1. What have you learned from
your audience feedback?
Question 3
2. Comments
• ‘I like the video but it could be improved by retaking some of the
shots to make it look professional’
• I agree with this comment, some of the shots were not taken with the
amount of care that I hoped, but even with these shots that aren’t as
good as the other the video still shows the story of Isaac, Holly and
Oscar correctly.
3. Comments
• ‘The advertisement is a little bare of stuff, though it does stay
consistent with the digipack and the music video, in relation to setting
and location.’
• I agree that the advertisement was a little bare, and I see the problem
with that now, but I did try to create a simplistic advertisement,
though I may have made it a little bit too simplistic.
4. Questions
• ‘Do you think that the products work well together and look alike?’
• ‘Yes, the setting stays the same throughout each of the products and
you can easily tell the same setting has been used.’
• ‘I think the use of Louis in the digipack and the advertisement and
then not in the video is a little weird but I can work with it.’
• ‘I think they work relatively well together, there could be some
improvements but its good overall.’
5. Questions
• ‘What do you think could be improved about my coursework?’
• ‘The video could be improved greatly, there are a lot of shots that
should be retaken because they are not what they could be.’
• ‘The cutting out of the images could have been improved, the spine
of the digipack has a different picture on it, and if you look closely
then you can see that it doesn’t really fit.’
• The advertisement could have a bit more on it, like a release date.’
6. Questions
• ‘What did you like about my coursework?’
• ‘I like the advertisement because of how happy both Isaac and Louis
are in it, it makes me think that it is a happy place to be’
• ‘The advertisement was good, I liked how simplistic it was’
