DRAFT SCRIPT 2, improvements based upon clients feedback with another meeting to be held

1. “SHADY MOVEMENTS”
By
Max Cheshire
Bang Average Media
Ringwood
01425 11111
Maxcheshire123@gmail.com

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FADE IN:
INT. BEN’S HOUSE – DAY
Scene 1
BEN and ADAM are playing against each other on fifa, sat
either side of the 3 seater sofa
BEN
Nah you should’ve scored that man.
ADAM
Bro allow it I don’t play this rubbish.
BEN
Rubbish?! You play it all the time.
ADAM
I do not.
BEN
Phahahah, regardless mate, you should’ve
scored.
What you saying later?
ADAM
Not sure man, probably teaching you how to
play this game.
BEN
Teaching me?! Nah you can’t talk man.
(FACETIME RINGS)
BEN (CONT’D)
It’s Chloe, I’m gunna grab it quick.
Ben goes to the other side of room to pick up the face time
call, it’s his girlfriend Chloe.

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BEN (CONT’D)
Heyy, you alright??
INT. CHLOE’S HOUSE – DAY
CHLOE (AT PHONE)
Yeah I’m good, how you doing?
INT. BEN’S HOUSE – DAY
ADAM (AT PHONE)
Heyy Chloe, What you saying??
INTERCUT:
CHLOE
Oh hey Adam, you good?
Time-lapse of phone call conversation. With Adam hogging
the phone. Flowing conversation between Adam and Chloe.
Chloe is laughing and enjoying the conversation with Adam.
INT. BEN’S HOUSE – DAY
ADAM
(Hangs Up)
Ben takes the phone from Adam and is in a foul mood after
the phone call. He looks concerned.
Ben then throws his phone down at the sofa in anger.
ADAM (CONT’D)
You ok bro?
BEN
I don’t know man, I’m not sure about Chloe,
she’s been moving weird, I don’t want to sit here and jump
to conclusions but you know what I mean.
Fade out
Scene 1 ends.

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Scene 2 starts
INT. CHLOE’S HOUSE – DAY
Chloe is on the phone talking to her best friend.
CHLOE
Heyyyy, you alright??
BEST FRIEND
I’m good how are you?
CHLOE
Yeah, not bad, well I don’t know I’ve just been
on the phone with Adam and he seems different.
The screen splits down the middle with Chloe on one side
and Adam and Ben on the other
CHLOE (CONT’D)
He’s been so off with me; I don’t know what it is. I don’t
want to sit here and ramble but you know what I mean.
BEST FRIEND
I get you, it’s tough but just see what he’s like he might
just be being miserable, classic boys.
CHLOE
I get you, I’ll just see.
Scene 2 ends.

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Scene 3 starts.
INT. BEN’S HOUSE – DAY
Ben is lying on his bed, texting someone on his phone. We
do not see who he is texting.
BEN’S MUM (shouting)
BEN CAN YOU COME DOWN HERE
Ben gets off his bed and leaves his room, his phone starts
to ring as soon as he leaves his room, we don't see who it
is phoning him.
He returns to his room to see a missed call on his phone.
Fade out
INT. ADAMS HOUSE – DAY
Adam is scrolling through his pictures, ones of him and
Chloe.
Series of Shots:
A – Back of car with Chloe in the passenger seat and Adam
driving
B – Shots of interior of car, very much filling shots.
Chloe and Adam smiling at each other, music playing all
shot from back of car
C – Chloe taking selfies with Adam driving, shot from the
back of the car
INT. ADAMS CAR – DAY
6 months ago
Chloe is taking pictures which are the same as the ones
Adam is scrolling through.
Whilst Chloe is taking these pictures, Ben texts Chloe and
an animation appears on screen showing this.
ADAM
Who’s texting you?
CHLOE

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It’s only Ben, don't worry
ADAM
Oh my bad
Ben texts again and Adam takes the phone off Chloe to see
what it says
Adam looks annoyed at Chloe, she then films him and takes
more funny pictures.
Flash back to the present day.
Adam goes to phone Chloe, but then decides against it.
Scene 3 ends
SCENE 4 EXT. WALKWAY – DAY
Adam is walking along listening to music, he then receives
a text Chloe. He looks but does not reply.
INTERCUT:
INT. CHLOE’S HOUSE – DAY
CHLOE
URGHH, HE’S READ IT BUT WONT REPLY
INTERCUT:
EXT. WALKWAY – DAY
Adam phones Ben to see what he’s doing
ADAM (INTO PHONE)
What you saying bro, you down to meet
INTERCUT:
EXT – PATHWAY – DAY
Ben is riding his bike
BEN (INTO PHONE)
I can't man sorry. I’m busy with family.
Ben puts the phone down and parks his bike outside a house.

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*Knocks on door*
INT. CHLOE’S HOUSE – DAY
Chloe hears a knock at the door and goes to answer
CHLOE (smirking)
You said you weren’t coming till later!!
BEN
Thought it’d be a nice surprise.
CHLOE
NO NO, it is, thank you
Fade out:
EXT. WALKWAY – DAY
Adam is on his way to Chloe’s house, un aware that Ben is
there.
As he arrives he sees Ben’s bike and starts to worry, he
phones ben.
ADAM (INTO PHONE)(angry)
FAMILY IS IT?
BEN (confused)
What? What you on about?
ADAM (angry)
Don't act like you don't know, moving to Chloe, I should’ve
known it wasn't her moving shady it was you!
CHLOE (shouting)
Oh my god is that Adam!
Ben puts his hand over the microphone of the phone and
tells Chloe to be quiet.
Adam then bangs on the door in frustration.

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CHLOE (CONT’D)(sarcastically)
Oh shit he does not sound happy
ADAM (shouting)
HAPPY! Of course I’m not happy to see my best mate going
behind my back, cheating with my girlfriend!
Adam picks up Ben’s bike and throws it at the ground
Ben then goes down to confront Adam
Series of shots:
Fight sequence.
Chloe runs down the stairs to stop the two boys from
fighting
Ben goes to hit Adam with a right hand who subsequently
dodges the punch
Bens punch that he threw at Adam hits Chloe who hits the
floor
Screen goes to black as Chloe his the floor.
Audio of Chloe hitting the floor
The End.

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