2. • I uploaded the
Documentary and
Radio Trailer to
YouTube & Facebook,
so members of the
public could give me
feedback on the
production work.
• The comments were
fairly positive with
some constructive
criticism.
Uploading
3. Feedback
• As you can see from the comment, the person overall liked the
documentary but felt the voice could have been a bit more energetic.
• I partly disagree with this comment as I believe we used the correct
codes & conventions with the voice over.
• I don’t agree with the comment about it being on BBC3 I believe I
could have been published on either BBC3/ Channel 4 and it would
of appealed to both target audiences.
4. Feedback
• This is a comment from someone who would be classed as are
target audience.
• As you can see from the comment, he has talked about how the
documentary has effected how he feels about tattoo’s which was a
main aim of mine.
• He also talks about the cutaways and how they are smooth,
therefore crediting the editing.
5. Feedback
• Here someone commented
on the music choice, which
was mentioned quite
regularly.
• People explained how it
fitted in with the theme of
the documentary.
• The cutaways were again
mentioned in this
comment.
• I believe the use of the
images showing when the
interviewees were talking
has been effective and the
audience feedback has
shown this.
6. Feedback
I received feedback from fellow pupils, these were some of comments
received:
• “The fact you actually filmed people getting tattoo’s made the documentary
look more professional and interesting”.
• “You choose good music”.
• “You included all the required codes & conventions”.
• “The voice over information was relevant and interesting”.
• “Good jump cuts on the tattoo artist interview”.
• “There was an equal amount of information and cutaways”.
