This document outlines a presentation on improving a community project presentation. It includes three learning objectives: 1) Review assessment feedback, 2) Use the feedback to improve the presentation, and 3) Peer-assess a partner's improvements. The document provides guidance on each objective, including reviewing comments on strengths and areas for improvement, setting a target for improvement, making changes to address the target, and providing feedback to a partner on their changes.

1. Starter: in what ways would you
improve this presentation?
Annotate (label) the presentation.
Identify at least three ways in which you
would change the presentation to improve
it.

2. My idea for a community project is to create a
youth centre that all the young people in my
area can use. The idea behind this youth centre
is that children can use the facilities to play
sports, to socialise and to explore their interests.
The youth centre will have three
rooms and will have all the latest
sports facilities.

3. Digital Studies
Assessment Feedback
STAR opportunity
Date:

4. Homework
You have been given feedback on your Home
Learning Project, based on ‘Child Soldiers’.
The stories were mostly fantastic – very
imaginative, original and emotional.
For homework – use the EBI comments to make
improvements to your HLP.
Deadline:

5. Learning Objectives
Learning Objectives Learning Outcomes
Review your assessment feedback
You have produced a written
response to your WWW/EBI
comments
Use your EBI comments to improve
your presentation
You have made significant additions
or changes to your planning or
presentation
Peer-assess your partner’s
improvements
You have provided written feedback
on your partner’s improvements

6. LO: Review your assessment feedback
Read the comments about WWW and EBI on your
Digital Studies assessment.
You should provide:
Pupil response – what do you think you did well and
what do you believe you could improve? Do you agree
with the feedback?
STAR target – using the EBI feedback, set yourself a
STAR target that you will focus on during this lesson.

7. LO: Use your EBI comments to
improve your presentation
Using the EBI comments and your STAR
target, make significant changes to either
your planning or your presentation.
This should demonstrate your ability to
improve your own work, utilising your
strengths to build on areas that require
development.

8. LO: Peer-assess your partner’s
improvements
With a work partner:
- Inform your partner what your STAR target for the lesson was
- Swap your assessment with your work partner
- Assess your partner’s work and provide a written response using
the following question…
How has your partner used their STAR target to improve their
work?
Next, provide your partner with a new…
WWW:
EBI:

9. Learning Objectives
Learning Objectives Learning Outcomes
Review your assessment feedback
You have produced a written
response to your WWW/EBI
comments
Use your EBI comments to improve
your presentation
You have made significant additions
or changes to your planning or
presentation
Peer-assess your partner’s
improvements
You have provided written feedback
on your partner’s improvements