create feedback improve refine

1. Task 3: Review ideas and gain feedback in order to refine and develop the outcome in
response to the brief.
AC 1.3: refine your website through the development process.
Level 1
Evidence that refining
has been attempted.
Level 2 Pass
Limited evidence that
refining has taken
place.
Checklist
1. Homepage V1
2. Page 2 V1
3. Page 3 V1
4. Homepage V2
5. Page 2 V2
6. Page 3 V2
7. Homepage – FINAL
8. Page 2 – FINAL
9. Page 3 – FINAL
10. Comparison summary
Unit 2 – Creating a website in response to a brief (10A)
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AC
1.3
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Level 2 Merit
Clear evidence that
refining has taken
place.
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Level 2 Distinction
Clear evidence that
refining has taken
place. Some refining
leads to innovation.
Task 4: Produce a final website in response to the brief.
Level 1
Some use of creative
and media skills is
evident.
Level 2 Pass
Use of a range of
creative and media
skills is appropriate to
the outcome.
AC
1.1
Level 2 Merit
Use of a wide range of
creative and media
skills appropriate to
the outcome.
AC 1.1: use skills in development of an outcome

2. Checklist
1. Homepage V1
2. Page 2 V1
3. Page 3 V1
4. Homepage V2
5. Page 2 V2
6. Page 3 V2
7. Homepage – FINAL
8. Page 2 – FINAL
9. Page 3 – FINAL
10. Comparison summary
Unit 2 – Creating a website in response to a brief (10A)
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Level 1
Some description of
feedback is evident.
Level 2 Pass
Some explanation of
how feedback was
used to identify
changes.
AC
2.3
Level 2 Merit
Clear explanation of
how feedback was
used to identify
appropriate changes.
AC 2.3: use feedback to identify changes needed
Task 4: Produce a final website in response to the brief.

3. Homepage - V1
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This is my homepage for my website. There is an animated banner that I made in
Fireworks, an animated advert that I made in Fireworks and an animated footer
that I made in Fireworks. I made the buttons in Photoshop. I found the Terminator
GIF online in google images along with the lightbulb. I made the social media
buttons in Photoshop.

4. Homepage - V1
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I made this animated banner in Fireworks, I made this because I
think it would appeal to most of my target audience because it
looks like it is from an intense scene from an action movie. I made
the plane in Photoshop and I also made the background in
Photoshop by putting a picture of clear skies and adding a filter on
to it and colouring it in with dark blue.
I made this animated footer in Fireworks because it would appeal
to my target audience who like violence in their movies and their
video games. I made the background with Photoshop by colouring
it in with dark blue and light red. I added the gunshots by finding an
image of an explosion and making it smaller, I also added the
smoke effect to the gunshot and if you look closely you can see the
smoke.
I made this button in Fireworks, it is the Instagram logo with a
flash on the light, this is the on version of this social media
button rollover. I made an Instagram one because I think this is
what a lot of my target audience use in their spare time. I made
five social media rollovers.
Google plus Twitter
Facebook Email

5. Homepage - V1 Feedback –
Chris symes - I liked the layout of your homepage I
think that it is very eye catching and it appeals to
the target audience of teenagers. The choice of font
and text colour go very well together because it is
clear enough to read yet not a boring text. The
animated food advert on the side is very appealing.
You haven’t added in any hotspots to your pdf
documents or any hyperlinks to the social media
websites. I like the look of your animated banner
however I feel that it need to have some more
options for people to chose because it looks very
plain. There isn’t any grammatical or spelling errors
however I think you could do with making it sound
a bit more professional, e.g. prices ranging from £2
to £8
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Feedback –
Katie Lovekin – the homepage is very eye-catching,
the animated banner isn’t too fast so you can read
the text clearly. The page buttons are linked
together but the social media buttons aren’t linked
to the sites. You haven’t added the pdf for the
footer. The animated banner doesn’t have the time
when the event ends or starts. No grammar
problems. The animated food advert is detailed but
the writing is too small to read.

6. Food & Drinks- V1
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This is the Food and drinks page for my website. I used a static image of
people in the cinema because it is a known fact that people eat popcorn
when in the movies. I got this image from
http://www.bing.com/images/search?view=detailV2&ccid=GYnA9f2N&id=2CB28E8C3E617A23B2DEB57CEDC08F9525EBE861&q=people+eating+popc
orn+in+the+movies&simid=608039389079932362&selectedIndex=2&ajaxhist=0
. I also got an animated GIF of a movie rolling from
http://www.bing.com/images/search?view=detailV2&ccid=bk4MYgWU&id=76487AC695398778B2DDD1ADD8363DA519BAE7F5&q=movie+rolling+gif
&simid=608020998032197117&selectedIndex=12&ajaxhist=0

7. Food & Drinks - V1 Feedback – Chris symes
The overall layout of the 2nd page is good and I like
the way there's still a lot going on but not enough
to distract someone from what they want to find
out. Although the animated food advert is very
appealing and informative I think that it doesn’t
need to be repeated on the second slide because
the space its taking up could be used to tell people
some more information or you could make an
advert for the films your showing.
All the links till work for your buttons I think the
buttons could be a bit more interesting than what
they are right now, I think that you could add some
more colour or make them stand out more.
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Feedback –
Katie Lovekin
The social media buttons aren’t linked together on
the 2nd page either. The layout is simple but very
eye catching again. There's not a lot of information
about foods and drinks next to the images. The
footer is going too fast again so you can’t see what's
going on in the background.

8. Activities- V1
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This is my activities page for my website, it has an animated banner, an
animated advert, an animated map, four rollover images and an
animated footer.
I made the animated banner in Fireworks, I made the animated advert
in Fireworks as well but I made it in a hurry and it turned out quite
well. The rollover images were made by me on both Photoshop and
Fireworks. I made the animated footer in both Photoshop and
Fireworks as well. I made the animated map in fireworks, I made it so
that it would look like a magnifying glass going across the map and
zooming in to St. Ann’s Wells Gardens.
I got the pictures from Google Images. I have linked the pages
together, the terms of service PDF has been linked to the button and
the contact us PDF has been linked to the button as well.
Rollovers

9. Activities- V1 Feedback – Spencer Cooper
In the footer the Conditions & Accessibility Help
don’t link to any page, neither does the tickets
page. Lots of gifs give the page lots of vibe, social
media icons change when hovering over, well made.
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Feedback –
Finnan Purdie McVeigh–Make sure you fix the
tickets hotspots and maybe a clearer background
for text maybe add the background to the text,
everything almost 100% working apart from the alt
tags and add the links for the social media websites.

10. Version 1 feedback – improvements I want to make
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Add more choices for people to click on. Done – I’ve made a terms and conditions PDF for my footer. I used word and I searched on the internet to find terms and conditions. I
then used X tool to change the name to the name of my event which is The Thrill of the flight. I added a logo in the header and then I saved it as a PDF and linked it to the footer. I
did this so my target audience of young teens know the terms and conditions. This is also something I’ve seen on professional websites.
Add a contact us page. Done- I’ve added a contact us page for my target audience who are teens and young adults to have a place to contact my website if they have a problem
with the terms of service or any technical issues.
Make prices look more professional. Done- I have made the prices of the food and drinks look more professional, I did this by adding the £ symbol to the prices and making the
prices cheaper so that my target audience can actually afford it.
Link social media buttons. Done- I have added links to my social media buttons so that my audience can access it in order to get the latest news about my website and my event.
Add more colour to buttons to make them stand out. Done- I have added more colour to my website so that my target audience would find it less boring and more enjoyable.
Add the tickets page. Done- I have added a tickets page so that my audience have a place to buy online tickets if they are interested incoming to my event.
The alt tags for the social media websites and the links don’t really work. Done- I have made the links work , but the Alt tags don’t show up even if I add one to them.
On my next version I am going to try and make the Alt tags on my website work, I am
also going to add a contact us PDF, I was going to make an individual contact us page
but I changed my plan and I am going to be making a PDF instead. I am also going to
make some more hotpots and links so that my audience can click on them.

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Version 2 evidence now follows…..

12. Homepage – V2
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This is my improved homepage, I made a tickets page
and linked it to this page, I also linked the social
media pages to this page. The footer on this website
is supposed to be that fast, I made all the buttons on
this website in Photoshop.
I adjusted the lengths of the columns so
they wouldn’t stick out like they did
before.
I changed the GIF in to a photo so it would
load and appear faster when I open the site.

13. Homepage – V2 Feedback – Muj
I Think that the layout can be improved because
there is too many pictures and buttons everywhere.
And also I think that you can remove the white
background from the pictures so that it looks
neater.
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Feedback – Scott
Scott Rittman – There are no technical errors on this
page of the website. The rollovers work fine and the
links to the other pages all work correctly. One
suggestion to improve this page would be to make
the white background behind the social media
buttons transparent, so that it shows the website
background. It would also be good to fix the
alignment of the table making it so that there is no
spacing between the images and the footer and
banner. The footer links ‘Conditions’ and
‘Accessibility Help’ also don’t link to anything

14. Food & Drinks– V2
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I added a Gif to this page so that it wouldn’t look as boring as it was in
the last one.
I added a tickets page so the button could be linked to it.
I linked all the social media buttons to their websites. Gmail, Google Plus,
Instagram and Twitter so that my target audience can know what’s going
on with my website and my event.

15. Food & Drinks– V2 Feedback – Muj
I think that you should add alt tags so when
someone hovers over the image there can be text
so it tells the what it is. Also make the image sizes
the same so you don’t see the backgrounds lines
because it makes it look messy.
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Feedback – Scott
Scott Rittman – The first thing I spot whilst looking
at this page of the website is the alignment
between the image of people in the cinema. This is
something that needs to be fixed throughout the
whole website. Another suggestion would be to
also add more body text next to the two images as
the two subjects could use more detail. The drinks
menu image is also too stretched to read. However
you did a good job on keeping the movie theme of
the festival throughout the website.
The footer links ‘Conditions’ and ‘Accessibility Help’
also don’t link to anything

16. Activities– V2
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There wasn’t really any feedback telling me to improve this page
except to link the social media buttons, I did that and I also slowed
down the speed of the animated gifs in fireworks by saving the file
correctly , I made a tickets page so that the tickets button could be
linked to that page and I shortened some of the rows and columns
to make the page look more even that it was before.

17. Activities– V2 Feedback – Muj
I Like the animated map it is okay. But the planes
white background can be removed so that it looks
neat and so that it looks professional. Also the
images can be improved because they are kind of
boring to look at. You can use fireworks and use the
magic wand to get of the white background of some
images.
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Feedback – Scott
Scott Rittman – There is a spelling error in the body
text of this page as you spelt ‘Favourite’ ‘Favourite’.
Other than that there are no SPaG errors in this
page. There are also no technical errors as all of the
buttons in the footer and the social media ones as
usual. One recommendation would be to remove
the white background on the images.
The footer links ‘Conditions’ and ‘Accessibility Help’
also don’t link to anything

18. Tickets– V2
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This is the tickets page, I did not have this page when we first did
the feedback. I made an animated advert about Brightspark
sponsoring this event. And I linked all the social media buttons and
the homepage button, the food button and the activities button. I
made pictures of tickets in Photoshop, the I made PDFs with those
pictures on them so the user could print them out, including a
normal ticket and a VIP ticket. I made these PDFs in PowerPoint.
NEXT PAGE

19. Tickets– V2
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This is the normal ticket
PDF that people will print
out.
This is the registration code,
it is supposed to be
different every time
someone clicks into this
PDF.
I found this
picture of
tickets online.
This is to show the
audience what to do.

20. Tickets– V2
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This is the PDF for the V.I.P ticket. I used the same ticket
from the normal ticket and photoshoped it on Photoshop.
The registration code is different to the last one to show
how the code will be different every time someone wants
to print a ticket out
The barcode is supposed to be different every time for the
worker at the till to scan them and permit the entry of the
buyer into the festival.

21. Tickets – V2 Feedback – Spencer Cooper
All buttons to link pages are working, only 2/4
links work in the footer. Maybe add something
different instead of 2 pictures of tickets that both
link to the same page.
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Feedback – Scott
Scott Rittman – The footer links also still don’t work
on this page. Other than that there are no technical
errors on this page. When it comes to SPaG errors,
on the PDF file ‘Terms of Service’ the website name
is spelt wrong.

22. Version 2 feedback – improvements I want to make
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Improve the map gif on page 2, activities. Done – I have re-designed the map GIF so that it doesn’t look so boring, it used to
just be a normal map with a magnifying glass hovering over it but know it is a magnifying glass that actually zooms in to the
image.
Make the two the links in the footer work so they don’t confuse anyone. Done – I have added links to this choices so my
target audiences can click on them if they have any accessibility problems or any conditions they have problems about.
Check for spelling and grammar mistakes. Done – I have checked for spelling and grammar mistakes throughout the whole
of my website, I am pretty sure that there are know more of them.
Add alt tags. Done -- I have added alt tags to my website. Unfortunately they do not show up in the live view for some
reason.
Make the layout of my website a bit less messier. Done – I have improved the layout of my website so that it isn’t that
messy anymore.
On my final version I want to make the layout on all my pages less messy so that it is easier for my target
audiences to see where things are and how to use the website. I am also going to check for SPaG mistakes
throughout the whole of my website.

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Final version evidence now follows…..

24. Homepage - Final
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This is what my final homepage looks like, I improved the layout a lot
on Dreamweaver. I adjusted the size of the buttons so they are now
the same size, I adjusted the size of the pictures and GIFs so that my
website does not look so messy. I also add links to all the other
buttons that did no have links before.

25. Homepage - Final Feedback –
Finnan- there Is little evidence of html code but I
like the genre and the theme maybe some more
text in the main page everything else on this page is
good including the banner.
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Feedback –
Muj- Some more text on this page would make it
better. The footer goes a bit too fast. The buttons
look a bit too bland. But overall it looks good.

26. Food & Drinks - Final
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This I the final version of my Food and Drinks page, I improved the
layout of this page because at first it was very messy. I added the
Bright Spark logo to the food and drinks animated advert so that my
target audience can know who is sponsoring my website and my
event.
This I the logo I made for
Bright Spark on my food
and drinks animated
advert.

27. Food & Drinks - Final Feedback –
Finnan- I like your movie gif very well done on that
some drinks advert again try accessorize your
adverts position, definitely more text needed not
enough information about food and drinks.
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Feedback –
Muj- this page looks good the banner look very
nice, but the GIF in the middle is moving a bit too
fast.

28. Activities - Final
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This is my final version of my activities page on my website, I have
improved the layout of this page like I have done with all the other
pages. I have also added colour to my hotspots on this page.
I have also improved the animated advert on the side of this page so
that it does not go too quickly, I did that by reducing the time and
saving it correctly.

29. Activities - Final Feedback –
Finnan – you have unfinished work to do on tickets
make sure you include that as well, everything else
on the page I like but please do more text on your
information about this page, spelling is good but
not great.
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Feedback –
Muj- the map in the middle is too big, it does not fit
with the website nicely, it pushes the text and
image up.

30. Final feedback – improvements / tweaks I want to make
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I need to make the animated map a little bit smaller so that it doesn’t push the buttons up too much. Done- I moved the animated
map lower a bit and made it smaller, the buttons don’t look so small and squished up so much now.
The footer needs to be slower. Done- I designed the footer to be that fast, but since all the feedback people have given me are to
slow it down, I slowed down the time between the states so that the footer slows down a bit.
The GIF in the middle of page 2 activities page is moving too quickly. Done- I split it up into images in a GIF splitter online and used
Fireworks to slow the GIF down by increasing the time between the states and saving it correctly.
The feedback has gotten more and more repetitive by telling me that the things like the
footer is going too fast. I meant for the footer to be fast. So I decided to go with the
feedback and slow the footer down.

31. Clearly explain how feedback was used to identify changes you made
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On the home page, I was told to add more welcome text and body text, I did it and the homepage looked much better than it did without the same amount of text, I was also
told to slow down the GIFs on pretty much all the pages, and they looked better after I slowed them down, except for the footer, that was meant to be that fast.
On the food and drinks page I was told to add more links and PDFs, I think that was a very useful piece of feedback because now my target audience can have more choices
for things to do on my fix the hotspots and add more colour to the website, I did that and my website looks much better than it was before.
website.
On my activities page I was told to
I was told to make a tickets page and after I made it I realised that my target audience has a place to print tickets and rent booths easily.