The document is a letter providing feedback on a presentation about local regeneration ideas. It compliments the understanding of the brief and community focus shown. Some minor suggestions are made to consider how the documentary could be distributed and to provide more details on the proposed regeneration and calls to action. Overall, the presentation is praised and the letter looks forward to seeing how the ideas further develop in upcoming drafts and presentations.

1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Georgie,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 18th October. It was a
very good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can
help get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had an excellent
understanding of the brief and a good community focus. You were aware of
your audience. You had clearly prepared well, done detailed research and
worked well together.
I did, however feel that you could consider where your documentary could be
shown – channel/special screening/online/local cinema etc. At the next stage
you could be more detailed on HOW you want it to regenerate and what you
want the public to do.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was excellent and something we are very
interested in hearing more about.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com