The document is a screenplay that tells the story of Vannesse, a girl who bullies another girl named Omelia. Omelia wishes that Vannesse would know what it feels like to be alone and invisible. Vannesse wakes up and finds herself invisible to others, with Omelia and her mother acting as if Vannesse doesn't exist. It is revealed that Omelia has given Vannesse this punishment. Later, Vannesse finds herself homeless on the street, and Omelia mocks her with her friends. The screenplay explores what happens when a bully receives their comeuppance.
2. 1.
FADE IN: EXT. STREET. DAY
Looking up at the clear blue sky covering the houses, as we
move from admiring the sky to looking down at the houses and
the cars on the street below. We are then revealed to a quiet
street with a single girl walking alone quietly with the sound
of silence screaming through the air. Tracking the young girl
until she reaches a front door of a house on the on a long
street.
INT. School. DAY
Facing the sky, we are looking up as we hear the wind running
constantly. We look down to face the front of a school is
quiet and empty on the yard. Switching to a long shot of a
long corridor, we see a girl walking alone.
Switching to a mid shot of her face then slowly zooming out,
we see another girl walking out of a class. Walking towards
her we feel the tension increase.
VANNESSE
Hey Omelia, all alone again?
She starts to laugh as Omelia ignores and carries on walking
alone down the corridor.
VANNESSE
Hey asked you a question!!
Vannesse runs to Omelia and grabs her on her arm and
pushes her hard against the wall. Looking at Omelia’s we
she her start to shake in fear as her head is down and
she shows fear in the situation.
OMELIA
I’m… I’m sorry I was rushing to
class because I am late
Vannesse
I don’t care if you had to give in your homework.When I
speak to you , you answer me no matter what, GOT IT!!!
3. 1.
OMELIA
Ye, I hear you sorry
Vannesse lets go of her and starts laughing as she walks
away.
Omelia starts to walk away as she picks up her bag. She
then starts to speak underneath her breath…
OMELIA
Im am tired of being treated like
that, she really doesn’t know how
it feels to be alone.
We are then brought to the front of the house, all the
lights are off and a car on the drive. We see a young
girl walking down the street and turning to go to this
house. She opens the door and enters the house.
INT. HOME. EVENING
Vannesse
(Saying with
excitement)
Hi Mom I’m back, how was your day?
There is no response
She closes the front door and walks towards the living
room
MOM
Is that you V?
4. 1.
VANNESSE
Ye, it is me. Are you ok?
As Vannesse opens the front room door she feels her phone
buzz. She takes it out of her coat pocket.Looking at her
phone her face drops slightly in shock as if she has seen
something sickening.
She then puts it back into her pocket, takes of her coat
and puts on a smile as she then walks into the room.
Mom
(With a hint of gladness in her voice)
I’m ok, just tired and still but I am ok how are you?
Mom is lying down on the couch, clearly looking ill as
she turns around to see her daughter coming back home
from school.
VANNESSE
Well…
(Sigh)
No mom, stay still I will come to you!!
Turning back round in pain the atmosphere changes to a sad and
tense feeling.
Mom
(Says in a soft and quiet voice)
So, how’s school
The room goes silent
5. 1.
Breaking the silent Vannesse looks at her mom and says in
a happy and energetic voice.
VANNESSE
Im going upstairs, love you
Picking up her bag, she gets up and kisses her mom on the
cheek.
Mom whispers in a soft voice
MOM
Love you too
The camera follows her from behind
Vannesse reaches her room and shuts the door. We are left
outside with door in our faces. It the starts to fade to
a black screen (slowly)
A soothing voice over of a male voice reciting is a quote
when the screen is fully back.
INT.BEDROOM.NIGHT
Vannesse is placing her phone on charge as sh goes into
be. As she gets into her bed, she falls straight asleep.
The screen goes white and then we hear Omelia’s voice in
the background.
OMELIA
I wonder how she would cope being
lone
6. 1.
INT. BEDROOM.DAY
Vannesse wakes up in a flood of light in her bed as the
morning screams her name through the outside of her
window. She stretches and get out of bed. She then starts
to get ready. We are then show QUICK and SHARP shots of
time periods where she is getting ready in the morning.
WE ARE THEN SHOWN QUCIK AND SHARP SHOTS OF TIME PERIOS
WHERE SHE IS GETTING READY IN THE MORNING.
INT.BATHROOM.DAY
Vannesse is brushing her teeth
She is in the mirror doing her hair
INT.BEDROOM.DAY
Picking out clothes
INT.STAIRS.DAY
We are then swooped to the top of the stairs as we see
her walking down the stairs heading for the kitchen as
she does every day. She is in the kitchen and starts to
make breakfast. As she calmly pours the milk into the
bowl, mom walks down stairs.
INT.KITCHEN.DAY
VANNESSE
Morning Mom, how are you?
She sees her mom standing up and cooking, looking and
feeling confused she continues to move towards the
fridge.
Mom says nothing and carries on walking to the fridge as
she is about to make breakfast
Vannesse looks confused but goes into the fridge as she
searches for food.
7. 1.
MOM
(shouting)
Vannesse wake up before your late
VANNESSE
I’m here Mom?
OMELIA
I’m coming, I’m coming
Vannesse turns around to see Emilia walking through the
door in her favourite pj’s.
VANNESSE
Omelia, why are you in my house
are you taking the mick.
Mom cuts Vannesse off
MOM
Finally, I made your favourite
OMELIA
Sorry I’m shattered from last
nights meal with you
Vannesse is now confused, looking at Omelia she doesn’t
understand what is happening
VANNESSE
I’m here,Mom, thats not me,
Vannesse!!!
Vannesse is ignored as mom and Omelia walk out of the
room and go upstairs to get changed for school and work.
Vannesse is confused and is frozen in her tracks, not
releasing that this was the start of her worse life she
will ever have.
8. 1.
EXT.OUTSIDE(Field).Day
Sharply and quickly we are brought to a blurry open field
with two girls in it. They walk towards each other and
the picture starts to become clearer.We see it is Omelia
and Vannesse. They walk up to each other, Vannesse
anxious and determined and Omelia calm and slowly.
They come face to face.
VANNESSE
What is this, why can no one see
me
Omelia starts to giggle
OMELIA
You took my confidence away from
me so I wished you would know what
it feels like to have something
taken away from you, and here we
are.
VANNESSE
What do you mean, what have I done
to you?
OMELIA
You mocked me, laughed at me, hurt
me emotionally and physically…
(Pause) you deserve what ever is
coming to you so get used to it.
Omega starts to walk away and Vannesse grabs her by the
arm. As this happens Omelia pushes Vannesse with force.
9. 1.
OMELIA
Get off me, just believe it is
going to get worse that this
We are brought through a serious of colours flashing on
the screen as the sound of cars and people talking and
rushing starts to appear.(fade in) We are then shown a
Vannesse face slightly faded. The screen goes black.
We are looking at the world through the eyes of someone
who looks like they are sitting on the floor on a
pavement. The eyes blink a couple of times as if just
waking up. The camera is arced to the front of the
person. We see that it is a homeless man alone slouching
against a wall.
VANNESSE
Whats happening why am I on the
floor.
A group of girls walk past and as they walk past, we see
that Omelia is at the front of the group in the middle.
OMELIA
EEEWW, look at that tramp
The girls starts laughing
VANNESSE
Omelia is that you?
The group of girls look in disgust
OMELIA
You don’t me!! Don’t talk to me,
your homeless.
10. 1.
Vannesse looks at her hands and realises that, she is
homeless.
Omelia looks back at Vannesse and smiles. We are then in
a case up shown Vannesse’s face as she screams at the top
of her lungs.
VANNESSE
Nooooooo!!!
The is a tilted up to the sky as the camera zooms into
the clouds
Fades to Black screen
The End
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SCENE INDEX
FADE IN: EXT. STREET. DAY 2...............................
INT. HOME. EVENING 3.....................................
INT.BEDROOM.NIGHT 5......................................
INT. BEDROOM.DAY 6........................................
INT.BATHROOM.DAY 6........................................
INT.BEDROOM.DAY 6.........................................
INT.STAIRS.DAY 6..........................................
INT.KITCHEN.DAY 6.........................................