this is the first draft of my script for my opening sequence

1. Lost Boy
By
Olivia Davis
Fine arts college

2. 1 INTRTITLE 1
Distributor
Title of movie
Music playing
2 EXT. FOREST. DAY 2
Flashing continuously between black screen and clip of
young boy ,wearing casual clothes and with brown hair,
running through a forest. Keep changing camera angle and
shot sizes: zooming in and out , moving up and down the
boys body. Show cut on face indicate cold weather from
clothing. Boy keeps looking back.
Only sound is heavy breathing
3 MONTAGE. NEWSPAPER. INTERTITLE 3
Newspaper articles. Focusing on a missing boy
Intertitles: actors names in alphabetical order
casting
Music playing in background
4 INT. INTERVIEW. DAY. FAMILY HOME. KITCHEN 4
Interview between parents and news reporter, parents
dressed in casual clothes,jeans and t shirt, looking very
tried and visibly distressed, no makeup. Talking about how
the boy got lost and describing location they were staying
in, forest, cold, dark etc.
Reporter is behind the camera, not seen just heard asking
questions.
mother: we were climbing in the forests when massive winds
began to pick up and fog appeared.
NO music just the interview
5 EXT. FOREST. DAY 5
Back to showing boy running through forest, show him
speeding up.
Only heavy breathing again

3. 2.
6 INTERTITLE. BLACK SCREEN 6
Costume desinger
Production supervisor
Music
7 MONTAGE NEWSPAPER. INTERTITLE 7
more newspaper articles, highlighting its been 2 weeks and
the boy still hasn’t been found. Articles showing reward
if boy is found. Show images of the abandoned log cabin
(blurred images)
Intertitles: executive
music
editor
Music
8 INTERVIEW 8
Carrying on with interview between parents and news
reporter, reporter begins questioning parents as to why
they chose to stay there, seemingly becoming suspicious.
mother: one minute he was here, one minute he was gone
interviewer: has he ever got lost before?
father: no
NO music, jut interview
9 EXT. FOREST. DAY 9
Show boy falling over
Heavy breathing, sound of boy falling
10 INTERTITLE. BLACK SCREEN 10
Production designer
Photographer
Music

4. 3.
11 MONTAGE. FAMILY PHOTOS . SHOWN STREWN ACROSS TABLE. 11
Family photos, showing boy with parents and with friends.
Music
12 INTERVIEW 12
Close up of father begging for the boy to come home and to
be safe.
mother: we just want our boy to come home
father: its been 2 weeks now, if anyone sees him please
tell the police
No music, just interview
13 INTERTITLE. BLACK SCREEN 13
Co producer
Producer
Director
Music
14 INTERVIEW 14
Close up of mother crying.
NO music just sound of crying
15 EXT. FOREST. DAY 15
Boy falling over and blacking out. Camera zooms in seeming
to show he has been caught by what he was running from.
beeping noise and then sound fades to nothing as he blacks
out
As camera zooms in hear evil laughing coming from behind
camera