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Absolution 
Written By 
Gideon Lax 
AS Media Final Piece 
Address 
Phone Number
1 
FADE IN: 
EXT. RINGWOOD CHURCH - DAY 
In the church a man is making a confession to a priest about 
his past 
DISSOLVE TO: 
INT. RINGWOOD CHURCH COFESSION BOX 
Shutter opens ELI starts confession to the priest. 
ELI 
Forgive me father for I have 
sinned. 
CUT TO: 
ELI performing an assassination from distance 
ELI 
I have killed on the command of 
others. 
CUT TO: 
ELI perfoming an assassination hand to hand 
ELI 
And when I tried to walk away, They 
took everything I loved from me. 
CUT TO: 
Eli and Annie playing in a field - sunny day 
PRIEST 
You will find no absolution here 
nor anywhere you look, for your 
actions have condemned you to hell 
my son. 
ELI 
So be it. 
PRIEST 
Where will you go now my son. 
ELI 
To take everything from them. 
CUT TO:
2 
EXT. COMPOUND 
ELI standing on a verge near the compound (CU) of hand with 
Annie's necklace hanging. (music intro) ELI walks towards 
front door. 
Once in ELI is meet by HENCHMAN #1 which he kills rather 
quickly with pistol and a little scrap. 
ELI gets up and continues down the corridor as he passes a 
door a weapon (not sure) is swung at him ELI dodges and 
engages HENCHMEN #2 
(fight scene) 
ELI gets up and walks into the last room with KING waiting 
for him 
KING 
Please let yourself in. Take a seat 
ELI remains silent and walks to the opposite side of the 
table. 
KING 
Do you play chess Eli? (PAUSE) The 
king is the most valuable piece on 
the board, not only does he dictate 
the outcome of the game but he 
commands all of the other pieces 
like the pawn... 
ELI 
(INTERUPT) Who are you? 
KING 
(PAUSE) I am the king ELI and you. 
You are a pawn in a much bigger 
game. 
ELI 
She wasn't part of this. 
KING 
OH but she was dear ELI. She was 
going to take away my pawn. A pawn 
that I put a lot of time and money 
into, especially to just to let him 
to walk away. (PICK UP KING 
PIECE)In the end its all just 
business. 
ELI rises gun
3 
KING 
(FLUSTERED) A pawn can't take a 
king ELI! (LOUDER) That's not how 
the game is play! 
ELI 
Check mate (GUNSHOT) 
CU of king piece falling to the ground. Overhead of the 
building working backwards.

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Absolution (First Draft)

  • 1. Absolution Written By Gideon Lax AS Media Final Piece Address Phone Number
  • 2. 1 FADE IN: EXT. RINGWOOD CHURCH - DAY In the church a man is making a confession to a priest about his past DISSOLVE TO: INT. RINGWOOD CHURCH COFESSION BOX Shutter opens ELI starts confession to the priest. ELI Forgive me father for I have sinned. CUT TO: ELI performing an assassination from distance ELI I have killed on the command of others. CUT TO: ELI perfoming an assassination hand to hand ELI And when I tried to walk away, They took everything I loved from me. CUT TO: Eli and Annie playing in a field - sunny day PRIEST You will find no absolution here nor anywhere you look, for your actions have condemned you to hell my son. ELI So be it. PRIEST Where will you go now my son. ELI To take everything from them. CUT TO:
  • 3. 2 EXT. COMPOUND ELI standing on a verge near the compound (CU) of hand with Annie's necklace hanging. (music intro) ELI walks towards front door. Once in ELI is meet by HENCHMAN #1 which he kills rather quickly with pistol and a little scrap. ELI gets up and continues down the corridor as he passes a door a weapon (not sure) is swung at him ELI dodges and engages HENCHMEN #2 (fight scene) ELI gets up and walks into the last room with KING waiting for him KING Please let yourself in. Take a seat ELI remains silent and walks to the opposite side of the table. KING Do you play chess Eli? (PAUSE) The king is the most valuable piece on the board, not only does he dictate the outcome of the game but he commands all of the other pieces like the pawn... ELI (INTERUPT) Who are you? KING (PAUSE) I am the king ELI and you. You are a pawn in a much bigger game. ELI She wasn't part of this. KING OH but she was dear ELI. She was going to take away my pawn. A pawn that I put a lot of time and money into, especially to just to let him to walk away. (PICK UP KING PIECE)In the end its all just business. ELI rises gun
  • 4. 3 KING (FLUSTERED) A pawn can't take a king ELI! (LOUDER) That's not how the game is play! ELI Check mate (GUNSHOT) CU of king piece falling to the ground. Overhead of the building working backwards.