2. ● Judge the relevance and worth of
ideas, soundness of the author’s
reasoning, and the effectiveness of
the presentation
Most Essential Learning Competency (MELC):
3. ● Identify the general mechanics and
logical arrangement of ideas in
compositions.
OBJECTIVE:
7. INTRODUCTION
Stating ideas involves plenty of considerations when it comes to
message delivery especially in the written form where every word said
can be reviewed and assessed. Sometimes, what we want to say may
come out differently depending on the words used, arrangement of the
writing, and simple punctuations and capitalizations. Hence, the need for
editing and rephrasing may come in handy for our true message to be
delivered flawlessly.
11. Vocabulary:
Mechanics
In composition, writing mechanics are the
conventions governing the technical aspects
of writing,
including spelling, punctuation, capitalization,
and abbreviations.
12. Vocabulary:
Logical
The writing skill of 'logical flow' can be
defined as all the aspects of your writing
that help the reader move smoothly from
one sentence to the next, and one
paragraph to another.
13. Vocabulary:
Composition
In the literary sense, a composition
(from the Latin word componere
which means "to put together") is the
way a writer assembles words and
sentences to create a coherent and
meaningful work.
15. CONTENT
01
refers to the ideas relevant to
the topic. These are facts and
information needed to sustain a
thought.
16.
17. Earth is the only planet in the
Andromeda Galaxy where life
can be found. It has two moons
namely Luna and Lana. The
organisms in this planet breathe
carbon dioxide.
We live on a planet where day
and night are present. Earth
days can be counted by its full
rotation of the Earth in its axis.
As it circulates the sun in our
solar system in its orbit, a year
can be measured by one
revolution.
20. The important of use the
correct use of grammar is it
showing your knowledge in the
rules in the English, she uses of
words, and how she arranged
words and create sentences. It
also gives her jobs, opportunities,
and confident.
The importance of using the correct
use of grammar is it demonstrates
your
knowledge of the rules in written
English, in the use of words, and
how you arrange
your words to create sentences that
generate an idea. It also attracts
jobs, better
opportunities, and gives you a
sense of confidence.
22. Can you Pin Point the
wroung speling in this
sintence? is the sPElling of
tommorrow correCT how
aBout the ourgan that
makes you taste. is it THE
tounge?
In writing, one should be mindful of
the correct spelling, capitalization of
nouns such as John, Mary, and the
President. Places should be
capitalized too such as Legazpi City,
Albay. Punctuations are put into place
to indicate a pause in the
sentence, such as this, that makes
the meaning clear and how to end a
thought just like this.
23. STRUCTURE
04
refers to the method where ideas
and evidence of facts are provided in
the text.
It is the framework of the story
24. First, most people in other countries somehow know this language.
Though people cannot speak English fluently, say in Brazil, some words
can be understood thanks to English movies, magazines, and signages
that they saw.
The English language is still the most widely used language in the
world.
Although there are some big contenders that threaten this spot like
Mandarin and
Spanish, we should also keep up by strengthening our English tongue.
Most students still fear the English language. Some are afraid to
speak the language, some have trouble writing in English. Though being
the second language in the Philippines, there may be several
advantages that one should strive for in being fluent in the language.
25. First, the English language is still the most widely used in the
world. Although some big contenders threaten this spot like Mandarin
and Spanish, we should also keep up by strengthening our English
tongue.
Second, most people in other countries somehow know this
language. Though people cannot speak English fluently, say in Brazil,
some words can be understood thanks to English movies, magazines,
and signages that they saw.
Lastly, you can connect to various people regardless of their
nationality, race, and native language as long as they can speak English
too. Also, it is still the language of science, computers, constitution and
many more. English is our passport to the world.
28. PRACTICE TASK
02
Task 2- Identify the areas described in editing a
composition. Write the letter of the correct answer.
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29. PRACTICE TASK
03
Task 3- Find the error in the given statements.
Identify as to what area the error falls.
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30. Remember:
Content
• Facts
• Information
Grammar
• Subject-Verb
Agreement
• Verb Tenses
Mechanics
• Spelling
• Capitalization
• Punctuation
• Sentence
Format
Structure
• Outline or
map of the
composition
31. After learning the four areas of
composition, how will it help you write a
well-written composition such as a simple
paragraph, essay, or even short story?
32. ASSESSMENT
Read the essay carefully. Identify and assess
the content, grammar, mechanics, and structure or
organization of an essay. Write your answer on a
separate sheet of paper.
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42. 5
We should capitalize the first letter of
nouns if they are common nouns such as
Teacher, Principal, Mother, Father, etc.
T F
43. PRACTICE TASK
02
Task 2- Identify the areas described in editing a
composition. Write the letter of the correct answer on
your answer sheet.
44. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
Using transition phrases such as more so,
additionally, however, finally, and the likes can
improve the sequence of ideas presented in an
essay.
d. Structure
or
Organization
1
45. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
It is one of the basic elements in learning the
English language. It includes rules, use of words,
and working around with the most exact words to fit
an idea.
d. Structure
or
Organization
2
46. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
In writing a paragraph, all sentences containing an
idea should correlate with each other. The writer must
be conscious of remaining one topic and plan where
the idea is heading.
d. Structure
or
Organization
3
47. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
Our way of writing tells a lot about the writer, if we
have written with lots of errors and being hasty and
careless with our use of words and misuse of proper
nouns, readers might not read our work.
d. Structure
or
Organization
4
48. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
Consistency in writing should also be observed
when writing a paragraph. If the action is already
done, all verbs should be in the past tense and the
idea should maintain in the past.
d. Structure
or
Organization
5
49. PRACTICE TASK
03
Task 3- Find the error in the given statements.
Identify as to what area the error falls.
Use a separate sheet of paper for your answer.
50. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
Technology in this recent time, dominates the
human race when it comes to work efficiency. Work
and living will never be the same without it as it can be
found anywhere today. However, most people lost
their jobs due to the pandemic.
d. Structure
or
Organization
1
51. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
Ultimately, avoid eating processed foods because it
is full of preservatives and undergo unnatural food
production. To achieve a healthy body, first and foremost,
we should follow the food pyramid as our guide to healthy
eating. The biggest part in the food group that what we
should be consuming more belongs to water and
carbohydrates to hydrate us and support energy.
d. Structure
or
Organization
2
52. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
the beggining of bussines starts with the
Capitalist. Manny on the other hand. is one of the key
Resorces when it comes to starting a bussines? aside
from being intelligent and Smart in starting a businees,
one shud consider what r in demand in the the Market.
d. Structure
or
Organization
3
53. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
July is living the American dream. She is working
and studied at the same time for her to pay her college
tuition. Though it was harder, she has been to endure
all of this because not all people can live in the United
States. She will be making it.
d. Structure
or
Organization
4
62. PRACTICE TASK
02
Task 2- Identify the areas described in editing a
composition. Write the letter of the correct answer on
your answer sheet.
63. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
Using transition phrases such as more so,
additionally, however, finally, and the likes can
improve the sequence of ideas presented in an
essay.
d. Structure
or
Organization
1
64. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
It is one of the basic elements in learning the
English language. It includes rules, use of words,
and working around with the most exact words to fit
an idea.
d. Structure
or
Organization
2
65. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
In writing a paragraph, all sentences containing an
idea should correlate with each other. The writer must
be conscious of remaining one topic and plan where
the idea is heading.
d. Structure
or
Organization
3
66. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
Our way of writing tells a lot about the writer, if we
have written with lots of errors and being hasty and
careless with our use of words and misuse of proper
nouns, readers might not read our work.
d. Structure
or
Organization
4
67. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
Consistency in writing should also be observed
when writing a paragraph. If the action is already
done, all verbs should be in the past tense and the
idea should maintain in the past.
d. Structure
or
Organization
5
69. PRACTICE TASK
03
Task 3- Find the error in the given statements.
Identify as to what area the error falls.
Use a separate sheet of paper for your answer.
70. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
Technology in this recent time, dominates the
human race when it comes to work efficiency. Work
and living will never be the same without it as it can be
found anywhere today. However, most people lost
their jobs due to the pandemic.
d. Structure
or
Organization
1
71. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
Ultimately, avoid eating processed foods because
it is full of preservatives and undergo unnatural food
production. To achieve a healthy body, first and
foremost, we should follow the food pyramid as our guide
to healthy eating. The biggest part in the food group that
what we should be consuming more belongs to water
and carbohydrates to hydrate us and support energy.
d. Structure
or
Organization
2
72. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
the beggining of bussines starts with the
Capitalist. Manny on the other hand. is one of the key
Resorces when it comes to starting a bussines? aside
from being intelligent and Smart in starting a businees,
one shud consider what r in demand in the the Market.
d. Structure
or
Organization
3
73. a. Content b. Grammar c. Mechanics
July is living the American dream. She is working
and studied at the same time for her to pay her college
tuition. Though it was harder, she has been to endure
all of this because not all people can live in the United
States. She will be making it.
d. Structure
or
Organization
4
75. Problems of Internet
On an individual level, the internet can cause a lot of problems-one of the
most significant being procrastination. Procrastination is the habit of postponing
a task indefinitely. Social Media platforms such as Facebook and other similar
sites, are to be blamed as it is easy to get sucked into them. countless hours
could disappear if the user does not keep track of time.
However, the internet is not all bad. There are many other things that you
can learn. For instance, a technical subject such as Physics can be better
understood through the help of videos. Abstract subjects such as Mathematics
are understood better through the help of websites and forums dedicated to
explain the concepts better.
In conclusion, the Internet is like a double -edged sword. It can be a great
boon if used in the right way. It provides valuable knowledge and resources to
better yourself. However, it can also be easy to distract yourself and waste
countless hours of your time.
Editor's Notes
I will show you different signages and we will try to figure out its content and message.
We have here the first example. Who wants to read?
Thank you.
Who wants to say something about the signage? What does it tell us? What does it mean?
How about this one? Is the signage correct? Or Does it cause confusion to you?
How about this example?
In the video it is a must for us to be consistent in our writing.
Grammar is the foundation of communication and makes our writing clearer and easier to be understood.
It is not only what is said is important but also how and how well.
In the new normal we are given the opportunity to explore and learn many mobile websites that can easily help us make well written compositions.
But, it is a must that we know the atleast the basic rules of mechanics in writing.
Structure is how the story is organized. It is the framework of the story. You can think of structure as the outline of the story or the map of its construction. When an author writes a story, he or she begins with a framework of the story.
Never make a one sentence paragraph.
What did you observe?
Indentions of the first word of the first sentence in the paragraph. Used transitional words such as first, second and lastly. There is a logical arrangement of the sentences.
If no time proceed to slide number 65.
I will give each of you a copy of our LAS for today’s lesson and you are going to answer practice tasks no. 1-3. You can either submit or answer through a google form if you can not submit for some reasons. I will just send you the link in our GC.
For the assessment, you can either submit or send your outputs by messenger, email or text message.