Treatment – final draft
Gabriella
Nikol
Ewelina
00:00 – 00:17
The opening sequence begins with an establishing shot of
park. GIRL is on the swing and unknown man (CLOWN) is
staring at her. GIRL shyly smiles to unknown man (CLOWN)and
he smiles back.
00:17 – 00:40
Suddenly GIRL gets up and runs home. She stops and look
back on the place where unknown man (CLOWN)was, but he is
no there anymore. She looks confused, but she carry on
running. She coming to front doors and starts to open them.
00:40 – 01:04
CLOWN is putting on his clown costume in the bathroom. Next
he is slowly putting on his makeup. The variety of shots
shows different stages of Clown doing his make-up.
01:04 – 01:12
CLOWN returns to the park, where GIRL was playing. Now he
has sharp tool and looking on swing, he starts to play with
this sharp tool on fence. Suddenly he starts to go to the
front of girl’s house dragging sharp tool over fence.
01:12 – 01:46
He walks and there is flashbacks to his childhood, he is in
his bed trying to sleep, but he is terrified as he thinks
that clown doll is alive. The fear in his eyes is shown by
extreme close up shots. Then is flash-forward and Clown is
carry on his walking. Then there is another flashback
showing clown toy is staring directly at him from his
shelf. There is again flash-forward and he is still gong to
the front of girl’s house. Another flashback to his
childhood when he is torturing this Clown doll, as he is
afraid of this doll. In the background can be hear that his
parents are arguing. Again flash-forward and he is carrying
on walking. Another flashback to his childhood when he is
throwing clown doll and starts crying.
01:46 – 01:52
Flash-forward, CLOWN is really close to the GIRL’S house. He
is walking and at the same time he is playing with the sharp
tool.
01:52 – 02:03
Clown stand before GIRL’S house and he is still playing with
this sharp tool. He is self-confident and seems that he knows
what he is doing. He starts looking GIRL’s window.

Treatment – draft2

  • 1.
    Treatment – finaldraft Gabriella Nikol Ewelina
  • 2.
    00:00 – 00:17 Theopening sequence begins with an establishing shot of park. GIRL is on the swing and unknown man (CLOWN) is staring at her. GIRL shyly smiles to unknown man (CLOWN)and he smiles back. 00:17 – 00:40 Suddenly GIRL gets up and runs home. She stops and look back on the place where unknown man (CLOWN)was, but he is no there anymore. She looks confused, but she carry on running. She coming to front doors and starts to open them. 00:40 – 01:04 CLOWN is putting on his clown costume in the bathroom. Next he is slowly putting on his makeup. The variety of shots shows different stages of Clown doing his make-up.
  • 3.
    01:04 – 01:12 CLOWNreturns to the park, where GIRL was playing. Now he has sharp tool and looking on swing, he starts to play with this sharp tool on fence. Suddenly he starts to go to the front of girl’s house dragging sharp tool over fence. 01:12 – 01:46 He walks and there is flashbacks to his childhood, he is in his bed trying to sleep, but he is terrified as he thinks that clown doll is alive. The fear in his eyes is shown by extreme close up shots. Then is flash-forward and Clown is carry on his walking. Then there is another flashback showing clown toy is staring directly at him from his shelf. There is again flash-forward and he is still gong to the front of girl’s house. Another flashback to his childhood when he is torturing this Clown doll, as he is afraid of this doll. In the background can be hear that his parents are arguing. Again flash-forward and he is carrying on walking. Another flashback to his childhood when he is throwing clown doll and starts crying.
  • 4.
    01:46 – 01:52 Flash-forward,CLOWN is really close to the GIRL’S house. He is walking and at the same time he is playing with the sharp tool. 01:52 – 02:03 Clown stand before GIRL’S house and he is still playing with this sharp tool. He is self-confident and seems that he knows what he is doing. He starts looking GIRL’s window.