letter

1. ©opyright Heroes
Film house
Baldock, Herts SG7 6DZ
Web: www.copyrightheroes.co.uk
14th October 2014
Dear Tom, Sanad and Harry :
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 14th October. It was a good insight into your
progress and ideas so far considering how you can help address the problem of digital piracy and intellectual
property.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had some understanding of the task, with some clear
ideas and a fairly well organised presentation. You also made some good comments about the survey and
results, along with the issues that the results raised.
I did, however feel that you need to make closer links to the brief as there was little comment on how you
will meet the aims of our project.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was fine, although maybe some better planning and preparation would
make it even more professional and successful. Tom needs special smention for his obvious understanding of
the task and excellent presentation skills.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the advice given here and the
feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the development of your campaign and
some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Sincerely,
ESim
On behalf of Copyright Heroes.