The letter provides feedback on a presentation given by Ashleigh about local regeneration ideas. While the presentation showed an awareness of issues and referenced the audience well, the letter notes that the ideas seemed jumbled and unorganized. It advises preparing ideas in more detail for the next stage. Looking forward, the letter hopes to see how Ashleigh develops her ideas and takes on the feedback, with a follow up planned for early December to review her campaign development and draft work.

1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Ashleigh,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 22nd October. It was a
good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can help
get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had some good references
to audience and some awareness of the issues.
I did, however feel that you need a lot preparation of your ideas. It seemed
quite jumbled and unorganised, which didn’t present your campaign in the best
light. At the next stage you need to be ready to discuss your audience and
campaign ideas in much more detail.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was basic and something we may be
interested in hearing more about in the future.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com