Finished story board all together

Shot
No. 1

Type of shot, movement
and angle.
Establishing shot – set the
scene, which leads into a
dolly zoom onto the
stage.

Black and white effect
Shot
No. 2

and angle.
Long shot of the stage
with the band performing
the song for 2 lines.

Editing notes

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-enscene.
The sound playing will be the song; Mr Brightside. The
beginning of the song is an instrumental which is just
a guitar playing. The lighting will be artificial light.
Stage.

Lyric:
Introduction
The sound playing will be the song; Mr Brightside.
The lyrics would have started by now. The Mise-enscene for this part the band will be wearing a shirt and
tie, the band members will be wearing a black tie but
the lead singer will be wearing a red tie to link up with
the narrative. The lighting will be artificial light.

Lyrics:

Coming out of my cage
And I’ve been doing just fine

6
seconds

3
seconds

Shot
No. 3

and angle.
Long shot of Guy A
standing on the field.

Editing notes
Shot
No. 4

Lyric:
and angle.
Point of view shot of him
looking at the picture.

Editing notes

The narrative begins and this introduces Guy A with
him being on the field. The Mise-en-scene for this shot
will have Guy A wearing stereotypical geeky clothes.
The lighting will be natural light as its outdoors.

Gottagotta be down

The lighting will be natural light.
This shot will show the geeky boy standing on the field
looking at a picture of the girl.

Lyric:

1.5
seconds

Because I want it all

1.5
seconds

Shot
No. 5

and angle.
Close up of the lead
singers face to show
emotion whilst singing on
the stage.

Black and white effect to show that it’s a flash back

Shot
No. 6

Lyric:

and angle.
Two shot to show both
Guy A and his girlfriend
on his first date (this is
past tense)

Black and white effect to show that it’s a flash back

The lead singer will be wearing a shirt and tie and
singing into the Mic. The lighting will be artificial light.

It started out with a kiss
How did it end up like this?

This will be based at the park as it is where Guy and
the Girl first meet.
The mise-en-scene in this shot will show the girl
wearing casual clothes and the boy wearing a shirt
tucked into his trousers and braces attached to his
trousers to give the stereotypical “geek” look.

Lyric:

3
seconds

It was only a kiss

1.5
seconds

Shot
No. 7

and angle.
Another close up of the
lead singer to show
frustration on his face

Shallow focus will be used so all concentration is on the
lead singer who will be located in the centre of the screen
Shot
No. 8

Lyric:

and angle.
The shot used here will
be a long shot to show
the natural surroundings.
It’s also used so we can
show the band walking
past the narrative.

Editing notes

This shot the colour will be artificial light, the blurred
out background will be black and we will have a spot
light on the lead singer, so all the focus is on him. The
mise-en-scene on this clip will still be the shirt and tie
but as it’s a close up the most we will see will be the
collar of his shirt.

1.5
seconds

It was only a kiss

Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en3
scene.
seconds
In this part of the song its where the narrative and the
band clash; Boy A and the girl will be walking down
the road and the band will come from the opposite
direction where they will walk past, nobody in the
shot will take notice of each other so it’s more natural.
The lighting on this part of the song will be natural
lighting.
The band members will be wearing T-Shirt and Jeans
to show they are “cool”.
Lyric: : Now I’m falling asleep
And she’s calling a cab

Shot
No. 9

and angle.
The shot used here will
be another long shot to
show the similarity from
the shot before to this
shot, however this one
will be based at the park

This part of the song is very similar to the shot before
where the narrative and the band will clash, however
this is when we are introduced to Guy B. we have
based this in the park because she meets Guy B in the
same place she first met Guy A. in this shot as the
band members will walk by again.
The mise-en-scene in this shot will show the girl
wearing the same clothes from when she met Guy A
and the Guy wearing casual clothes (polo and skinny
jeans).
Lyric:
While he’s having a smoke

1.5
seconds

and angle.
A mid shot to show the
rest of the band not
taking any notice and
carrying on but the lead
singer will stop and turn
as he has noticed.

This shot shows the rest of the band members carry
on walking but the band member stopped with his
head turned looking at the narrative.
The lighting will be natural.
The band members will be wearing the same clothes
as the shot before

1.5
seconds

Editing notes

Shot
No. 10

Shallow focus, so the background is blurred so the lead
singer stands out more but we can still see that the other
members haven’t noticed.

Lyric:And she’s taking the drag

Shot No.

Mid shot of the band
playing in the MPR,
main focus is Matt with
perhaps the rest of the
band seen in the
background.
Straight on.

Editing notes
Cut to next shot.
Shot No.
12

Editing notes
Make sure that the two lines ‘And it’s all in my head / but
she’s touching his’ and the next shot of ‘chest now’ flow
seamlessly.

A

‘Now they’re going to bed / And my stomach is sick’

Close-up of Matt
pointing at his head to
signify the lyrics in a
straight on angle.

11

Mr Brightside will be playing in the background. Music
Practice room. Standard colour. Bright lighting so that
everyone is seen. Mise-en-scene will be white t-shirt
and dark coloured jeans, with instruments so that it
looks realistic.

looks realistic.

A

‘And it’s all in my head / but she’s touching his’

Frame
duration
5 sec

Frame
duration
4 sec

Shot
No.

Close up / P.O.V shot of
Lauren placing her hand
on guy B. Straight on
angle.

Editing notes
Shot
No.
14

Editing notes

AB

‘Chest’

Close up of Lauren
looking up at guy B
although he is not seen,
so it’s somewhat his
P.O.V. High angle so that
it’s like he’s looking
down at her.

13

Mr Bright side playing in the background. Location is
Codsall Park. Natural lighting – daylight. Lauren
wearing casual clothes with the colour red
incorporated somehow. Guy B in casual everyday
clothes.

Mr Bright side playing in the background. Location is
Codsall Park. Natural lighting – daylight. Lauren
wearing casual clothes with the colour red
incorporated somehow. Guy B in casual everyday
clothes.

AB

‘Now / He takes off her’

Frame
duration
0.5 sec

Frame
duration
2

Shot
No.

Long shot of Jordan
playing guitar in time to
the song, Movement of
his head in time to the
beat.

Editing notes
Shot
No.
16

Editing notes

AB

‘dress now’

Close-up of singer
looking straight into the
camera to signify the
lyrics in a straight on
angle.

15

looks realistic.

looks realistic.

AB

‘Let me go’

Frame
duration
0.5 sec

Frame
duration
3 sec

Shot
No.

Mid shot of Lauren dancing
with a crowd smiling. She
brings out her phone and
holds it up as if she is
recording the band’s
performance.

17

Editing notes
Match on action
Shot
No.

Mr Brightside will be playing in the background.
Location is in the crowd. Standard colour. Bright
lighting so that everyone is seen, but not as bright as
the band on stage. Lauren will be wearing a red
dress or to that effect.

Short instrumental break

Mid shot of Lauren from
behind with her arms in
the air so we can see that
she is filming the band. The
band is seen on stage
performing.

18

Editing notes
Match on action

Frame
duration
7 sec

Location is in the crowd. Standard colour. Bright
the band on stage. Lauren will be wearing a red
dress or to that effect. The band will be wearing
black trousers, white shirt and red or black tie with
instruments so that it looks realistic.

AAB

‘Cause I just can’t look’

Frame
duration
2 sec

Shot
No.

Close – up of the singer in a
straight on angle, looking
down the lens.

Location is the main stage. Standard colour. Bright
lighting so that everyone is seen. The band will be
wearing black trousers, white shirt and red or black
tie with instruments so that it looks realistic.

AB

‘It’s killing me’

playing the song.

lighting so that everyone is seen. The band will be
wearing black trousers, white shirt and red or black
tie with instruments so that it looks realistic.

AB

‘And taking control

19

Editing notes
Shot
No.
20

Editing notes

Frame
duration
5 sec

Frame
duration
7 sec

Shot
No.

2-shot of Lauren and guy A
hugging

Location is outside somewhere quiet. Standard
colour. Bright, natural lighting as it’s daytime. Lauren
will be wearing the same clothes as before, when
she met up with the other guy B. Guy A will be
dressed casually.

B

‘Jealousy’

Close-up of guy A still
hugging her, but looking
upset and annoyed
because he know she
cheated.

dressed casually.

B

‘Turning saints into the sea’

21

Editing notes
Match on action
Shot
No.
22

Editing notes – Match on Action

Frame
duration
2 sec

Frame
duration
4 sec

Shot
No.

playing in the MPR with the
band playing along to the
song.
Straight on.

Editing notes
hot
No.
24

Editing notes
Links back to the shot earlier.

B
2-shot of Lauren and
guy A hugging, but guy
A pushes her away in
time with the word
‘Alibis’

23

Music Practice room. Standard colour. Bright lighting
so that everyone is seen. Mise-en-scene will be
white t-shirt and dark coloured jeans, with

‘Swimming through sick lullabies’
dressed casually.

B

‘Choking on your alibis’

Frame
duration
4 sec

Frame
duration
5 sec

Shot
No.

Long shot of the band
playing on the stage,
straight on angle. Singer
brings up his hand as if
pointing to himself.

Editing notesMatch on action of singer bringing up his hand to
point to himself.
Shot
No.
26

Editing notes – Match on action

B

‘But it’s just the price’

Mid shot of singer
looking down the lens in
a straight on angle, with
Joe to the right of him.

25

lighting so that everyone is seen, but not as bright
as the band on stage. The band will be wearing

lighting so that everyone is seen, but not as bright
as the band on stage. The band will be wearing

B

‘I pay’

Frame
duration
3 sec

Frame
duration
2 sec

Shot
No.

playing in the MPR,
straight on angle.


Editing notes

B
Long shot of Lauren and
Guy B holding hands and
looking into each other’s
eyes, Guy A comes
around the corner and
pushes Guy B away in
anger. He then storms of
camera.

‘Destiny is calling me’
Frame
duration
colour. Bright, natural lighting as it’s daytime. Lauren 5 sec
dressed casually.

Editing notes

B

‘Open up my eager eyes’

27

Shot
No.
28

Frame
duration
4 sec

Shot
No.

Close-up of Matt playing
in the MPR, straight on
angle with him looking
down the lens.

29

Editing notes
Shot
No.
30

Editing notes

Frame
Music Practice room. Standard colour. Bright lighting duration
4 sec

B
Mid shot of Guy A and
Lauren arguing.

‘Cause I’m Mr Brightside’
colour. Bright, natural lighting as it’s daytime,
perhaps darker than the other shots. Lauren will be
wearing the same clothes as before (casual attire,
not the dress). Guy A will be dressed casually.

Instrumental

Frame
duration
1 sec

Mid shot of Alistair
playing drums.

Shot
No.
31

Editing notes
Shot
No.

Instrumental
Mid shot of Joe playing
bass guitar with Matt
dancing/moving next to
him.

32

Editing notes

Frame
1 sec

Frame
2 sec

Instrumental

Shot
No.

Mid shot of Jordan
playing guitar.

33

Editing notes
Shot
No.

Editing notes

Frame
duration
1 sec

Instrumental
Mid shot of Guy A
stalking Lauren. Looking
at pictures of Lauren
whilst on the field.

34


Mr Brightside will be playing in the background. Field
for location to show his loneliness and solitary.
Bright, daylight. Guy A will be wearing casual attire.

Instrumental

Frame
duration
3 sec

Shot
No.

Close-up of Guy A’s facial
expression looking
pained and upset. Low
angle so the audience
look up at him.

35

Editing notes
This field shot will be constantly referred to throughout the
narrative.
Shot
No.

Editing notes

Frame
duration
3 sec

Instrumental

playing on the stage,
straight on angle.

36

Mr Brightside will be playing in the background. Field
for location to show his loneliness and solitary.
Bright, daylight. Guy A will be wearing casual attire.

the band on stage. The band will be wearing black
trousers, white shirt and red or black tie with

Instrumental

Frame
duration
3 sec

Shot
No.

playing on the field,
straight on angle.

Mr Brightside will be playing in the
background. Field for location as the band
play. The lighting will be natural daylight.
They will be wearing black trousers, white
shirt and red or black tie with instruments
so that it looks realistic.

A

‘Coming out of my cage/ and’

playing on the field,
straight on angle.

Mr Brightside will be playing in the
background. Field for location as the band
play. The lighting will be natural daylight.
They will be wearing black trousers, white
shirt and red or black tie with instruments
so that it looks realistic.

A

‘I’ve been doing just fine’

37

Editing notes
Shot
No.
38

Editing notes

Frame duration
4 sec

Frame duration
3 sec

Shot
No.

Mid shot of Lauren and
Guy A arguing about her
cheating.

Indoor, secluded location as they act. The lighting
will be indoor lighting. They will be wearing the
casual clothes.

A
Long shot of Lauren
storming away from guy
A, but he pulls her back
and then lets her go
again. Links in with the
lyrics.

‘Gottagotta be down’
Indoor, secluded location as they act. The lighting
will be indoor lighting. They will be wearing the
casual clothes.

A

‘Because I want it all’

39

Editing notes
Shot
No.
40

Editing notes

Frame
duration
2 sec

Frame
duration
3 sec

hot
No.

Wide shot of the band
playing their instruments,
the angle will be straight
and there will be no
movement in the
camera.

41

Editing notes

Shot
No.

The sound playing will be the song: Mr Brightside.
This shot will be set on a field, the same place guy A
was standing earlier. The shot will have no colour
effects on it. There will be no artificial lighting on the
shot because it is set outside and will be natural. The
band will be wearing their first costume change of
the suit and tie.

A

Lyric: It started out with a kiss
How did it end up like this?
It was only a kiss.
This will be set in a quiet place somewhere like
outside a house. This will be in standard colour.
Lighting will be natural. Narrative costume will be
used here- red dress. Guy A- casual clothes.

Mid shot of Guy A in
foreground and girl in
background, Guy A
doesn’t look back and
walks away. Normal
Angle and no camera
movement. Girl mimes
the lyrics.

42

Editing notes

A

Lyric: It was only a kiss

Frame
duration
6

Frame
duration
2

Shot
No.

Two shot of Guy B and
girl watching video
filmed earlier on phone.
Girl is reluctant to do so,
and is upset knowing she
has done wrong.

43

Editing notes
Shot
No.
44

Editing notes

This shot will be set outside on a bench somewhere.
The shot will have no colour effects on it. There will
be no artificial lighting on the shot because it is set
outside and will be natural. Girl is wearing a red
dress, and guy in casual clothes.

A
Long shot of Guy A on
field beginning to ignite
the picture in his hand.
No movement and
normal angle. Throws
picture on floor and then

Lyric: Now I’m falling asleep and she’s calling a cab.
Set on the field. Colour will be standard. Lighting will
be natural as outside. Guy will wear casual clothing.

A

Lyric: While he’s having a smoke

Frame
duration
5

Frame
duration
3

Shot
No.

Wide shot of the band.
No movement and
normal angle.

Setting will be in the music practise room. Colour will
be standard. Lighting will be artificial. Band will wear
tees and black jeans.

A

Lyric: and she’s taking the drag.

45

Editing notes
Shot
No.

This shot will be a long
shot as the Girl and Guy B Setting will be in a quiet place, like a park- same area
walk away from the
where bench was. Lighting will be natural, Colour will
camera, guy B tries to put be standard. Narrative costume worn.
his arm around girl but
she shakes it off and
walks away in another
direction. Guy A will be
then seen alone on a
bench somewhere else.

46

Editing notes

A

Lyric: Now they’re going to bed
And my stomach is sick.

Frame
duration
3

Frame
duration
5

Shot
No.

Wide shot of the band.
No movement and
normal angle.


A
AB
Mid shot of the band.
Dolly shot/track across
the band in a straight on
angle.

Lyric: And it’s all in my head
But she’s touching his chest now.

AB

Lyric: He takes off her dress now let me go

47

Editing notes
Shot
No.
48

Editing notes

Frame
duration
6

Frame
duration
7

Shot
No.

Close up of the
instruments being played
in a straight on angle –
guitar.

Close up of the
instruments being played
in a straight on angle –
drum kit.

49


Lyric: INSTRUMENTAL

Editing notes
Shot
No.
50

Editing notes

Lyric: INSTRUMENTAL

Frame
duration
4

Frame
duration
5

Shot
No.

playing in a straight on
angle. Slight zoom in.

lighting. The band will be wearing black trousers,
white shirt and red or black tie with instruments so
that it looks realistic.

AB

Lyric: ‘Cos I just can’t look It’s killing me

Mid shot of Matt and Joe
singing together/looking
at each other. Straight on
angle.

lighting. The band will be wearing black trousers,
white shirt and red or black tie with instruments so
that it looks realistic.

AB

Lyric: and Taking Control

51

Editing notes
Shot
No.
52

Editing notes

Frame
duration
8

Frame
duration
6

Shot
No.

Wide shot of band
playing on field.
Throughout chorus will
be a montage of shots.

Editing notes
Shot
No.

B

Lyric: Jealousy, turning saints into the sea

Close up of guitar playing
to the song. Straight
angle and no movement.

53

Setting will be in the field. Colour will be standard.
Lighting will be artificial. Band will wear shirts and
ties.


B

Lyric: Swimming through

54

Editing notes

Frame
duration
6

Frame
duration
2

Shot
No.

Close up of drums playing
to the song. Straight
angle and no movement.

Setting will be on the stage. Colour will be standard.
ties

B

Lyric: Sick lullabies

Wide shot of band
straight angle and no
movement.


B

Lyric: Choking on your alibies

55

Editing notes
Shot
No.
56

Editing notes

Frame
duration
3

Frame
duration
5

Shot
No.

Wide shot of band
playing on the field, no
movement and straight
angle.

Editing notes
Cut to next shot.
Shot
No.
58

Editing notes

B

Lyric: But it’s just the price I pay

Guy A stands with the
burning photo and
throws it to the ground.

57

ties.

Lighting will be artificial. Guy A will wear casual
clothes.

Lyric: Destiny is calling me

Frame
duration
4

Frame
duration
4

Shot
No.

Wide shot of band with
straight angle and no
movement from camera.

Setting will be in the stage. Colour will be standard.
Lighting will be artificial. Band will wear suit and tie.

Frame
duration
7

B
Close Up of Guy A on
stage singing the lyrics.
Straight Angle no
movement.

Lyric: Open up my eager eyes
Setting will be in the stage. Colour will be standard.
Lighting will be artificial. Guy A will wear casual
clothes. Guy A will look into camera sing.

Frame
duration
4

B

Lyric: Cause I’m Mr Brightside

59

Editing notes
Shot
No.
60

Cut to next shot

Shot
No.

Close up of Girl lifting her The sound will be the song: Mr Brightside. Setting
head up to look directly
will be somewhere internal with dark lighting. Colour
down the lens. Her face is is standard. Dim lighting. Girl wearing casual clothes.
distressed and upset.
Straight on angle.

61

Editing notes
Shot
No.

Close up of Guy B lifting
his head up to look
directly down the lens.
Straight on angle.

62

Editing notes

Lyric: INSTRUMENTAL
The sound will be the song: Mr Brightside. Setting
is standard. Dim lighting. Guy B wearing casual
clothes.

Lyric: INSTRUMENTAL

Frame
duration
2

Frame
duration
2

Shot
No.

Close up of Guy A lifting
his head up to look
directly down the lens.
Straight on angle.

Close up of Alistair
playing drums in a
straight on angle.

63

The sound will be the song: Mr Brightside. Setting
is standard. Dim lighting. Guy A wearing casual
clothes.

Lyric: INSTRUMENTAL
Lighting will be natural. Band will wear shirts and
ties.

Editing notes
Shot
No.
64

Editing notes

Lyric: INSTRUMENTAL

Frame
duration
2

Frame
duration
3

Close up of Jordan
playing guitar in a
straight on angle.

Shot
No.

ties.

Frame
duration
2

65

Jordan
Editing notes
Shot
No.

Close up of Joe playing
bass in a straight on
angle.

66

Joe
Editing notes

Lyric: INSTRUMENTAL
ties.

Lyric: INSTRUMENTAL

Frame
duration
3

Shot
No.

Close up of Joe singing in
a straight on angle.

ties.

B

Lyric: But I never

Mid shot of Matt singing
in a straight on angle.

ties.

A

Lyric: I never

67

Editing notes
Shot
No.
68

Editing notes

Frame
duration
8

Frame
duration
9

Shot
No.

playing in a straight on
angle as we cut back and
forth between the
narrative and
performance.

69

Editing notes
Shot
No.
70

Editing notes


B
Mid shot of Matt singing
the last ‘I never’ and the
rest of the band doing
the final note on their
instruments.

Lyric: I never
Lighting will be natural. Band will wear shirts and ties

B

Lyric: I never

Frame
duration
9

Frame
duration
9

Shot
No.

Guy A throws the
photograph to the floor
as it is alight in a long
shot. Straight on angle.

71

Editing notes
Shot
No.

Guy A throws the
photograph to the floor
as it is alight. He walks
away.

72

Editing notes

The sound playing will be the song: Mr Brightside. Set
on the field. Colour will be standard. Lighting will be
natural as outside. Guy will wear casual clothing.

Frame
duration
4

Lyric: END OF SONG

Frame
duration
4

Lyric: END OF SONG

Shot
No.

Close up and straight on
angle as we see the
photograph burning on
the ground.

73

Editing notes
FADE TO BLACK.


Lyric:

Outro

Frame
duration
4

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