2. CHANGES:
We have changed our credits so that ‘StudioCanalUK presents’ fades in and out first and then ‘A warp
films production’ fades in and out on the first shot.
We have altered the credits so that Marshall’s name appears next to his face.
We have aligned ‘directed by Hannah Grinham’ and ‘Casting by Alex Offer’ to the side.
We have changed the wording of ‘script by’ to ‘written by’ and also aligned it to the side.
We have checked to see what opening order of technical credits is conventional. It is production
company, distributor, actors/actresses names, casting director, writer, producer and then director.
We have changed the twig breaking sound so that it is quieter.
We have reversed the pan at 1:22. We have changed it so it pans right.
We have changed the way in which the title appears. We have made one letter appear at a time. We
have also changed it so the title is still on the screen when the background changes to black.
