3. What have I learnt from my Feedback?
• From reading my feedback I have learnt that I have conformed to the
conventions of the pop genre
• I have used continuity and house style well
• I have chosen good edits and effects
• Used the correct images
• Used performance well
4. Feed back from target audience who don’t do
media
Video:
• Pro – Dance suited the whole song, the talking
part at the end with the featuring artist was
effective as it kept us engaged as it kept flicking
back to the dancers.
• Con – Personally, I think the boys should have
been in military outfits rather than joggers to add
to the whole theme.
• Pro- I believe that overall the music video was
very good, the words in the music and meaning
behind the song showed through the dance
preformed.
• Con- I do believe that the slow part of the music
video was slightly messy, the people didn’t do
the same dance throughout this part and I
believe it would have looked better if this was
the case.
• Pro- I thought the overall dance was very good
and the dance fitted well with the song witch
was very engaging.
• Con- I think that at some point not all the
dancers were in time with each other.
Digi Pack:
• Pro: I like the front cover effect
because it suite the genre and
is eye catching
• Con: I don’t think the CCTV
picture fits in with the rest of
the digi pack
• Pro: gives a good idea of what
the video is about
• Con: hard to read the writing
• Pro: all the dancers in the
video are on the case this
makes it more capturing
• Con: it is a bit of repetitive
Magazine Advert:
All gave the same feedback
general here is what wads
said
• Pro: font good, eye
catching, colour scheme
good, bold
• Con: should change the
new single font, a lot to
look at
I felt like I need some audience
feedback from non media student
as most of my social media
feedback is from students who do
media
5. Analysis of feedback
Ancillary texts:
• Most of the feedback mainly said was similar for example:
• It was effect, bold and stands out, talking about images and text
• There is continuity
• Most people liked the font, linked with my army theme
• I have followed conventions for a digi pack and my genre
• Images I chose was good
• However not many people liked the CCTV image
6. What did I do to appeal to my target audience and
how did I learn from my audience feedback?
• To appeal to my target audience I followed conventions of a pop
genre and looked at what things pop artists do. I looked a lot at little
mix as I know lot about them, I have seen them live and I choose
there song for my music video. I looked at the way they lay there Digi
packs out and what they add to there adverts. I watched salute and
followed the fast editing. I then stuck to bright colours as that is a
convention of pop and I made everything outgoing and eye catching.
• I learnt from my feedback that I have done this well.
