letter

1. ©opyright Heroes
Film house
Baldock, Herts SG7 6DZ
Web: www.copyrightheroes.co.uk
14th October 2014
Dear Michael and James,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 14th October. It was a good insight into your
progress and ideas so far considering how you can help address the problem of digital piracy and intellectual
property.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had some good understanding of the task, with a well
planned presentation and evidence of audience research. There were some good links to the brief
throughout the presentation, which was pleasing to see our aims being considered.
To be successful, we need more detail about your plans for your own campaign as part of our bigger project.
We need to see your target audience being understood clearly and detailed ideas for your products, with
reasons as to why these ideas are most suitable for your target audience.
Overall, I feel that the presentation had potential, with some links to the task and brief.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the advice given here and the
feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the development of your campaign and
some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Sincerely,
ESim
On behalf of Copyright Heroes.