PAPER 1
WRITING
GCE’ O Level
1123 ENGLISH LANGUAGE

By Saima Abedi
WRITING (PAPER 1)
 Section

1
Directed Writing
 Section

2
Creative writing
SECTION 1
DIRECTED WRITING
DIRECTED WRITING


Marks: 30

 Word

Limit: 200- 300 words

 Time:

30- 45 min
DIRECTED WRITING
Types of function/ Situational writing:
Letters (formal & informal)
 Reports (informative, investigative)
 Accounts
 News report
 Magazine Articles
 Speeches (Persuasive & Informative)
 Leaflets

DIRECTED WRITING
 Only

one situation is set.

 Read the
 Do

question carefully.

not ignore any details and do not

change important facts in the situation.
 Elaborate

all the content points provided

as each point is of 5 marks.
DIRECTED WRITING
DIRECTED WRITING
Consider the following questions:


Audience (Who am I writing for?)
public, principal, teacher, friend, company manager, town
council, police etc



Purpose (Why am I writing this?)
to explain, inform. instruct, convince and persuade, sell,
give an account of something I witnessed, to complain
about something, etc



Format (How is this piece to be written?)
report, letter, account, article. statement, review. speech
etc



Language (What is the tone I should use?)
formal, informal, persuasive, suggestive, informative,
argumentative etc
DIRECTED WRITING


Five paragraphs should be formed.



Introduction (reiterate the situation)



Body (elaborate the three content points in
separate paragraphs)



Conclusion



Leave a line after each paragraph.



Paragraphs should all start from the left.
DIRECTED WRITING
 Students

should collect and read the samples

of each type of function writing.
 Gather

helpful phrases (opening and closing

phrases; starting of new paragraphs etc.).
 Practise
 Create

such type of writing.

their own situational writing

questions.
FORMAL LETTER
HELPFUL PHRASES
Type of Letters
Complaint

Opening
 I am a resident of the
Gulshan-e- Iqbal and
I am writing in to
complain about...

Closing
I seriously hope that
you would look into
the complaints that I
have raised and
remedy the situation
as soon as possible.
Thank you.

 Invitation

On behalf of the
school, we would like
to invite you to our
Annual Speech and
Prize Giving Day to
be held on March 15th
in the school hall.

We sincerely hope
that you will accept
our invitation and we
look forward to your
presence on that day.
Thank you.
MARKING SCHEME


Marks: 30

Task Fulfillment (Use Band Descriptor):
15 marks
Language (Use Band Descriptor)
:
15 marks


Please indicate the TF mark first at the
end of the essay, then language marks
e.g. 10 + 12 = 22/ 30



Candidates who address only two points
must be in Band 3 or below for TF.
LANGUAGE


Variety of Sentence Structures



Appropriate Tenses



Wide Vocabulary



Accurate Punctuation



Correct Spellings



Linked Paragraphs
TASK FULFILLMENT


Inclusion and elaboration of three content points



Appropriate format



Suitable tone and register



Apt beginning and ending



Given information used to justify personal opinion



A clear understanding of the task and content
SECTION 2
CREATIVE WRITING
CREATIVE WRITING


Marks: 30

 Word

Limit: 350- 500words

 Time:

45min – 1 hour
CREATIVE WRITING


Types of Essay



Descriptive



Narrative



Argumentative



Discursive



Abstract / one word / themeless



Personal Opinion
CREATIVE WRITING


Five topics are set.



Candidates will choose any one of the five topics.



They should read the questions carefully and choose
the topic which gives them the best chance of writing
an essay of the required length.



It is advisable to make a plan.



Planning or any rough work should be crossed out
with a pencil.
CREATIVE WRITING


Minimum 6 and maximum 10 paragraphs should be
formed.



Introduction: The essay must have a good beginning
to capture the attention of the reader.



Body: The middle section of the essay should convey
the main steps in the story or the details of the
description or the main points of the argument.
CREATIVE WRITING


Conclusion: Finally, the essay should have a
strong ending. It may provide the conclusion to
an argument, or it may move to the general view
after some precise description of details, or it
may provide the climax or round off a story.



Use transitions to connect the points and
paragraphs.
MARKING SCHEME


The 'best fit' principle is applied, as in the
following table.



Emphasis is on quality of Language; comments
on Content used to adjust mark within 8 Bands.
CREATIVE WRITING
LANGUAGE


Variety of Sentence Structures



Appropriate Tenses



Wide Vocabulary



Accurate Punctuation



Correct Spellings



Linked Paragraphs
CONTENT

 Compositions

should be interesting and

consistently relevant to the theme.
 Discursive

and argumentative essays are well

developed, logical, based on facts and figures.
 Descriptive

essays have well-developed imagery

(mental picture).
 Narratives

are complex, sophisticated and may

contain devices such as flashbacks.
Reference:
www.cie.org.uk

Writing paper ppt final

  • 1.
    PAPER 1 WRITING GCE’ OLevel 1123 ENGLISH LANGUAGE By Saima Abedi
  • 2.
    WRITING (PAPER 1) Section 1 Directed Writing  Section 2 Creative writing
  • 3.
  • 4.
    DIRECTED WRITING  Marks: 30 Word Limit: 200- 300 words  Time: 30- 45 min
  • 5.
    DIRECTED WRITING Types offunction/ Situational writing: Letters (formal & informal)  Reports (informative, investigative)  Accounts  News report  Magazine Articles  Speeches (Persuasive & Informative)  Leaflets 
  • 6.
    DIRECTED WRITING  Only onesituation is set.  Read the  Do question carefully. not ignore any details and do not change important facts in the situation.  Elaborate all the content points provided as each point is of 5 marks.
  • 7.
  • 8.
    DIRECTED WRITING Consider thefollowing questions:  Audience (Who am I writing for?) public, principal, teacher, friend, company manager, town council, police etc  Purpose (Why am I writing this?) to explain, inform. instruct, convince and persuade, sell, give an account of something I witnessed, to complain about something, etc  Format (How is this piece to be written?) report, letter, account, article. statement, review. speech etc  Language (What is the tone I should use?) formal, informal, persuasive, suggestive, informative, argumentative etc
  • 9.
    DIRECTED WRITING  Five paragraphsshould be formed.  Introduction (reiterate the situation)  Body (elaborate the three content points in separate paragraphs)  Conclusion  Leave a line after each paragraph.  Paragraphs should all start from the left.
  • 10.
    DIRECTED WRITING  Students shouldcollect and read the samples of each type of function writing.  Gather helpful phrases (opening and closing phrases; starting of new paragraphs etc.).  Practise  Create such type of writing. their own situational writing questions.
  • 11.
    FORMAL LETTER HELPFUL PHRASES Typeof Letters Complaint Opening  I am a resident of the Gulshan-e- Iqbal and I am writing in to complain about... Closing I seriously hope that you would look into the complaints that I have raised and remedy the situation as soon as possible. Thank you.  Invitation On behalf of the school, we would like to invite you to our Annual Speech and Prize Giving Day to be held on March 15th in the school hall. We sincerely hope that you will accept our invitation and we look forward to your presence on that day. Thank you.
  • 12.
    MARKING SCHEME  Marks: 30 TaskFulfillment (Use Band Descriptor): 15 marks Language (Use Band Descriptor) : 15 marks  Please indicate the TF mark first at the end of the essay, then language marks e.g. 10 + 12 = 22/ 30  Candidates who address only two points must be in Band 3 or below for TF.
  • 15.
    LANGUAGE  Variety of SentenceStructures  Appropriate Tenses  Wide Vocabulary  Accurate Punctuation  Correct Spellings  Linked Paragraphs
  • 16.
    TASK FULFILLMENT  Inclusion andelaboration of three content points  Appropriate format  Suitable tone and register  Apt beginning and ending  Given information used to justify personal opinion  A clear understanding of the task and content
  • 17.
  • 18.
    CREATIVE WRITING  Marks: 30 Word Limit: 350- 500words  Time: 45min – 1 hour
  • 19.
    CREATIVE WRITING  Types ofEssay  Descriptive  Narrative  Argumentative  Discursive  Abstract / one word / themeless  Personal Opinion
  • 20.
    CREATIVE WRITING  Five topicsare set.  Candidates will choose any one of the five topics.  They should read the questions carefully and choose the topic which gives them the best chance of writing an essay of the required length.  It is advisable to make a plan.  Planning or any rough work should be crossed out with a pencil.
  • 21.
    CREATIVE WRITING  Minimum 6and maximum 10 paragraphs should be formed.  Introduction: The essay must have a good beginning to capture the attention of the reader.  Body: The middle section of the essay should convey the main steps in the story or the details of the description or the main points of the argument.
  • 22.
    CREATIVE WRITING  Conclusion: Finally,the essay should have a strong ending. It may provide the conclusion to an argument, or it may move to the general view after some precise description of details, or it may provide the climax or round off a story.  Use transitions to connect the points and paragraphs.
  • 23.
    MARKING SCHEME  The 'bestfit' principle is applied, as in the following table.  Emphasis is on quality of Language; comments on Content used to adjust mark within 8 Bands.
  • 24.
  • 25.
    LANGUAGE  Variety of SentenceStructures  Appropriate Tenses  Wide Vocabulary  Accurate Punctuation  Correct Spellings  Linked Paragraphs
  • 26.
    CONTENT  Compositions should beinteresting and consistently relevant to the theme.  Discursive and argumentative essays are well developed, logical, based on facts and figures.  Descriptive essays have well-developed imagery (mental picture).  Narratives are complex, sophisticated and may contain devices such as flashbacks.
  • 27.