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TAI 2014
Increasing awareness of
what good writing looks like.
What do the kids think good
writing looks like?
 How neat the work is
 How much is written
 Punctuation
 ‘Sparkly’ words
 Getting the words right
 Was quite surprised that there was no mention of the
actual quality of writing, kids we unable to articulate
past surface features.
 FOCUS – for children to be able to recognise features
that add impact to their writing. To know about some
deeper features that improve the quality of their writing.
Actions……
 Creating our FAB4
 Locating evidence within writing
 Buddy feedback
 Breaking down the elements
 phonics
Impact …..
 Varied and not consistent
 Biggest impact has been phonics
 Increased confidence
 Wanting to and able to write more, with increased
accuracy
 Can articulate some ways to improve writing, more so
when they say how their writing has improved.
 Word choice, detail and punctuation
 Individual goals for things we are trying to do
 Things to think about
 Still think good writing is about the amount
 Success Criteria is still a challenge – it is like new learning
every time

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TAI 2014: Improving Student Writing

  • 1. TAI 2014 Increasing awareness of what good writing looks like.
  • 2. What do the kids think good writing looks like?  How neat the work is  How much is written  Punctuation  ‘Sparkly’ words  Getting the words right  Was quite surprised that there was no mention of the actual quality of writing, kids we unable to articulate past surface features.  FOCUS – for children to be able to recognise features that add impact to their writing. To know about some deeper features that improve the quality of their writing.
  • 3. Actions……  Creating our FAB4  Locating evidence within writing  Buddy feedback  Breaking down the elements  phonics
  • 4. Impact …..  Varied and not consistent  Biggest impact has been phonics  Increased confidence  Wanting to and able to write more, with increased accuracy  Can articulate some ways to improve writing, more so when they say how their writing has improved.  Word choice, detail and punctuation  Individual goals for things we are trying to do  Things to think about  Still think good writing is about the amount  Success Criteria is still a challenge – it is like new learning every time