Welcome to COMM 202
T26 & T33
Tutorial 3
Week 5: Cover Letters
Austin Smith
Disconnect from technology please
Breathing Exercise
Through it all, we
attempt to bring
balance to the present
moment,
understanding that in
patience lies wisdom,
knowing that what will
come next will be
determined in large
measure by how we
are now.”
Jon Kabatt-Zinn
Opening Lesson
StrengthsQuest
Skills Matrix
Job Research
Cover Letter
Resume
Interviews
Where are we at?
Today’s Key Learning's
Agenda
Cover Letters
Activity
Action Items
Cover Letters
Why?
1. SHOWS YOUR INTENTIONS & INTERESTS IN THE JOB
 SHOWS SINCERITY AND RESEARCH
2. DEMONSTRATES ABILITY TO COMMUNICATE & WRITE PROFESSIONA
3. OPPORTUNITY TO ELABORATE ON YOUR EXPERIENCES
 DRAWN FROM YOUR SKILLS MATRIX
4. LET’S YOU SHOW A LITTLE
PERSONALITY!
Resume vs. Cover Letter
What’s the difference?
Resume is about YOU
Cover Letter is about THEM
6 Elements of Cover Letter
FORMATTING & INTEGRATION
BRANDING TO COMPANY
OPENING
SKILLS MATCH
CLOSING
Dear ,
My name is , and
I applying to .
Opening
Dear ,
My name is , and
I applying to .
Opening
Opening Take-Aways
 Expresses keen and genuine interest and/or passion for position
 Makes a clear expression of the skills/experience matching the job
description
 Genuine and unique primary and secondary research indicating interest in
company (Make sure the research you show is tied to your interest)
 Name Drop (where applicable)
 Be unique!
You need a hook!
Another Example
Another Example
How fast can you change four tires? One hour? Ten minutes? A few years
ago I witnessed a Formula One team do it in 2.7 seconds. They said a
perfect run would be just one second. In everything that I do I strive to
reach that one second – that perfect test score, that perfect presentation,
that perfect career.
After speaking with Jake Woodson, a recent hire, Dion Chen, and other
industry professionals, I know that my personality and passion lies in
sales and trading. Through my unique athletic background and passion, I
will provide competitiveness and drive that will set a benchmark for future
interns. I cannot wait to sit on a trading floor, execute trades, and engage
in research while receiving mentorship from the most world-renowned
investment bank. A career with Goldman Sachs is my one second and
this is how I will help Goldman reach its own one second ideal:
Your turn!
Skills Matching
Skills Matching
 Skills
 From job descriptions & skills matrix
 Experience
 Best relevant experiences
 Education
 How you’ll leverage your BCom
 Matching Qualifications
 Any other qualifications
If it doesn’t belong, don’t include it!
Skills Matching – Bullet Point Style
Skills Matching – Paragraph Style
Skills Matching Takeaways?
 Use STARL to your advantage – Action and Link!
 Each line proves you have the necessary skills &
aptitudes to perform on the job
 Always link to the company/position if not obvious
 Use skills listed in the job description
 Sometimes, don’t be afraid to take risks
Closing
“Thank you for looking at my application. I hope that I have
shown you that my interpersonal skills, my leadership skills, and
my ability to perform on a team make me a perfect fit for ABC
position. Thank you very much and I hope to hear from you
soon.”
Closing – My Example
What could I have done better?
What to add in your closing?
 Make a good final impression
 Show your passion
 Restate skills with a different wording
 Give genuine thanks
 Leave a call to action
 Tie to previous examples/stories
What to add in your closing?
Address the elephant in the room
 Bad Grades
 Relocation
Closing Examples
Closing Examples
 Make a good final impression
 Show your passion
 Restate skills with a different wording
 Give genuine thanks
 Leave a call to action
 Tie to previous examples/stories
Branding?
 Consistent throughout the
Cover Letter
 Fits with the company’s
values & yours
 Good impression
 Use Research Assignment
Integration?
 CL & Resume use SAME
formatting
 Stand Out!
 CL reflects & expands on
resume
 Be mindful of spacing
Cover Letter Formatting (Address)
Date
Contact Name
Their Title
Company
Address
City, Province Postal Code
Re: Position Title
Dear Mr. / Ms. Their Last Name OR Hiring
Manager
If unknown, this
can be omitted
AVOID:
“To Whom it May
Concern”
“Dear Sir or Madam”
Country is typically
unnecessary unless
applying outside of
Canada
Example - Address
Cover Letter Formatting (Sign Off)
Sincerely,
Your Name
BCom Candidate 20XX
Sauder School of Business
Attached: Resume
Regards,
Best,
Written signature optional
(provide more space if
including)
Attached: Resume, Transcript
Use “Enclosed: …” only if sending
application by mail
BCom Candidate 2016
These spaces
are important
Example - Closing
CAN you do
the job?
Do you
WANT
the job?
Are you
the right
FIT?
CAN. WANT. FIT
BCC News 202 Reminders
 Skills Matrix due
Friday, February
12h on Turnitin at 2
PM!
 Job Posting
Research
Assignment due
Sunday (February
7th) via Turnitin
 Sign up for Office
Hours!
 Tutorial next week!
 Sign up for
Workshops to get
your 3% bonus!
 Telus and Best Buy
Trek Programs
Closing Lesson
“Through it all, we attempt to
bring balance to the present
moment, understanding that in
patience lies wisdom, knowing
that what will come next will
be determined in large
measure by how we are now.”
Jon Kabat-Zinn
Be present

Week 5: Cover Letters

  • 1.
    Welcome to COMM202 T26 & T33 Tutorial 3 Week 5: Cover Letters Austin Smith Disconnect from technology please
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    Through it all,we attempt to bring balance to the present moment, understanding that in patience lies wisdom, knowing that what will come next will be determined in large measure by how we are now.” Jon Kabatt-Zinn Opening Lesson
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    StrengthsQuest Skills Matrix Job Research CoverLetter Resume Interviews Where are we at?
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    Today’s Key Learning's Agenda CoverLetters Activity Action Items
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    Why? 1. SHOWS YOURINTENTIONS & INTERESTS IN THE JOB  SHOWS SINCERITY AND RESEARCH 2. DEMONSTRATES ABILITY TO COMMUNICATE & WRITE PROFESSIONA 3. OPPORTUNITY TO ELABORATE ON YOUR EXPERIENCES  DRAWN FROM YOUR SKILLS MATRIX 4. LET’S YOU SHOW A LITTLE PERSONALITY!
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    Resume vs. CoverLetter What’s the difference?
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    Resume is aboutYOU Cover Letter is about THEM
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    6 Elements ofCover Letter FORMATTING & INTEGRATION BRANDING TO COMPANY OPENING SKILLS MATCH CLOSING
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    Dear , My nameis , and I applying to . Opening
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    Dear , My nameis , and I applying to . Opening
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    Opening Take-Aways  Expresseskeen and genuine interest and/or passion for position  Makes a clear expression of the skills/experience matching the job description  Genuine and unique primary and secondary research indicating interest in company (Make sure the research you show is tied to your interest)  Name Drop (where applicable)  Be unique!
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    Another Example How fastcan you change four tires? One hour? Ten minutes? A few years ago I witnessed a Formula One team do it in 2.7 seconds. They said a perfect run would be just one second. In everything that I do I strive to reach that one second – that perfect test score, that perfect presentation, that perfect career. After speaking with Jake Woodson, a recent hire, Dion Chen, and other industry professionals, I know that my personality and passion lies in sales and trading. Through my unique athletic background and passion, I will provide competitiveness and drive that will set a benchmark for future interns. I cannot wait to sit on a trading floor, execute trades, and engage in research while receiving mentorship from the most world-renowned investment bank. A career with Goldman Sachs is my one second and this is how I will help Goldman reach its own one second ideal:
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    Skills Matching  Skills From job descriptions & skills matrix  Experience  Best relevant experiences  Education  How you’ll leverage your BCom  Matching Qualifications  Any other qualifications If it doesn’t belong, don’t include it!
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    Skills Matching –Bullet Point Style
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    Skills Matching –Paragraph Style
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    Skills Matching Takeaways? Use STARL to your advantage – Action and Link!  Each line proves you have the necessary skills & aptitudes to perform on the job  Always link to the company/position if not obvious  Use skills listed in the job description  Sometimes, don’t be afraid to take risks
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    Closing “Thank you forlooking at my application. I hope that I have shown you that my interpersonal skills, my leadership skills, and my ability to perform on a team make me a perfect fit for ABC position. Thank you very much and I hope to hear from you soon.”
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    Closing – MyExample What could I have done better?
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    What to addin your closing?  Make a good final impression  Show your passion  Restate skills with a different wording  Give genuine thanks  Leave a call to action  Tie to previous examples/stories
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    What to addin your closing? Address the elephant in the room  Bad Grades  Relocation
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    Closing Examples  Makea good final impression  Show your passion  Restate skills with a different wording  Give genuine thanks  Leave a call to action  Tie to previous examples/stories
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    Branding?  Consistent throughoutthe Cover Letter  Fits with the company’s values & yours  Good impression  Use Research Assignment
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    Integration?  CL &Resume use SAME formatting  Stand Out!  CL reflects & expands on resume  Be mindful of spacing
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    Cover Letter Formatting(Address) Date Contact Name Their Title Company Address City, Province Postal Code Re: Position Title Dear Mr. / Ms. Their Last Name OR Hiring Manager If unknown, this can be omitted AVOID: “To Whom it May Concern” “Dear Sir or Madam” Country is typically unnecessary unless applying outside of Canada
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    Cover Letter Formatting(Sign Off) Sincerely, Your Name BCom Candidate 20XX Sauder School of Business Attached: Resume Regards, Best, Written signature optional (provide more space if including) Attached: Resume, Transcript Use “Enclosed: …” only if sending application by mail BCom Candidate 2016 These spaces are important
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    CAN you do thejob? Do you WANT the job? Are you the right FIT? CAN. WANT. FIT
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    BCC News 202Reminders  Skills Matrix due Friday, February 12h on Turnitin at 2 PM!  Job Posting Research Assignment due Sunday (February 7th) via Turnitin  Sign up for Office Hours!  Tutorial next week!  Sign up for Workshops to get your 3% bonus!  Telus and Best Buy Trek Programs
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    Closing Lesson “Through itall, we attempt to bring balance to the present moment, understanding that in patience lies wisdom, knowing that what will come next will be determined in large measure by how we are now.” Jon Kabat-Zinn
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Editor's Notes

  • #5 To get the interview
  • #10 Resume is this point of time looking back, cover letter is this point looking forward (how to add value to the company.. Address that in the cover letter)
  • #11 What do you need in an opening paragraph for the cover letter **it’s kind of like why you’re inspired to work there -when you read a book
  • #12 Never do this
  • #19 EA – Finance , Sauder – COOP , Whistler – Marketing , KPMG – Accounting, Vancouver Aquarium ***groups of 4  next 8 minutes , come up with the first 3 sentences for each company  You need to link back your opening in the conclusion
  • #20 Real life tinder, the bulk of the cover letter what are they asking for in HR, also the columns that we did with michelle last week
  • #32 Consistent formatting
  • #33 Really be specific on spacing
  • #37 If you can hit all 3 pieces in your cover letter then you’ve done a really good job
  • #38 Due at 2 pm on october 16th! Not midnight