Breaking Down the
Article Writing Process
 for New Academics
 Alison M. Youngblood, University of Central Florida
             a.youngb@knights.ucf.edu
  Melanie C. González, University of Central Florida
            m.gonzalez@knights.ucf.edu

                   TESOL 2012
                  Philadelphia, PA
Target Audience

This workshop is designed for
doctoral students, new faculty
members, and/or practitioners that
do not have a lot of experience
writing articles but need to publish
for career advancement.

                  2
Workshop Objectives

① Design a realistic writing plan to help manage the
  article writing process.

② Select an article to write/revise for submission to
  a journal.

③ Write a good abstract.

④ Break down the journal publication process.



                           3
Overview of Workshop
① Introduction to article writing process and 12-week
  writing plan
② Designing your writing plan
③ Starting your article & varying article structures
④ Writing an abstract and making a strong argument
⑤ Selecting a journal & journal review processes
⑥ Writing a letter of inquiry
⑦ Wrap-up & feedback

                                4
Let’s take a poll

Polleverywhere – Use your text-messaging
enabled phones!
What is your biggest obstacle to writing?
a)   Family/friends
b)   No time
c)   Writer’s block
d)   Not a good writer
e)   Dislike writing
f)   Intimidated

                         5
Let’s take a poll

What is your typical writing process like?
a)   Work on it a little at a time
b)   Wait till the last minute
c)   Heavy on the revision process
d)   Methodical: outline, fill-in, revise




                             6
Let’s take a poll

How do you feel while writing?
a)   Fabulous, I love writing!
b)   Stressed, this is never going to get done!
c)   Frustrated, I don’t know what to say!
d)   Neutral, it is something I have to do
e)   Good, when I have time.




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Activity 1
• There are many obstacles when trying to make writing
  a daily habit. From the obstacles discussed in our
  workshop, which ones were the most relevant to you?
  Discuss some possible solutions with your group?
Obstacles:                    Solutions:




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Designing Your Writing
        Plan
     MAKING THE COMMITMENT
Making the commitment
• Traditionally, we think of writing as a solitary
  activity.

• Working with a writing partner/writing group helps
  not only to provide a reviewer, but adds motivation

• Sign a contract (examples on following slide)

• Decide a reward & punishment
  • Rewards: new shoes, movie, tickets, etc.
  • Punishments: a week without Facebook/Twitter, no
    TV for a week, etc.

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Making the commitment
             (Belcher, 2009)

Writing Partners          Writing Group




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Designing Your Writing
        Plan
       MAKING IT A HABIT
Making it a habit
• Pick a writing site and stick to it!
  • What improvements can you make to it?

• Plotting out your time and creating a writing plan
  • Use a chart
  • Use online/mobile phone tools/apps such as
    iCal, Google calendar/reminders

• Plotting out writing tasks for each day for the span
  of plan


                            13
Activity 2

• We discussed obstacles that make it hard to write
  every day. One of the best ways to overcome
  these obstacles is to create a writing space. What
  could site could you use as your primary writing
  location? What could be a back-up writing site?
  What changes would you have to make to either
  in order to make it a productive space?




                         14
Sample 12-Week Writing
                            Plan
                           (Belcher, 2009)
• Goal is to set up
  a realistic, not
  ambitious writing
  plan!

• Think about how
  you currently
  spend your time
  and where you
  can fit in 15
  minutes of
  writing.
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Starting your article
PICKING A TEXT YOU’VE ALREADY WRITTEN




            “Look what I found in the
            dumpster! A perfectly good
            article!”
Types of academic articles in
              TESOL
Commentary*                   Discusses issues of concern in the field
                              supported by research and/or theory
                              Reviews of recent professional books, textbooks,
Book review
                              or electronic resources; check with journal sites
                              for list of books needing review
Pedagogical/Effective/Best Describes successful or promising application of
practice articles/Action   instructional practices or activities
research
Literature review article     Reviews a body of literature and/or previous
                              research on a particular topic
                              Traces the development of a certain theory,
Theoretical article
                              proposes a better theory, and criticizes the old
                              theory.
Research article:             Reports on data collected from an
quantitative, qualitative, or experiment/research project. Includes a literature
mixed methods                 review, methodology, and discussion of results.
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Picking a text you’ve already
                written
• For your consideration (Belcher, 2009):
  • Praise: has a professor said a certain paper was strong?
  • Pleasure: was there a topic you really enjoyed writing about?
  • Relevance: have you talked/written about a current debate in
    the field?
  • Research/Findings: have you performed any
    research/collected data in the field?
  • Conference presentation: have you presented on a topic at a
    professional conference?
  • Thesis: did you write a Master’s/Doctoral thesis?
  • Rejected article: did you send in an article already?

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Activity 3

• The first step to writing an article is to pick a
  project or piece of work that you already have in
  progress. Brainstorm which of your artifacts have
  potential to become articles? What article
  structure would they follow? What is your best
  option to focus your attention over the next twelve
  weeks?




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Collaborating with others
Consider co-writing with:        Tips for collaborating
 • A peer                        • Determine a file naming
                                   system e.g.
 • A professor                     YEAR_MONTH_DAY_AUTHOR
                                   INITIALS_TITLE.docx

 • A mentor
                                 • Save ALL drafts
 • A practicing teacher
                                 • Never have two authors
                                   working at the same time

                                 • Take advantage of others’
                                   strengths

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Writing an Abstract for
      Your Article
      THE DO’S AND DON’TS
Writing a good abstract

• Now that you’ve selected a topic, let’s examine
  what comprises a good abstract

• An abstract can serve as a general outline to keep
  your writing focused




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Elements of a good abstract
                  (Belcher, 2009)


• State why you are writing about this topic –a gap
  in literature? Debate in the field? A persistent
  problem?

• State what the article is about

• State your methods

• State your results/findings

• State your conclusions/argument

• Think of all the keywords possible
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What to avoid in an abstract
                  (Belcher, 2009)


Avoid including the following items in your abstract:
• Just introducing the topic
• Detailing data, results, significance
• Your hopes for the article
• Footnotes or citations
• Quotations
• Abbreviations, symbols, or acronyms

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Activity 4

• It is important to understand how an article’s
  structure affects the abstract. Look at the four
  example abstracts below and determine what kind
  of article structure they represent.




                        25
Activity 5

• Once you have completed the description and
  summary activities related to your article, write a
  single sentence that explains what your article is
  about.




                          26
Example of Lit
            ReviewArticle
• Folse, K., Gonzalez, M., & Youngblood, A. (in
  review). Five suggestions for creating a rich lexical
  environment in any classroom.
  • Initial stage: literature review from course
  • Pick a journal & inquire about topic
  • Revise according to journal guidelines
  • Submit!


                          27
Getting It Published
 MATCHING YOUR ARTICLE TO A JOURNAL
Good News about Publishing

• Based on a survey conducted in 2000:
  • 38,000 active academic journals in circulations today
  • 22,000 of these are peer-review journals
    • Only 35% of journals get more than 100 submissions
      each year
    • Only 5% of journals have a 90% rejection rate or higher

(as cited by Belcher, 2009)




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Familiarize Yourself With
             Journals
• Find the acceptance rates/impact factors of the
  journals to which you desire to submit your article
  • Cabell’s Publishing
    http://www.cabells.com/directories.aspx
  • Science Watch http://sciencewatch.com/

• Visit the journal websites – publication guidelines for
  authors
• Is there an upcoming theme or special issue on your
  topic?
• Is the journal formal or informal in style? Prefer
  primary, secondary, or pedagogical articles?
• What does the review process for the journal look like?
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Familiarize Yourself Author
       Guidelines for Publishing
     Major Journals                         Local Journals
Research-oriented, high impact        Pedagogical in nature, lower
factors                               impact factors
• TESOL Quarterly                     • CATESOL
• Modern Language Journal             • Sunshine State TESOL
• Language Learning                     Journal
• Reading in a Foreign                • Idiom (NYTESOL)
   Language                           • WAESOL World Quarterly
• Journal of Second Language
   Writing
• Computer Assisted Language
   Learning
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Suggested Publishing Outlets
Category                        Example in TESOL            Additional Information
Regional journals               Florida Reading Quarterly   21-30% acceptance rate



Newer journals                  The European Journal of     Debuts in March 2012;
                                Applied Linguistics and     Review process about 8
                                TEFL                        weeks
Field specific journals         Reading in a Foreign        Review process 8-12 weeks
                                Language
                                English for Specific        21-30% acceptance rate
                                Purposes
Disciplinary journals           System                      11-20% acceptance rate
                                Canadian Modern             21-30% acceptance rate
                                Language Review
                                TESOL Quarterly             8-10% acceptance rate
(Belcher, 2009; Cabell, 2007)
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Activity 6

• It is important to select a specific journal where
  you will submit your completed article. What
  journals are you considering?




                           33
Choosing the Right
          Journal
• Consider contacting the Managing Editor and/or
  the Editor to get further information.
  • Managing editor: oversees daily operations of
    journal; keeper of manuscripts & blind peer review
    processes, copy editor, proofreader
  • Editor: oversees manuscript ideas, content, & makes
    final judgment calls

• What questions would be appropriate to ask these
  journal representatives? Are they the same for
  both the Managing Editor and the Editor?

                          34
Activity 7

• Brainstorm questions that you would send to a
  Managing Editor and an Editor of a journal in
  which you want to publish.




                        35
Getting It Published
   WRITING A LETTER OF INQUIRY
Letters of Inquiry

• It is a good idea to write first to an editor regarding
  your topic

• Be sure to mention that you are a
  graduate/doctoral student if you are still in school

• Use your abstract as a guide for writing this letter.

• Sample letter



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Getting It Published
   THE PEER REVIEW PROCESS
The Peer Review Process

    • Manuscript received by managing editor
    • Journal editors decide if meets criteria
1   • Select two blind peer reviewers from editorial board
    • Two reviewers read manuscript
    • Make comments, suggestions
    • Make recommendation to journal editors on whether to accept, accept
2     with revisions, reject
    • Manuscript returned to managing editor
    • Managing editor compiles reviewer comments
3   • Contacts author with journal decision and attaches reviewers’ feedback




                                  39
Resources for Writing

• Forms & sample writing plan
  http://www.wendybelcher.com/pages/WorkbookForms.htm

• Self-Control for Mac OS X
  http://www.macupdate.com/app/mac/31289/selfcontrol

• Facebook Groups, EdModo

• DropBox http://www.dropbox.com/

• EverNote http://www.evernote.com/

• Wunderlist, Orchestra To-Do


                            40
It starts now!

• If you would like to provide encouragement and
  support to your peers in today’s workshop, we
  have created a group in EdModo to inspire each
  other to stay the course!




                        41
Call for Papers
                http://tapestry.usf.edu/journal/

• We would like to invite you to submit your manuscript to an
  invited novice academic issue of The Tapestry Journal.

• Theme: Issues relating to the education of English
  learners in the P-12 classroom.

• Submit ideas/manuscripts to tapestry@ucf.edu by July
  31, 2012

• Editors will work more closely with authors than is typical
  in the field for this issue
                               42

Breaking Down the Article Writing Process for New Academics

  • 1.
    Breaking Down the ArticleWriting Process for New Academics Alison M. Youngblood, University of Central Florida a.youngb@knights.ucf.edu Melanie C. González, University of Central Florida m.gonzalez@knights.ucf.edu TESOL 2012 Philadelphia, PA
  • 2.
    Target Audience This workshopis designed for doctoral students, new faculty members, and/or practitioners that do not have a lot of experience writing articles but need to publish for career advancement. 2
  • 3.
    Workshop Objectives ① Designa realistic writing plan to help manage the article writing process. ② Select an article to write/revise for submission to a journal. ③ Write a good abstract. ④ Break down the journal publication process. 3
  • 4.
    Overview of Workshop ①Introduction to article writing process and 12-week writing plan ② Designing your writing plan ③ Starting your article & varying article structures ④ Writing an abstract and making a strong argument ⑤ Selecting a journal & journal review processes ⑥ Writing a letter of inquiry ⑦ Wrap-up & feedback 4
  • 5.
    Let’s take apoll Polleverywhere – Use your text-messaging enabled phones! What is your biggest obstacle to writing? a) Family/friends b) No time c) Writer’s block d) Not a good writer e) Dislike writing f) Intimidated 5
  • 6.
    Let’s take apoll What is your typical writing process like? a) Work on it a little at a time b) Wait till the last minute c) Heavy on the revision process d) Methodical: outline, fill-in, revise 6
  • 7.
    Let’s take apoll How do you feel while writing? a) Fabulous, I love writing! b) Stressed, this is never going to get done! c) Frustrated, I don’t know what to say! d) Neutral, it is something I have to do e) Good, when I have time. 7
  • 8.
    Activity 1 • Thereare many obstacles when trying to make writing a daily habit. From the obstacles discussed in our workshop, which ones were the most relevant to you? Discuss some possible solutions with your group? Obstacles: Solutions: 8
  • 9.
    Designing Your Writing Plan MAKING THE COMMITMENT
  • 10.
    Making the commitment •Traditionally, we think of writing as a solitary activity. • Working with a writing partner/writing group helps not only to provide a reviewer, but adds motivation • Sign a contract (examples on following slide) • Decide a reward & punishment • Rewards: new shoes, movie, tickets, etc. • Punishments: a week without Facebook/Twitter, no TV for a week, etc. 10
  • 11.
    Making the commitment (Belcher, 2009) Writing Partners Writing Group 11
  • 12.
    Designing Your Writing Plan MAKING IT A HABIT
  • 13.
    Making it ahabit • Pick a writing site and stick to it! • What improvements can you make to it? • Plotting out your time and creating a writing plan • Use a chart • Use online/mobile phone tools/apps such as iCal, Google calendar/reminders • Plotting out writing tasks for each day for the span of plan 13
  • 14.
    Activity 2 • Wediscussed obstacles that make it hard to write every day. One of the best ways to overcome these obstacles is to create a writing space. What could site could you use as your primary writing location? What could be a back-up writing site? What changes would you have to make to either in order to make it a productive space? 14
  • 15.
    Sample 12-Week Writing Plan (Belcher, 2009) • Goal is to set up a realistic, not ambitious writing plan! • Think about how you currently spend your time and where you can fit in 15 minutes of writing. 15
  • 16.
    Starting your article PICKINGA TEXT YOU’VE ALREADY WRITTEN “Look what I found in the dumpster! A perfectly good article!”
  • 17.
    Types of academicarticles in TESOL Commentary* Discusses issues of concern in the field supported by research and/or theory Reviews of recent professional books, textbooks, Book review or electronic resources; check with journal sites for list of books needing review Pedagogical/Effective/Best Describes successful or promising application of practice articles/Action instructional practices or activities research Literature review article Reviews a body of literature and/or previous research on a particular topic Traces the development of a certain theory, Theoretical article proposes a better theory, and criticizes the old theory. Research article: Reports on data collected from an quantitative, qualitative, or experiment/research project. Includes a literature mixed methods review, methodology, and discussion of results. 17
  • 18.
    Picking a textyou’ve already written • For your consideration (Belcher, 2009): • Praise: has a professor said a certain paper was strong? • Pleasure: was there a topic you really enjoyed writing about? • Relevance: have you talked/written about a current debate in the field? • Research/Findings: have you performed any research/collected data in the field? • Conference presentation: have you presented on a topic at a professional conference? • Thesis: did you write a Master’s/Doctoral thesis? • Rejected article: did you send in an article already? 18
  • 19.
    Activity 3 • Thefirst step to writing an article is to pick a project or piece of work that you already have in progress. Brainstorm which of your artifacts have potential to become articles? What article structure would they follow? What is your best option to focus your attention over the next twelve weeks? 19
  • 20.
    Collaborating with others Considerco-writing with: Tips for collaborating • A peer • Determine a file naming system e.g. • A professor YEAR_MONTH_DAY_AUTHOR INITIALS_TITLE.docx • A mentor • Save ALL drafts • A practicing teacher • Never have two authors working at the same time • Take advantage of others’ strengths 20
  • 21.
    Writing an Abstractfor Your Article THE DO’S AND DON’TS
  • 22.
    Writing a goodabstract • Now that you’ve selected a topic, let’s examine what comprises a good abstract • An abstract can serve as a general outline to keep your writing focused 22
  • 23.
    Elements of agood abstract (Belcher, 2009) • State why you are writing about this topic –a gap in literature? Debate in the field? A persistent problem? • State what the article is about • State your methods • State your results/findings • State your conclusions/argument • Think of all the keywords possible 23
  • 24.
    What to avoidin an abstract (Belcher, 2009) Avoid including the following items in your abstract: • Just introducing the topic • Detailing data, results, significance • Your hopes for the article • Footnotes or citations • Quotations • Abbreviations, symbols, or acronyms 24
  • 25.
    Activity 4 • Itis important to understand how an article’s structure affects the abstract. Look at the four example abstracts below and determine what kind of article structure they represent. 25
  • 26.
    Activity 5 • Onceyou have completed the description and summary activities related to your article, write a single sentence that explains what your article is about. 26
  • 27.
    Example of Lit ReviewArticle • Folse, K., Gonzalez, M., & Youngblood, A. (in review). Five suggestions for creating a rich lexical environment in any classroom. • Initial stage: literature review from course • Pick a journal & inquire about topic • Revise according to journal guidelines • Submit! 27
  • 28.
    Getting It Published MATCHING YOUR ARTICLE TO A JOURNAL
  • 29.
    Good News aboutPublishing • Based on a survey conducted in 2000: • 38,000 active academic journals in circulations today • 22,000 of these are peer-review journals • Only 35% of journals get more than 100 submissions each year • Only 5% of journals have a 90% rejection rate or higher (as cited by Belcher, 2009) 29
  • 30.
    Familiarize Yourself With Journals • Find the acceptance rates/impact factors of the journals to which you desire to submit your article • Cabell’s Publishing http://www.cabells.com/directories.aspx • Science Watch http://sciencewatch.com/ • Visit the journal websites – publication guidelines for authors • Is there an upcoming theme or special issue on your topic? • Is the journal formal or informal in style? Prefer primary, secondary, or pedagogical articles? • What does the review process for the journal look like? 30
  • 31.
    Familiarize Yourself Author Guidelines for Publishing Major Journals Local Journals Research-oriented, high impact Pedagogical in nature, lower factors impact factors • TESOL Quarterly • CATESOL • Modern Language Journal • Sunshine State TESOL • Language Learning Journal • Reading in a Foreign • Idiom (NYTESOL) Language • WAESOL World Quarterly • Journal of Second Language Writing • Computer Assisted Language Learning 31
  • 32.
    Suggested Publishing Outlets Category Example in TESOL Additional Information Regional journals Florida Reading Quarterly 21-30% acceptance rate Newer journals The European Journal of Debuts in March 2012; Applied Linguistics and Review process about 8 TEFL weeks Field specific journals Reading in a Foreign Review process 8-12 weeks Language English for Specific 21-30% acceptance rate Purposes Disciplinary journals System 11-20% acceptance rate Canadian Modern 21-30% acceptance rate Language Review TESOL Quarterly 8-10% acceptance rate (Belcher, 2009; Cabell, 2007) 32
  • 33.
    Activity 6 • Itis important to select a specific journal where you will submit your completed article. What journals are you considering? 33
  • 34.
    Choosing the Right Journal • Consider contacting the Managing Editor and/or the Editor to get further information. • Managing editor: oversees daily operations of journal; keeper of manuscripts & blind peer review processes, copy editor, proofreader • Editor: oversees manuscript ideas, content, & makes final judgment calls • What questions would be appropriate to ask these journal representatives? Are they the same for both the Managing Editor and the Editor? 34
  • 35.
    Activity 7 • Brainstormquestions that you would send to a Managing Editor and an Editor of a journal in which you want to publish. 35
  • 36.
    Getting It Published WRITING A LETTER OF INQUIRY
  • 37.
    Letters of Inquiry •It is a good idea to write first to an editor regarding your topic • Be sure to mention that you are a graduate/doctoral student if you are still in school • Use your abstract as a guide for writing this letter. • Sample letter 37
  • 38.
    Getting It Published THE PEER REVIEW PROCESS
  • 39.
    The Peer ReviewProcess • Manuscript received by managing editor • Journal editors decide if meets criteria 1 • Select two blind peer reviewers from editorial board • Two reviewers read manuscript • Make comments, suggestions • Make recommendation to journal editors on whether to accept, accept 2 with revisions, reject • Manuscript returned to managing editor • Managing editor compiles reviewer comments 3 • Contacts author with journal decision and attaches reviewers’ feedback 39
  • 40.
    Resources for Writing •Forms & sample writing plan http://www.wendybelcher.com/pages/WorkbookForms.htm • Self-Control for Mac OS X http://www.macupdate.com/app/mac/31289/selfcontrol • Facebook Groups, EdModo • DropBox http://www.dropbox.com/ • EverNote http://www.evernote.com/ • Wunderlist, Orchestra To-Do 40
  • 41.
    It starts now! •If you would like to provide encouragement and support to your peers in today’s workshop, we have created a group in EdModo to inspire each other to stay the course! 41
  • 42.
    Call for Papers http://tapestry.usf.edu/journal/ • We would like to invite you to submit your manuscript to an invited novice academic issue of The Tapestry Journal. • Theme: Issues relating to the education of English learners in the P-12 classroom. • Submit ideas/manuscripts to tapestry@ucf.edu by July 31, 2012 • Editors will work more closely with authors than is typical in the field for this issue 42

Editor's Notes

  • #3 ALISON
  • #4 Melanie
  • #5 Melanie
  • #6 ALISON
  • #9 ALISON START ACTIVITYMEL END OF ACTIVITY
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  • #11 MELANIE
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  • #16 MELANIE
  • #18 No commentary articles for structureJUMP TO PACKET ACTIVITYMEL
  • #19 We would like the audience to think of the work they’ve written in the past. Pick one to write an abstract within this workshop.MELANIE
  • #20 ALISON
  • #21 ALISONCO-WRITE VS. CO-AUTHOR
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  • #25 Do activity in PacketMELANIE
  • #26 MELANIE?
  • #27 ALISONFOLLOW UP ACTIVITY FOR ELEVATOR SPEECH Renumber activity
  • #28 MOVE TO END TELLING OUR STORYBOTH
  • #29 Move to before language/style
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  • #31 Cabell’s requires a subscription now (free 7 day trial) or check university libraryMELANIE
  • #32 MELANIE
  • #33 ALISONBelcher and I disagree about local/smaller regional journals
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