2. Self Assessment – writing targets Target Mark Comment Write with appropriate structure and organization. 1 2 3 4 5 I think that I did a good job at writing my speech. I felt organized and confident with my speech. I think that I did the appropriate structure. I am very happy with what I have done with my speech. Use quality openings 1 2 3 4 5 I liked my opening how I did some startling facts at the start and then at the end told that they could help. I think it started well. Use paragraphs effectively 1 2 3 4 5 I think I used the paragraphs effectively. They worked out good on the cue cards. There was a different point on each paragraph. Write with detail 1 2 3 4 5 I think there was a good amount of detail in my writing not to much and not to little. It was good Set out arguments and draw them to a conclusion effectively 1 2 3 4 5 I really liked my argument and what I said. And my conclusion came on effectively. I hope it made other people think what I thought about the poor children.