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Average
• 11/20 (D1)
• Lowest = 1/20
• Highest = 17/20
WWW
• Sequential, following dates
• Embedded presentations
• Most groups = good teamwork
• Mostly correct blog titles and title of tasks
• Tagging names
• About ½ of you = decent presentation in slides
EBI
• A few groups – not up to date (old work – yikes!)
• Generally, research is letting most groups down
• Generally, not a lot of work is of L4 standard which is worrying – blog is easy marks!
• Check out blogs from last year?
• ½ of you = basic target audience evidence
• More visuals in presentations
• NO BULKY PARAGRAPHS!
• Use charts, graphs, annotated pictures/screen grabs etc/titles on slides etc
• Risk Assessment
• More detailed
• Such as………welfare of equipment
• Welfare of actors/crew
• Some risks not assessed accurately (sometimes L when it is H)
• More detail in preventative measures
• Assign 33/34 – numbered incorrectly (check blog)
• #63 onwards – check blog checklist for the right #s
Due date
• 17 March

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A2 blog feedback (27 feb)

  • 1. A2 Blog feedback L/O: to know where to improve in your blogs
  • 2. Average • 11/20 (D1) • Lowest = 1/20 • Highest = 17/20
  • 3. WWW • Sequential, following dates • Embedded presentations • Most groups = good teamwork • Mostly correct blog titles and title of tasks • Tagging names • About ½ of you = decent presentation in slides
  • 4. EBI • A few groups – not up to date (old work – yikes!) • Generally, research is letting most groups down • Generally, not a lot of work is of L4 standard which is worrying – blog is easy marks! • Check out blogs from last year? • ½ of you = basic target audience evidence • More visuals in presentations • NO BULKY PARAGRAPHS! • Use charts, graphs, annotated pictures/screen grabs etc/titles on slides etc • Risk Assessment • More detailed • Such as………welfare of equipment • Welfare of actors/crew • Some risks not assessed accurately (sometimes L when it is H) • More detail in preventative measures • Assign 33/34 – numbered incorrectly (check blog) • #63 onwards – check blog checklist for the right #s