Writing the Abstract
     RWJF | GRC | CAPS
What you need to say:

•   Motivation

    Problem

•   Approach

•   Results

•   Conclusions
Motivation




Why should we care?
Problem

Why aren’t things working right now?
Approach



What have you done to
resolve the problem?
Results



...so how did that all
work out?
Conclusions




What do your findings
mean for everyone?
A Good Abstract


•   Should leave the reader with a clear understanding of the
    motivation, problem, approach, results, and conclusion of
    the research

    Should be easily understandable and organized

•   Should take no more than a minute or two to understand.
The catch



Do it in as few words as
humanly possible.
Practice


Elevator Pitch: Can you
sum up your research in
the time it takes an
elevator to get to the
third floor?
Tips


•   Avoid unnecessary words.

•   “However, the swift
    brown fox nevertheless
    jumped over the lazy dog”
Mistakes people make


Too long: Way beyond the word
limit. It’s there for a reason - people
are much more likely to learn about
your research if you can describe it
simply and succinctly.
Mistakes people make


Too much detail: You’re writing a
whole paper/poster too. There are
other venues to get into the nitty
gritty. Stick to the broad themes,
and mention only one or two
specific results.
Mistakes people make


Too short: Don’t go too far
overboard in making it
succinct. You still need to
cast your findings in the
broader field.
Mistakes people make



Leaving out important
information - An abstract must
give a clear indication of what is in
the paper.

Writing the abstract