1. What went well?
Basic Feedback Sheet!
‘Love the Rizzle kicks font’
‘The photo looks really good, very creative, good ICT skills’
‘The picture in the middle draws you to see what the
magazines about’
‘Like what you wrote about the two new artists’
What don’t you like?
‘The background doesn’t really suit with the rap genre, I
think that the sort of colours should more be associated with
dark gothic/punk/rock music’
‘I don’t like the glow on the ‘when I was a youngster’ that
glow isn’t necessary’
How could this magazine advert be improved?
‘On a whole I do really like the magazine advert, if I
was to improve it in any way it would have to be
changing the background, the colours used are far to
dark and don’t really relate to rap, you should try
and use lighter colours'.