1. What have you learnt from your audience feedback? EVALUATION QUESTIONS

2. Two Types of feedback. *Facebook Comments *Asking audience though filming questionnaire. Film Questions Did you understand the story (Narrative) of our music video? What would you rate it overall out of 10? Why? Did you think anything could have been improved upon ?D&M Advertisement Q’s (Unable to ask these as D&M were completed too late) How did you find our D/M appealing? Do you think it looks like a traditional R&B album D/M? What do you think we could improve on? How much would you rate them out of 10? Why?

3. Video Feedback Links underneath of the feedback. Facebook Feedback By our target audiences referring to proper music videos shows by us using common conventions the audiences have gained a recognition between our film and others and has successfully been pulled off. This shows positive feedback from our target audience

4. Negative Feedback This comment suggested we could have used Jordan more within the story line which would of helped us with our narrative. We used the male to trigger a flashback of the girls and didn’t feel we needed him in the film until it progressed more into the narrative. Barthes argues we base our opinions on our culture we decided to change the ending of our music video because of this comment where as primarily we just used the female posting the letter and fading out. This new ending left the audience with an enigma code whether they actually get together or not to connate mystery.

5. Feedback from experienced. Having gained feedback from someone that works within media and comparing our film to there A2 Film gave us confidence with our film as our aim was for our cutting rate between frames and our editing was key went with conventions.