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1. Class feedback of my magazine
1. What do you think of my magazine?
It’s just as you would expect a magazine to look like, it’s well-constructed. I like the
colour scheme that was chosen, it suits the genre of the magazine, and it’s a good
thing it’s not like bright pink or colours along those lines. The images that are used
have been placed in the right places and the mast head and sub heading look good,
they look like what you would expect from a magazine.
What would you do to improve?
Well I don’t know much about magazine but I think the layout could do with some
work, I mean it looks good but it doesn’t look magazine quality good which is what I
expect you’re going for.
2. What do you think of my magazine?
I think it looks good, not great but good, the colour scheme is what you would expect
from the genre that you have chosen which is good to see. I also like the feature
article pages they look like real magazines would look, and I actually enjoyed reading
them especially the interview with the artist.
3. What do you think I could do to further improve my magazine?
Well like I said it’s good not great, you could maybe add a little bit more colours to
further add some pizzaz to the magazine. The front cover could seriously use some
more work I mean seriously it doesn’t look to professional. You need to fill in the
blank spaces on the front cover it will look better that way.
4. What do you think of my magazine?
Look wise it’s alright but the writing in the feature article is really good, I think it’s
actually quite interesting to hear about this Andrea Thomas’s life and how fame is
treating her. I really like the colour scheme it’s not too much, I also happen to like the
look of the front cover it looks how a magazine front cover would look like.

2. 5. What do you think I could do to further improve my magazine?
Well the lay out of the magazine could use some work but other than that I think it
looked good, and was interesting to actually read, you could maybe add some more to
the front cover though, don’t get me wrong it looked good but you could just add a
few more things to fill in some spaces around the image.