The letter thanks Ravannah and Chloe for their presentation on addressing the problem of digital piracy and intellectual property. It notes that they demonstrated a good understanding of the task and presented some interesting initial ideas and a well-planned presentation. Some speech was a bit fast and reading the presentation cards was less engaging. Overall, the presentation was good and addressed the brief, and the writer looks forward to seeing how their ideas develop further.

1. ©opyright Heroes
Film house
Baldock, Herts SG7 6DZ
Web: www.copyrightheroes.co.uk
14th October 2014
Dear Ravannah and Chloe
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 14th October. It was a good insight into your
progress and ideas so far considering how you can help address the problem of digital piracy and intellectual
property.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had a good understanding of the task, with some
interesting ideas and a well planned presentation. You also made some good comments about your survey
and results, along with the issues that the results raised. There were frequent, clear links to the brief
throughout the presentation, which was pleasing to see our aims being considered.
To be successful, continue with what you are doing and ensure all choices carefully consider the demands of
the brief. Some speech was a little fast and some times there was reading from the cards which was less
engaging however.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was very good, with some good links to the task and brief.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the advice given here and the
feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the development of your campaign and
some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Sincerely,
ESim
On behalf of Copyright Heroes.