SCRIPT EVALUATION

1. Evaluationof the script.
The meetingswiththe clientwentverywell,andIfeel thisisevidentwithinmylog,asthe meetings
wentonthere was lessthathad to be improved,thisshowsgreatimprovementfromthe first
meetingwhere therewasalot of stuff that wasdiscussedand itneededtobe sorted.
- The clientwasimpressedwithmyideas andhow Ihad incorporatedideas frommyprevious
treatments/ideasintothe newfilmidea.
- Howeverthere wasanissue withhow I hadoriginallywantedtoendmyfilm, myideawasto
endit witha fightsequence,thisisstill the planhowevermyoriginal planwastohave a long
one take sequence,thisisnotpossibleasitwouldrequire extreme precautionstobe taken
and I do nothave the resources/contactstochoreographa one take fightsequence. Ihave
had to change thisso the shotsare strategicallyframedmeaningnobodywillbe hurt.
- The filmwill definitelyappeal tomy audience of youngadultsasthe actors will be the same
age as myprimarydemographic,thismakesiteasierforthemtorelate astheymay have
beenina similarsituationthemselves.
- I have successfullyformattedanindustryacceptedscriptandshootingscript,the latterwas
an extremelytime consumingtaskhoweveritwill be beneficialwhenitcomestofuture
taskssuch as storyboarding andactuallyshootingthe film.
- Ethical and legal requirementsare met, Ihave beenthroughthiswithmyclient,making sure
that the language usedisnotan issue as thisisthe onlyreal worry forme.
- All togetherIam pleasedwith the outcome of the script,howeverthatisonlyhalf of it,it is
all well andgoodto have a structuredplanand idea, howeverIneedtomake sure I follow
these planswhenitcomestofilming,
SwotAnalysis
Strengths – advantagesof the task I’ve completedisthatithelpsme forall myfuture tasks,whether
that be,storyboardingor actuallyshootingthe film.Ithelpsme tohighlight/identifyproblemsthat
couldpotentiallycome up
Weakness –A problemIhave facedthroughoutthiswhole taskistime management,there’sbeena
fewtimeswhere I’ve hadtopostpone startingnew tasksasI’ve notbeenable tofinishanothertask.
Or othercases where Ihave starteda task and notfinisheditfora longtime meaningwhenIcome
back to it,it’snot freshtome.
Opportunities –There are quite afewopportunitiesthatcouldarise fromthe productionof myfilm,
short of the weekcouldpromote the film, showingitacrosssocial mediaorat live events.Aswellas
this,itwill allowme asa creative toembark on new ideas,new filmsandnew creative projects.It
couldinspire me totake a tripintothe film/productionworld.

2. Threats– Finance isalwaysanissue,regardlessof whatfinancialpositionyouare in.Formyself,its
goingto be the biggestissue,tryingtofinance little things,likepetrol andfoodcosts.The filmisnot
ina positontoreimburse anyoutgoingcosts.