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Demi gave a presentation on ideas for getting local community involvement in regeneration efforts. While the presentation showed an awareness of the issues and referenced the audience well, E Sim felt it needed more preparation as the ideas seemed jumbled and unorganized. Overall, the presentation was basic but E Sim is interested to see how Demi further develops the ideas and incorporates feedback to improve the campaign, which E Sim will review again in December. E Sim encourages Demi to keep referring to the original brief.
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The poem portrays men as believing that women talk excessively about trivial matters like gossip and small talk. The men see women as prattling, yapping, chattering, and niggling rather than having meaningful conversations. The men feel that a woman should be a good listener who does not interrupt or criticize a man when he is speaking.
Presentation 2
This presentation document outlines the requirements for a second campaign presentation, including campaign ideas, name/logo/slogan choices and reasoning, two to three selected products with content details and target audience suitability, mock-ups or designs, and updates based on feedback. Students are instructed to clearly link all elements to the original brief, persuade the client that their ideas meet demands, and reference examples from last year's presentations.
Harriet and victoria feedbck letter
The letter thanks Harriet and Victoria for their presentation on addressing digital piracy and intellectual property. It provides positive feedback on their understanding of the task, interesting ideas, well-planned presentation, and good teamwork. The writer looks forward to seeing how their ideas develop further by the following week when a draft of their campaign will be presented.
Bill feedbck letter
The letter thanks Bill for his presentation on addressing digital piracy and intellectual property. It notes that Bill showed an excellent understanding of the task and had some good ideas for his specific audience. The letter provides feedback that Bill should ensure his choices carefully consider the demands of the brief and get more feedback from his target audience. It looks forward to seeing how Bill's ideas develop further when draft work is presented in December.
Max , george, shai feedbck letter
The letter thanks Shai, Max, and George for their presentation on addressing digital piracy and intellectual property. It notes they demonstrated a good understanding of the task and had interesting ideas and a well-planned presentation. The letter provides advice to continue refining their ideas, including providing more details on how their solutions would suit the target audience. It looks forward to seeing how the group further develops their campaign ideas and draft work in the coming weeks.
Charles and joel feedbck letter
The letter provides feedback on a presentation by Charles and Joel about addressing digital piracy and intellectual property. It notes that the presentation showed good research but needed more details about their planned campaign and stronger links to the original brief. Joel's quiet speaking volume made his information difficult to hear. Overall, the presentation showed potential but required further development and incorporation of the feedback to improve.
Ravannah and chloe feedbck letter
The letter thanks Ravannah and Chloe for their presentation on addressing the problem of digital piracy and intellectual property. It notes that they demonstrated a good understanding of the task and presented some interesting initial ideas and a well-planned presentation. Some speech was a bit fast and reading the presentation cards was less engaging. Overall, the presentation was good and addressed the brief, and the writer looks forward to seeing how their ideas develop further.
Sarah, georgia, danielle and shannon feedbck letter
The document is a letter providing feedback on a presentation given by four students - Sarah, Georgia, Shannon and Danielle. It notes that while the presentation showed some initial understanding of the topic of addressing digital piracy, it needed more planning and preparation as there was a lot of giggling and uncertainty. The letter encourages the students to develop their ideas further, take on the feedback, and focus more closely on the brief for their next presentation and subsequent work.
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Sarah, georgia, danielle and shannon feedbck letter
Sarah, georgia, danielle and shannon feedbck letter
Demi
- 1. Regeneration 23th October 2013 Dear Demi, Thank you very much for your presentation dated 22nd October. It was a good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can help get people involved in local regeneration. From watching your presentation, I can see that you had some good references to audience and some awareness of the issues. I did, however feel that you need a lot preparation of your ideas. It seemed quite jumbled and unorganised, which didn’t present your campaign in the best light. At the next stage you need to be ready to show the work and demonstrate the findings and ideas so far. Overall, I feel that the presentation was basic and something we may be interested in hearing more about in the future. I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation. I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the development of your campaign and some draft work. Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task. Kind Regards E Sim On behalf of Regeneration. Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk www.regeneration.com