions of aesthetic value and judgment? Use examples from your life to support your definition.
INTRODUCTION TO ETHICS
MOD 8
Start by reading and following these instructions:
1. Quickly skim the questions or assignment below and the assignment rubric to help you focus.
2. Read the required chapter(s) of the textbook and any additional recommended resources. Some answers may require you to do additional research on the Internet or in other reference sources. Choose your sources carefully.
3. Consider the discussion and the any insights you gained from it.
4. Create your Assignment submission and be sure to cite your sources, use APA style as required, check your spelling.
Assignment:
Write an essay addressing each of the following points/questions. Separate your paper into sections outlined below. Each section in your paper needs a clear heading that allows your professor to know which bullet you are addressing in that section of your paper Review the rubric criteria for this assignment.
Your final assignment is to pull together all the information within the modules 1 – 8 to complete the final submission of your topic of choice from module 1. This assignment must be thorough and completely cover the aspects outlined in module 1.
When finalizing your final assignment, please:
· Introduce the topic you chose with its definition/background,
· Explain your opinion, for or against the topic, when you started your research and analysis,
· Discuss 2-3 reasons “from scholars” in favor and against the topic
· In summary format, review your findings and provide an answer if you are for or against the issue (your opinion) and why, based on the facts your scholarly research.
Assignment Expectations
Length: 2000 – 2250 words for this assignment
Structure: Include a title page and reference page in APA style. These do not count towards the minimum word requirement for this assignment.
References: Use the appropriate APA style in-text citations and references for all resources utilized to a.
PART I – PROPOSAL(There will be 4 parts of this project, this is.docxkarlhennesey
PART I – PROPOSAL
(There will be 4 parts of this project, this is just part I)
(Don’t do the other parts yet)
Basic information:
· Length of assignment: one page
· Format: Typed in MLA format.
Directions for PART I:
Write a one-page proposal on the topic of your choice. It should answer these questions:
a. The topic are you writing about
b. Why it is a compelling ethical problem with a global scope? (briefly, why does this issue matter?)
c. What research you plan to do in writing about it
Components (There will be 4 Parts for this project)
1. Proposal (This is the one you have to do this time, don't do the others yet)
2. Annotated Bibliography (Next week)
3. Development Response
4. Final Project due
A more detailed look at each step
1. Proposal: A one-page proposal on the topic of your choice. It should answer these questions: the topic are you writing about; why it is a compelling ethical problem; why it is a global problem; and what research you plan to do in writing about it.
2. Annotated Bibliography: This part of the assignment, about 1½ pages, is a summary of the research you have done to this point. Typically, you will need three or four sources, which are a combination of informational research and of essays on ethical problems involved in the topic.
3. Development Response: This response, also about 1½ pages, is more than a rough draft. It is a self-reflexive response. That is, you will be writing about writing the essay. These topics include: what problems you think you are going to face, and how you plan to address them.
4. Final Project: The final project is the culmination of the work you have done all term. You will include all writing you have done thus far as a single document.
Notes:
1. You are responsible for choosing your own topic. I recommend putting time into the choice. I think it would save you much time and grief to find a topic that you don’t need to change between now and the next step in the assignment (Like Your Part II – Annotated Bibliography).
2. What is a “compelling ethical problem with a global scope”?
a. “Compelling”: For a topic to be compelling means that it demands the attention of others. That is, because or if it isn’t addressed, then some terrible or injustice is occurring or will occur. One way to test your topic is to ask yourself two questions: 1) Does this topic matter to me?; and 2) Do I believe that this topic should matter to other people?
b. “Ethical”: How does this issue demonstrate either a failure to fulfill an important obligation or a failure to achieve a good or better outcome?
c. “With a global scope”: The topic does not need to touch everyone in the world, but it does need to show how an issue can touch different parts of the globe or is an example of a problem that we might find in several places throughout the world. For example, one nation’s struggle with immigration might be seen in many other nations.
3. What are examples of possible topics? You will need to co ...
Připravujete svůj první vědecký článek v anglickém jazyce? Umíte si poradit s abstraktem? Rádi byste získali lepší kompetence v tom, jak by měl být článek strukturován? Potřebujete vědět, které části odborného textu jsou klíčové pro čtenáře, které pro recenzenty? Chcete se vyvarovat chyb, které se opakovaně v cizojazyčných vědeckých článcích vyskytují? Pak byl právě pro vás určen seminář, který vedl zkušený lektor akademického psaní v angličtině z Centra jazykové přípravy MU PhDr. Robert Helán, Ph.D.
Using Storytelling to Inform Design: Narrative Analysis of ER StoriesChun Wang
In this project at the Center for Human-Computer Interaction at Virginia Tech, I worked as a “coder” in a small team that applied innovative narrative analysis techniques on 78,400 lines of interview scripts with emergency room nurses, to identify faults of hospital system and user needs from healthcare practitioners.
PSY 211 Literature WorksheetThis worksheet will be completed usi.docxpotmanandrea
PSY 211 Literature Worksheet
This worksheet will be completed using all three of the articles for your chosen track and will inform the literature review section of your final project submission. Each category requires 2 to 3 sentences, but you may include more if necessary.
· In Module One, you will complete only the Article One section and submit it to your instructor for feedback.
· In Module Three, you will have to complete all three sections (Article One, Article Two, and Article Three) of this worksheet and submit it. Make sure to incorporate your instructor’s feedback from Article One.
Make sure to use the Example Literature Worksheet as a guide when working on your Module One and Module Three submissions.
Article One
Citation of Literature
[Include the citation of the reviewed resource in APA format.]
Authors’ Claims
[What claims did the authors make in the study you reviewed?]
Influence of Factors on Human Development
[What factors (physical, social, environmental) influenced development in the study? Describe those factors and discuss which ones had positive influences and which ones had negative influences.]
Historical Significance
[Explain how the article’s findings affect the historical evolution of developmental psychology. What conclusions did you reach about developmental psychology from the article?]
Research Methods and Design
[What were the specific methods used to address the authors’ research question? What type of research design was used and how was it used to conduct the research?]
Ethics
[How were ethics addressed in the studies? Were the studies conducted ethically? Why or why not? How do they fit in with the view of ethics over the history of human development?]
Article Two
Citation of Literature
[Include the citation of the reviewed resource in APA format.]
Authors’ Claims
[What claims did the authors make in the study you reviewed?]
Influence of Factors on Human Development
[What factors (physical, social, environmental) influenced development in the study? Describe those factors and discuss which ones had positive influences and which ones had negative influences.]
Historical Significance
[Explain how the article’s findings affect the historical evolution of developmental psychology. What conclusions did you reach about developmental psychology from the article?]
Research Methods and Design
[What were the specific methods used to address the authors’ research question? What type of research design was used and how was it used to conduct the research?]
Ethics
[How were ethics addressed in the studies? Were the studies conducted ethically? Why or why not? How do they fit in with the view of ethics over the history of human development?]
Article Three
Citation of Literature
[Include the citation of the reviewed resource in APA format.]
Authors’ Claims
[What claims did the authors make in the study you reviewed?]
Influence of Factors on Human Development
[What factors (physical, social, environm ...
Ahmed AlhmoudiD6March 13, 2018Pre-ReflectionExperiment.docxsimonlbentley59018
Ahmed Alhmoudi
D6
March 13, 2018
Pre-ReflectionExperiment # 4: Fluidized beds Full technical laboratory/research report
I am currently enrolled in CHE 352 at Arizona State University that is instructed by Dr. Veronica Burrows and this is my 5th experiment for this class which is about fluidized beds. This full technical report is a requirement for succeeding this class. This report was originally due Tuesday 6th of march, 2018, however this day was during spring break and so it was postponed to a week later 13th of march, 2018. This is my first technical lab report that I’ll be doing for this class. This will be quite a challenge for me since I’ve been dealing with non-technical reports and team reports which requires less work that technical reports.
I started working on this lab report during spring break which is a great start for me since I always procrastinate my assignments and lab reports. This experiment is about fluidized beds and how the fluid flows through at different conditions. For this experiment, I must have some background information about how fluidized beds work and what are the characteristics that will be studied and compared to a theoretical model. The three characteristics are pressure gradient, bed expansion, and incipient fluidization. The contents of these terms will be explained throughout the report. Since this experiment is right after the packed beds experiment, the concepts behind how packed beds flow is very similar to fluidized beds flow, however in the fluidized bed tube the particles in the tube are not fixed as in the packed bed tube. Moreover, the fluid that goes through the bed is air instead of water. Those are the only two differences between those two experiments.
After completing 3 lab reports and two assignments I feel more confident about formatting the reports as per the assignment formatting document that was given to us at the beginning of the semester. For this report I will be using EXCEL to plot and analyze my data for the results section and this shouldn’t take me more time because I’ve dealt with this a few times with my other lab reports. Also, I will be using 3D paint to draw my setup for the experiment to include in the materials and apparatus section.
The particles inside the bed will start moving around at a certain flow rate. This is the incipient fluidization. At this minimum flow rate, there will be a minimum fluidization velocity that will be studied. Bed expansion and pressure drops will also be analyzed later. These characteristics play a big role in packed bed reactors, for example, the minimum fluidization velocity is very important for industries because some industries will require a minimum fluidization velocity in order to achieve fluidization in their bed reactor
Post-Reflection
Experiment # 4: (Fluidized beds)
Full technical laboratory/research report
After completing this lab report I realized that this full technical report was not so bad because I started .
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1 - Oil Spill Bioremeditation LaboratoryPrior to beginning.docxcroftsshanon
1 - Oil Spill Bioremeditation Laboratory
Prior to beginning work on this assignment, read the
Oil Spill Bioremediation
investigation manual
. This lab will enable you to simulate the bioremediation of a marine oil spill.
The Process
Take the required photos and complete all parts of the lab assignment (calculations, data tables, etc.). Use the
Lab Worksheet
as a resource to complete the
Lab Report Template
. Transfer any answers and visual elements from the Lab Worksheet into the Lab Report Template. You will submit the Lab Report Template through Waypoint in the classroom.
The Assignment
Make sure to complete all of the following items before submission:
Before you begin the assignment, read the
Oil Spill Bioremediation
investigation manual
; you may also wish to review the video,
SCI207 - The Scientific Method (Links to an external site.)
.
Complete all activities using materials in your kit, augmented by additional materials that you will supply. Photograph the setup following these instructions:
When taking lab photos, you need to include in each image a strip of paper with your name and the date clearly written on it.
Use the
Lab Worksheet
as a resource to complete the
Lab Report Template
.
Must use at least two credible sources outside of the textbook and lab manual.
Submit your completed “Lab Report” via Waypoint.
2 - The Journey to Sustainability
Prior to beginning work on this final paper, review all chapters of Bensel and Carbone’s
Sustaining Our Planet
text (2020).
In this paper, you will explore what a future sustainable world might look like, and in the process of doing so, extend your previous descriptions of selected terms and explain how they may play a role in aiding us in achieving environmental sustainability on a global scale.
The Journey to Sustainability
Imagine a future (probably a long time from now) in which human beings have achieved environmental sustainability on a global scale. That means that we as a species have figured out how to maintain a lifestyle that can go on indefinitely. Humans will exist in harmony with their environment, not needing more resources than can naturally be replenished. What would such a world be like? How might we get there from here?
In this final assignment, you will play the part of science-fiction writer, imagining and describing what a sustainable Earth, inhabited by humans, might look like in the distant future. You will need to provide examples throughout to support your descriptions. You should include all the terms that you have researched during Weeks 1 through 4 of this class, underlining each term as you include it. Be sure to expand on your terms and include other concepts that you learned in the course. Provide as detailed a picture as possible of how that future world might function on a day-to-day basis. In your paper, use grammar and spell-checking programs to insure clarity. Proofread carefully prior to submitting your work. F.
Academic Writing in English - Tips on the publication process (2019)Ron Martinez
In this module, we look at a few important points that can come up during the submission process, such as taking care to avoid plagiarism flags, and what should go into a cover letter. In addition, we also provide a few tips on how to respond to reviewers' critiques.
Academic writing: the 3 Cs and authorial voice - 2019Ron Martinez
A careful look at how to make your introduction flow and read better, including how to make sure you are not hiding behind the voice of other authors when you write.
Macroeconomics- Movie Location
This will be used as part of your Personal Professional Portfolio once graded.
Objective:
Prepare a presentation or a paper using research, basic comparative analysis, data organization and application of economic information. You will make an informed assessment of an economic climate outside of the United States to accomplish an entertainment industry objective.
This slide is special for master students (MIBS & MIFB) in UUM. Also useful for readers who are interested in the topic of contemporary Islamic banking.
A review of the growth of the Israel Genealogy Research Association Database Collection for the last 12 months. Our collection is now passed the 3 million mark and still growing. See which archives have contributed the most. See the different types of records we have, and which years have had records added. You can also see what we have for the future.
This presentation includes basic of PCOS their pathology and treatment and also Ayurveda correlation of PCOS and Ayurvedic line of treatment mentioned in classics.
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How to Add Chatter in the odoo 17 ERP ModuleCeline George
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June 3, 2024 Anti-Semitism Letter Sent to MIT President Kornbluth and MIT Cor...Levi Shapiro
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3. ● Quick look at Figures used in the "Meat"
article
● What is the Discussion section supposed
to do?
● Your final assessment
Today...
4.
5. From Student "Paulo"
The article has relevant and high-impact data, but the graphical elements are
misused. In figure 1 there are numerous data that should be described in a table,
but demonstrated in graphs.
In figure 2 there is not the label with the value nor the sign if they have statistical
difference or not.
6. From Student "Maria"
From my point of view, the article has a lot of interesting data but poorly
presented. Figure 1 shows very close columns making it difficult to visualize, I
believe that data would be better visualized in a table. I like the presentation in
columns as in figure two, but I believe that some relevant information such as
significance was poorly presented. I also believe that this figure would be
unnecessary since the author shows the same information in table 1.
13. 2. Method
Men (n=4) were chosen for the experiment. After playing
basketball, each man applied two different deodorants, one
on each armpit. A young woman was recruited to judge
how pleasing the smell of each deodorant was. The female
judge smelled each armpit, each time noting her
impressions. Her final analysis was then given, based on
the notes taken.
14. 1. What were the ages of the men?
2. How long did the judge spend evaluating the
scent on each armpit?
3. Had the men showered before? With odorless
soap?
4. The men were wearing different clothes. Does
that affect odor?
5. What was the criterion used to choose the
deodorants?
6. What evaluation criteria were used, and why?
7. What were the criteria for selecting these
particular deoderants?
8. Was exercise intensity controlled for?
DISCUSSION
INTRODUCTION
METHOD
RESULT
S
15. 2. Method
Men (n=4, ages 27-39) were chosen for the experiment. After
playing basketball for ten minutes, each man applied a roll-on
and spray deodorant, one on each armpit. A young woman
was recruited to judge how pleasing the smell of each
deodorant was using the same criteria described in
Smellerson (1993). The female judge smelled each armpit for
exactly two seconds, each time noting her impressions. Her
final analysis was then given, based on the notes taken.
17. 2. Method
Men (n=4, ages 27-39) were chosen for the experiment. After
playing basketball for ten minutes, each man applied a roll-on
and spray deodorant, one on each armpit. A young woman
was recruited to judge how pleasing the smell of each
deodorant was using the same criteria described in
Smellerson (1993). The female judge smelled each armpit for
exactly two seconds, each time noting her impressions. Her
final analysis was then given, based on the notes taken.
18. 2. Method
Men (n=4, ages 27-39) were chosen for the experiment. After
playing basketball for ten minutes, each man applied a roll-on
and spray deodorant, one on each armpit. A young woman
was recruited to judge how pleasing the smell of each
deodorant was using the same criteria described in
Smellerson (1993). To control for intensity, the female judge
smelled each armpit for exactly two seconds, each time noting
her impressions. Her final analysis was then given, based on
19. 1. Introduction
There has been an alarming decline in birthrates in the
world (Alarmiston, 2017). One possible cause is a decline in
deodorant use among men (Ridikuleski, 2018). Much has
been published on the effectiveness of deodorants, yet
whether it is better to use a spray or roll-on type is still
unknown. ...
20. 1. What were the ages of the men?
2. How long did the judge spend evaluating the
scent on each armpit?
3. Had the men showered before? With odorless
soap?
4. The men were wearing different clothes. Does
that affect odor?
5. What was the criterion used to choose the
deodorants?
6. What evaluation criteria were used, and why?
7. What were the criteria for selecting these
particular deodorants?
8. Was exercise intensity controlled for?
DISCUSSION
INTRODUCTION
METHOD
RESULT
S
21. 1. What were the ages of the men?
2. How long did the judge spend evaluating the
scent on each armpit?
3. Had the men showered before? With odorless
soap?
4. The men were wearing different clothes. Does
that affect odor?
5. What was the criterion used to choose the
deodorants?
6. What evaluation criteria were used, and why?
7. What were the criteria for selecting these
particular deodorants?
8. Was exercise intensity controlled for?
DISCUSSION
INTRODUCTION
METHOD
RESULT
S
22. 1. What were the ages of the men?
2. How long did the judge spend evaluating the
scent on each armpit?
3. Had the men showered before? With odorless
soap?
4. The men were wearing different clothes. Does
that affect odor?
5. What was the criterion used to choose the
deodorants?
6. What evaluation criteria were used, and why?
7. What were the criteria for selecting these
particular deodorants?
8. Was exercise intensity controlled for?
DISCUSSION
INTRODUCTION
METHOD
RESULT
S
28. 1. What were the ages of the men?
2. How long did the judge spend evaluating the
scent on each armpit?
3. Had the men showered before? With odorless
soap?
4. The men were wearing different clothes. Does
that affect odor?
5. What was the criterion used to choose the
deodorants?
6. What evaluation criteria were used, and why?
7. What were the criteria for selecting these
particular deoderants?
8. Was exercise intensity controlled for?
DISCUSSION
INTRODUCTION
METHOD
RESULT
S
29. Main reasons articles get rejected
Belcher (2007) Bordage (2001) Sullivan (2002) McKercher
(2007)
Wrong journal X ✓ ✓ ✓
Faulty method ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓
Lack of transparency X ✓ ✓ ✓
Problems with statistics X ✓ ✓ ✓
Poor discussion ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓
Improper formatting X ✓ X ✓
Writing difficult to follow ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓
Literature review ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓
Nothing new ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓
Contribution not clear ✓ ✓ ✓ ✓
Poor English X X X X
32. Why was it rejected?
"The manuscript is interesting and it brings original ideas. However
a major revision is necessary. The methods should be described
comprehensively and not confused as it is. Details such as use of water
or not to process the mixtures are not mentioned and this is
an important point in this kind of product compositions, mainly due to
lime and phase formation; there are not characteristics of the individual
components as the authors mentioned that the materials were
characterized; the results should justify the interpretations and
conclusions, however they are just pointed out and not discussed at all.
Figures II, III and IV should be standardized (scale). Sometimes one of
the components is namely referring to paper sludge, sometimes it is
namely ETE's sludge waste, and so on. Language should be also
reviewed. Since the manuscript is concerning
to technological development it could present sample image (example:
fracture surface image). Finally, a good, very good revision in the
manuscript is necessary."
33. Why was it rejected?
"The manuscript is interesting and it brings original ideas. However
a major revision is necessary. The methods should be described
comprehensively and not confused as it is. Details such as use of water
or not to process the mixtures are not mentioned and this is
an important point in this kind of product compositions, mainly due to
lime and phase formation; there are not characteristics of the individual
components as the authors mentioned that the materials were
characterized; the results should justify the interpretations and
conclusions, however they are just pointed out and not discussed at all.
Figures II, III and IV should be standardized (scale). Sometimes one of
the components is namely referring to paper sludge, sometimes it is
namely ETE's sludge waste, and so on. Language should be also
reviewed. Since the manuscript is concerning
to technological development it could present sample image (example:
fracture surface image). Finally, a good, very good revision in the
manuscript is necessary."
34. Why was it rejected?
"The manuscript is interesting and it brings original ideas. However
a major revision is necessary. The methods should be described
comprehensively and not confused as it is. Details such as use of water
or not to process the mixtures are not mentioned and this is
an important point in this kind of product compositions, mainly due to
lime and phase formation; there are not characteristics of the individual
components as the authors mentioned that the materials were
characterized; the results should justify the interpretations and
conclusions, however they are just pointed out and not discussed at all.
Figures II, III and IV should be standardized (scale). Sometimes one of
the components is namely referring to paper sludge, sometimes it is
namely ETE's sludge waste, and so on. Language should be also
reviewed. Since the manuscript is concerning
to technological development it could present sample image (example:
fracture surface image). Finally, a good, very good revision in the
manuscript is necessary."
35. Why was it rejected?
"The manuscript is interesting and it brings original ideas. However
a major revision is necessary. The methods should be described
comprehensively and not confused as it is. Details such as use of water
or not to process the mixtures are not mentioned and this is
an important point in this kind of product compositions, mainly due to
lime and phase formation; there are not characteristics of the individual
components as the authors mentioned that the materials were
characterized; the results should justify the interpretations and
conclusions, however they are just pointed out and not discussed at all.
Figures II, III and IV should be standardized (scale). Sometimes one of
the components is namely referring to paper sludge, sometimes it is
namely ETE's sludge waste, and so on. Language should be also
reviewed. Since the manuscript is concerning
to technological development it could present sample image (example:
fracture surface image). Finally, a good, very good revision in the
manuscript is necessary."
36. Why was it rejected?
"The manuscript is interesting and it brings original ideas. However
a major revision is necessary. The methods should be described
comprehensively and not confused as it is. Details such as use of water
or not to process the mixtures are not mentioned and this is
an important point in this kind of product compositions, mainly due to
lime and phase formation; there are not characteristics of the individual
components as the authors mentioned that the materials were
characterized; the results should justify the interpretations and
conclusions, however they are just pointed out and not discussed at all.
Figures II, III and IV should be standardized (scale). Sometimes one of
the components is namely referring to paper sludge, sometimes it is
namely ETE's sludge waste, and so on. Language should be also
reviewed. Since the manuscript is concerning
to technological development it could present sample image (example:
fracture surface image). Finally, a good, very good revision in the
manuscript is necessary."
37.
38.
39. What do you think?
1. Why is the Discussion section so challenging?
2. What should the Discussion section “do”? What
are the most common “ingredients”?
44. Discussion : 6 common elements
Revisit points raised
(Intro./Results)
45. Discussion : 6 common elements
Revisit points raised
(Intro./Results)
46. Discussion : 6 common elements
Revisit points raised
(Intro./Results)
Compare with other
studies
47. Discussion : 6 common elements
Revisit points raised
(Intro./Results)
Compare with other
studies
48. Discussion : 6 common elements
Revisit points raised
(Intro./Results)
Compare with other
studies
Expand, explain,
extrapolate
49. Discussion : 6 common elements
Revisit points raised
(Intro./Results)
Compare with other
studies
Expand, explain,
extrapolate
Talk about applications
and practical implications
50. Discussion : 6 common elements
!
Revisit points raised
(Intro./Results)
Compare with other
studies
Expand, explain,
extrapolate
Talk about applications
and practical implications
51. Discussion : 6 common elements
!
Revisit points raised
(Intro./Results)
Compare with other
studies
Expand, explain,
extrapolate
Talk about applications
and practical implications
Talk about limitations
52. Discussion : 6 common elements
!
Revisit points raised
(Intro./Results)
Compare with other
studies
Expand, explain,
extrapolate
Talk about applications
and practical implications
Talk about limitations
53. Discussion : 6 common elements
!
Revisit points raised
(Intro./Results)
Compare with other
studies
Expand, explain,
extrapolate
Talk about applications
and practical implications
Talk about limitations
Talk about how the study
advances the area;
what is still needed
62. Discussion : 6 common elements
!
Revisit points raised
(Intro./Results)
Compare with other
studies
Expand, explain,
extrapolate
Talk about applications
and practical implications
Talk about limitations
Talk about how the study
advances the area;
what is still needed
115. Back to that rejection....
(A comparison, for homework on Moodle)
116. When you write your Discussion think about
1. How do your findings connect back to issues raised in the
Introduction?
2. How do your research and results compare to those of other
studies that were published previously?
3. Which findings are particularly strong/relevant?
4. What are some possible applications/implications of your
data/results?
5. What are some of the limitations of your study? (Reflect critically
on your Method.)
6. What is the main contribution of your research? How does it help
your field of study advance?
7. What directions for further research are advanced by your study?