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MAGAZINE COVER
FEEDBACK
By Elona, Georgia, Charlie
and Angel
THE COVER
FIRST DRAFT
FEEDBACK 1- PHOTO
1. Many people thought that after learning
about our artist that the photo which we
chose to use was too serious, because the
image of our artist is suppose to be more fun
loving and enjoying life.
2. Also people further said that they thought
the photo had been over edited and looks
like the shadows that should be on her face
have been blurred and this causes her to look
like the artist has bruises on her forehead
and right eye.
3. Finally parts of the photo were pointed out as
being over stretched and therefore very
slightly out of proportion, so that needs to
be addressed, because it can make it clear
that it is not a professional cover.
It was suggested that we use
photographs more like the one above for
the main photo on the cover.
FEEDBACK 2- TEXT
1. Some of the text is not as clear to see as it could be,
especially the less bold sections of text that go across the
photo. This is cause the colour of the hair causes the text to
blend in.
2. Also the stand out quote which we used was mentioned as
not making sense and unclear as to what it was suppose to
mean, because it doesn’t relate to the cover much.
3. Finally the text box needs to be made into a even rectangle
because through the box being uneven it does not look as
professional as it could, as it needs to look slicker.
POSITIVE FEEDBACK
1. People liked how we had managed to add a fade to black in the
corners of the background that it made it look more professional,
and thought that the colours used make the cover stand out as it is
bright and vibrant, and therefore eye-catching.
2. People also liked how we had thought about and included small
details that many people forget about, such as the barcode that is
placed into the bottom corner of the cover.
3. Finally within the text on the page that you can read, the subject of
it is good and accurate as to what you would expect to find on
magazines like Billboard and this further makes the cover come
across as professional.

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Magazine Cover Feedback

  • 1. MAGAZINE COVER FEEDBACK By Elona, Georgia, Charlie and Angel
  • 3. FEEDBACK 1- PHOTO 1. Many people thought that after learning about our artist that the photo which we chose to use was too serious, because the image of our artist is suppose to be more fun loving and enjoying life. 2. Also people further said that they thought the photo had been over edited and looks like the shadows that should be on her face have been blurred and this causes her to look like the artist has bruises on her forehead and right eye. 3. Finally parts of the photo were pointed out as being over stretched and therefore very slightly out of proportion, so that needs to be addressed, because it can make it clear that it is not a professional cover. It was suggested that we use photographs more like the one above for the main photo on the cover.
  • 4. FEEDBACK 2- TEXT 1. Some of the text is not as clear to see as it could be, especially the less bold sections of text that go across the photo. This is cause the colour of the hair causes the text to blend in. 2. Also the stand out quote which we used was mentioned as not making sense and unclear as to what it was suppose to mean, because it doesn’t relate to the cover much. 3. Finally the text box needs to be made into a even rectangle because through the box being uneven it does not look as professional as it could, as it needs to look slicker.
  • 5. POSITIVE FEEDBACK 1. People liked how we had managed to add a fade to black in the corners of the background that it made it look more professional, and thought that the colours used make the cover stand out as it is bright and vibrant, and therefore eye-catching. 2. People also liked how we had thought about and included small details that many people forget about, such as the barcode that is placed into the bottom corner of the cover. 3. Finally within the text on the page that you can read, the subject of it is good and accurate as to what you would expect to find on magazines like Billboard and this further makes the cover come across as professional.