SlideShare a Scribd company logo
Idea 1
1. Your working title
‘Dreamscan come true’
I chose thistitle because Ifeel likeitdescribesthe filmbasesreallywell andgivesagoodover
viewof the filmscontent. The whole ideaisabouta girl’sdreamcomingtrue butnot inthe
original way.So, the title fitsthe narrative reallywell withoutgivingtoomuchaway. I alsolike
the title because itsrolesof the tongue andis remember-able because of the well-knownsong
‘dreams’byGabrielle,whichisahit songfromthe early90’s.
2. Lengthof shortfilm
The predicted lengthof myshortfilmwill be between5-8minutes.
I thinkthisisa goodlengthof time because itwon’tmake the filmdrag meaningitwon’tget
boring.Havingitthislengthof time will enableme tofocusmore on the qualityandeffectsof
the filmas I onlyhave a limitedtimetoeditandproduce the film.Thiswill hopefulencourage
the meaningof the filmtocome acrossstronger as I’ll be able to focus more precisely onthe
small meaningful segmentsof the filmandthe editingwillalsohopefully be of higherquality.
3. Logline/tagline
‘Don’tstopdreaming.You neverknow whatmighthappen!?’
I have come up withthisideaformy logline as itaddsmore mysteryto the title of the film.Ithas
a directlinkto the title byusingthe word‘dreams’inboth,butextendsonthe audience’s
theoriesandknowledge aboutthe filmfromthe title.‘Don’tstopdreaming’suggeststhat a
dreamcouldhave beendreamtfora longtime andthe individual wassopassionate andstuck
on thisdreamnothingelse evercrossedtheirmind,it’sliketheywantedthisdreamtohappen
so badly they’re notgoingtogive upon it until itbecomestrue andthey’ll doeverythingthey
possible cantopursue it.‘youneverknow whatmighthappen’relatestothe title andsupports
it exactly,as itsuggestingthatsome essence of the dreammust have come true or something
bettermightof evenhappened.Youknow thisbythe use of it beingarhetorical questiongetting
the audience tofinishesplottingand writingthe storythemselvesuntil theyseethe true outline
and narrative.Italsotellsyouthatthere is goingtobe more to the story thanan individual
dreamingandit comingtrue,itsuggestsit’s goingtocome true ina particularwayor maybe ina
differentwaytohowthe individual waswantingwhichcould’veendedupbetter. Overall, Ithink
thislogline reallysumsupthe shortfilmmakingitan easydecisiontowhether it’sgoingtosuit
certainaudiencesbeforetheystartwatchingitor evenreadingthe blurb.AnotherreasonIthink
it’sgoodbecause it’squite remember-able inthe essence itstwocommonsayingsmix together
creatinga catchy logline.
4. Introductionof keycharacters
In myshort filmthere’sonlyone maincharacterthroughout the film, makingtheirpresents
importantandvital part for the filmtoflow smoothly.Mycharacter isa teen(15 yearsold) girl
whohas lovedtodance and hasn’tstoppeddancing since herfirststeps.She haslongbrown
hair,5feet2in,has a muscle build,blueeyesandwasverypretty.She was broughtup ina stable
middle-classfamilywhosupportherwithall she does andare proudwithall her achievements.
Her parentshave beenpayingforhighlevel dance classessince she was alittle girl andnow
dance is the onlythingonher mind,exceptfromhereducationandstudiesasshe knowsthey’re
importantandwants toachieve the best.School thereforeisn’taproblemforheras she’ssmart
and inwiththe populargroup, but likedbyall because of herkindcaringpersonality,she
believesandputotherpeople’sfeelingsbefore herownandalwaysthinksbeforeactingto resist
makinganyone feel self-conscious or
miserable;evenwhenherfriendsachieve
betterthanher inher passionsshe still
alwayshappyfortheirachievementsand
won’tevencontemplateherlevel. Except
indance.She is determinedandcommittedandwill doanythingtoimprove andwin.
5. Synopsis
Its 2013. And an average eveningfora 15-year-oldgirl whohasa dream.The same dreamshe’s
had since a little girl. A dreamtobecome a winner.Firstplace inadance completion.Togeta
trophyfor herone passion.There wasnevera momentwhen she hadn’tdanced,evensince she
couldwalkshedalwaysdanced,leapedandbouncedaroundthe kitchen,twirledand tumbledto
herhearts content,havinganendlessenergyandcommitment.
Aftermanyyearsof classesandcompletions one thingwasstoppingherfromachievingher
dream.Everyone somuchbetter. Neverwinningacompetitionandforeverbeinginthe bottom
group.Yet that didn’tstopherbut made hermore determinedandcommittedto winning.
Act1: it wasa typical eveninginherfamilyhouse.She wasgettingshoweredandready forbed,
dancingas she didso; plie,releve,tap…everythingshe did,wasfollowedbyadance move,
dance was constantlyonhermind.
Act2: It startedas a normal dream.Andfinishedasa normal dream.But thistime itfeltreal,like
she was actuallythere,livingit.Itbeginswithme walkingontothismassive stage andtakingin
all the surreal surroundings.The lightsturnonandI see a humongouscrowdsat inthe
auditoriumwatching,waitingforme toperform.Thentorealise there’s4judgessatat a desk
whisperingbetweenthem.Tomybelief it’sfourof the mostwell-known,topdancersinhistory,
sat lookingatme. I froze!
The playlistIhad beentrainingtoforregionalsstartedplaying. Iwasso confused. Torealise this
was regionalsanditwasmy turn!
I suddenlyclickedintoactionandran to mystartingposition…Idancedmy heartout,like Inever
done itbefore.Put100% effortandpassioninandforgot abouteverythingelse andjustlistened
to the music,and danced!
It wentblank,andskippedall the otherdancers’performancesandwentstraight tothe award
ceremony.
… Where I won!The firsttime Iwon a trophy.The firsttime I wasin the spotlight.The firsttime
I was at the top!
Andthat’s where itended. …Black…
Act3: I woke up,drowsyand half a sleep,yarningtill myheartcontents.Still dozingandtossing
side toside.I catch somethinginthe cornerof my eye.
It lookedthe trophyfrommydream.But it couldn’tbe.Surely!
I rubbedmyeyesandslowlyopenedthem,tothe trophystill saton mycabinet.
Was it true didI actuallywin!
6. Target audience:
My targetaudience issecondaryschool age andolder(11+). I’m having
such a wide spreadof audience age because Ithinkthe message could
meansomethingdifferenttoeveryonefromall classesanderas.
AlthoughIwouldlike toreachall audiences,Ifeel like the mainviewers
are goingto be teenage girls,Ithinkthisbecause dancingappealsto
girlsmore. Also, girlsare more openandexpressiveabouttheirfeelings
and private ambitions; so, the title havingthe word‘dreams’initwould
automatically appeal togirlsand be a turn off formajorityof boys.
Withinthe NRSscale my audience wouldfallbetweenA throughtoE. I
thinkthisbecause everyone ineveryclasshasadream thattheywant to
come true soin Hinessightitshouldappeal toeveryone.
7. Form andstyle:
I am planningonshootingthisfilmintwodifferentstyles;ambientlighting
witha yellowtint.Thiswillbe forthe dreamingpartof the film, whenthe
girl isdancingon stage.I am planningondoing thisbecause Ifeel by
havingthe yellowtint it’llgive itadreamlike effectasits hazyand
dull/subtle,givingasleepyfeel,Ialsomighttryto make these scenesout
of focusandblurryas well asthiswill addtothe dreamingeffectandmake
the filmeasiertofollow.The otherstyle I’mgoingtouse is stage lighting
and bightnatural lookinglights. I’musingthisforthe sceneswhereit’sher
actual life and she’slivingnormally. I’musingthisstyleforthese scenesas
it’sbrightand focuseson what’s real,byit beingnatural lighting ona
natural event.
8. Market place:
I believethisfilmwill dowell inthe marketerespeciallyforteensandon
social media.Thisisbecause of the hiddenmeaning,the storyline and
narrative,Ithinkit’ll be well sharedoverFacebookandtwittermeaningit
will reachmore people andawideraudience asa widerrange of people
will come acrossit.On YouTube thiswill gofar inthe short filmareaas it
has a meaningthat’ll appeal tolotsof people andevenhasaneducational
background,‘tonevergive up’whatI can imagine teachersusingin
assemblies.
A dreamwithinina dream

More Related Content

What's hot

re-draft
re-draftre-draft
re-draft
steven589
 
Ancillary product analysis
Ancillary product analysisAncillary product analysis
Ancillary product analysisSDawg97
 
Analysis of short film the desk 1
Analysis of short film  the desk 1Analysis of short film  the desk 1
Analysis of short film the desk 1Anna Barua
 
Media evaluation
Media evaluationMedia evaluation
Media evaluationraj995
 
Evaluation
EvaluationEvaluation
Evaluation
JazLS98
 
Analyzing Film Posters
Analyzing Film PostersAnalyzing Film Posters
Analyzing Film Posters
The Cherwell School.
 
Analyse 6 film posters task 7
Analyse 6 film posters  task 7Analyse 6 film posters  task 7
Analyse 6 film posters task 7Louisha26
 
Poster analysis
Poster analysisPoster analysis
Poster analysis
JordanSaunders19
 
Film Poster Analysis
Film Poster Analysis Film Poster Analysis
Film Poster Analysis hannah_kelly
 
Evaluation 2 – how effective is the combination of my film and ancillary texts
Evaluation 2 – how effective is the combination of my film and ancillary textsEvaluation 2 – how effective is the combination of my film and ancillary texts
Evaluation 2 – how effective is the combination of my film and ancillary texts
mollysmith123
 
#
##
#D J
 
A2 Media Studies Preproduction
A2 Media Studies PreproductionA2 Media Studies Preproduction
A2 Media Studies Preproduction
GeorginaMediaStudies
 
5. fmp pre production
5. fmp pre production5. fmp pre production
5. fmp pre production
Luke Ross
 
2. FMP Research
2. FMP Research 2. FMP Research
2. FMP Research
georgewetton1
 
Film annotations
Film annotationsFilm annotations
Film annotationssophsoph46
 
Evaluation Task: Question 2
Evaluation Task: Question 2Evaluation Task: Question 2
Evaluation Task: Question 2
itsgeedoe
 
Evaluation Continued
Evaluation ContinuedEvaluation Continued
Evaluation ContinuedMija_Valdez
 

What's hot (20)

re-draft
re-draftre-draft
re-draft
 
Ancillary product analysis
Ancillary product analysisAncillary product analysis
Ancillary product analysis
 
Analysis of short film the desk 1
Analysis of short film  the desk 1Analysis of short film  the desk 1
Analysis of short film the desk 1
 
Evaluation 1
Evaluation 1Evaluation 1
Evaluation 1
 
Media evaluation
Media evaluationMedia evaluation
Media evaluation
 
Evaluation
EvaluationEvaluation
Evaluation
 
Analyzing Film Posters
Analyzing Film PostersAnalyzing Film Posters
Analyzing Film Posters
 
Analyse 6 film posters task 7
Analyse 6 film posters  task 7Analyse 6 film posters  task 7
Analyse 6 film posters task 7
 
Poster analysis
Poster analysisPoster analysis
Poster analysis
 
Film Poster Analysis
Film Poster Analysis Film Poster Analysis
Film Poster Analysis
 
Evaluation 2 – how effective is the combination of my film and ancillary texts
Evaluation 2 – how effective is the combination of my film and ancillary textsEvaluation 2 – how effective is the combination of my film and ancillary texts
Evaluation 2 – how effective is the combination of my film and ancillary texts
 
Poster through the ages
Poster through the agesPoster through the ages
Poster through the ages
 
#
##
#
 
A2 Media Studies Preproduction
A2 Media Studies PreproductionA2 Media Studies Preproduction
A2 Media Studies Preproduction
 
5. fmp pre production
5. fmp pre production5. fmp pre production
5. fmp pre production
 
2. FMP Research
2. FMP Research 2. FMP Research
2. FMP Research
 
Film annotations
Film annotationsFilm annotations
Film annotations
 
Ancillary Task Q
Ancillary Task QAncillary Task Q
Ancillary Task Q
 
Evaluation Task: Question 2
Evaluation Task: Question 2Evaluation Task: Question 2
Evaluation Task: Question 2
 
Evaluation Continued
Evaluation ContinuedEvaluation Continued
Evaluation Continued
 

Similar to Treatment (1)

Inspirations
InspirationsInspirations
Inspirations
OliverKeppie
 
Inspirations
InspirationsInspirations
Inspirations
OliverKeppie
 
Presentation5
Presentation5Presentation5
Presentation5
Georgia34
 
Our pitch media
Our pitch mediaOur pitch media
Our pitch media
sofia8797
 
Presentation5
Presentation5Presentation5
Presentation5
annariichards
 
Presentation5
Presentation5Presentation5
Presentation5
DG160859
 
Media evaluation written.doc
Media evaluation written.docMedia evaluation written.doc
Media evaluation written.docelliefoster97
 
Evaluation q5 elise
Evaluation q5 elise Evaluation q5 elise
Evaluation q5 elise
Kelechi Okorie
 
Research into 5 Film Openings
Research into 5 Film OpeningsResearch into 5 Film Openings
Research into 5 Film Openings
ellelew
 
Evaluation Activity 1
Evaluation Activity 1Evaluation Activity 1
Evaluation Activity 1lydiadeb
 

Similar to Treatment (1) (20)

Inspirations
InspirationsInspirations
Inspirations
 
Inspirations
InspirationsInspirations
Inspirations
 
Presentation5
Presentation5Presentation5
Presentation5
 
Our pitch media
Our pitch mediaOur pitch media
Our pitch media
 
Presentation5
Presentation5Presentation5
Presentation5
 
Presentation5
Presentation5Presentation5
Presentation5
 
Media evaluation written.doc
Media evaluation written.docMedia evaluation written.doc
Media evaluation written.doc
 
Pitch presentation
Pitch presentationPitch presentation
Pitch presentation
 
Pitch Presentation
Pitch PresentationPitch Presentation
Pitch Presentation
 
Evaluation q5 elise
Evaluation q5 elise Evaluation q5 elise
Evaluation q5 elise
 
Media questions
Media questionsMedia questions
Media questions
 
media evaluation
 media evaluation media evaluation
media evaluation
 
Research into 5 Film Openings
Research into 5 Film OpeningsResearch into 5 Film Openings
Research into 5 Film Openings
 
Pitch presentation
Pitch presentationPitch presentation
Pitch presentation
 
Pitch presentation
Pitch presentationPitch presentation
Pitch presentation
 
Pitch presentation
Pitch presentationPitch presentation
Pitch presentation
 
Evaluation Activity 1
Evaluation Activity 1Evaluation Activity 1
Evaluation Activity 1
 
Treatment
TreatmentTreatment
Treatment
 
Treatment
TreatmentTreatment
Treatment
 
2
22
2
 

More from j3ssicaLan3

Costume and prop report
Costume and prop reportCostume and prop report
Costume and prop report
j3ssicaLan3
 
Production schedule (post and pre production)
Production schedule (post and pre production)Production schedule (post and pre production)
Production schedule (post and pre production)
j3ssicaLan3
 
Script analysis 101
Script analysis 101Script analysis 101
Script analysis 101
j3ssicaLan3
 
Swot analysis
Swot analysisSwot analysis
Swot analysis
j3ssicaLan3
 
Script reviews from meeting
Script reviews from meeting Script reviews from meeting
Script reviews from meeting
j3ssicaLan3
 
Script attempt 3
Script attempt 3Script attempt 3
Script attempt 3
j3ssicaLan3
 
Script attempt 2
Script attempt 2Script attempt 2
Script attempt 2
j3ssicaLan3
 
Evaluation of script (1)
Evaluation of script (1)Evaluation of script (1)
Evaluation of script (1)
j3ssicaLan3
 
Legal and ethical (1)
Legal and ethical (1)Legal and ethical (1)
Legal and ethical (1)
j3ssicaLan3
 
Treatment 2 og
Treatment 2 ogTreatment 2 og
Treatment 2 og
j3ssicaLan3
 
Launch date and permission slips
Launch date and permission slipsLaunch date and permission slips
Launch date and permission slips
j3ssicaLan3
 
Treatment 2 og
Treatment 2 ogTreatment 2 og
Treatment 2 og
j3ssicaLan3
 
Cast and crew
Cast and crewCast and crew
Cast and crew
j3ssicaLan3
 
Cast and crew
Cast and crewCast and crew
Cast and crew
j3ssicaLan3
 
Equipment guide list
Equipment guide listEquipment guide list
Equipment guide list
j3ssicaLan3
 

More from j3ssicaLan3 (20)

Costume and prop report
Costume and prop reportCostume and prop report
Costume and prop report
 
Production schedule (post and pre production)
Production schedule (post and pre production)Production schedule (post and pre production)
Production schedule (post and pre production)
 
Script analysis 101
Script analysis 101Script analysis 101
Script analysis 101
 
Swot analysis
Swot analysisSwot analysis
Swot analysis
 
Script reviews from meeting
Script reviews from meeting Script reviews from meeting
Script reviews from meeting
 
Script attempt 3
Script attempt 3Script attempt 3
Script attempt 3
 
Script attempt 2
Script attempt 2Script attempt 2
Script attempt 2
 
Script
ScriptScript
Script
 
Evaluation of script (1)
Evaluation of script (1)Evaluation of script (1)
Evaluation of script (1)
 
final script
final scriptfinal script
final script
 
Legal and ethical (1)
Legal and ethical (1)Legal and ethical (1)
Legal and ethical (1)
 
Budget
BudgetBudget
Budget
 
Budget
BudgetBudget
Budget
 
Treatment 2 og
Treatment 2 ogTreatment 2 og
Treatment 2 og
 
Work plan
Work planWork plan
Work plan
 
Launch date and permission slips
Launch date and permission slipsLaunch date and permission slips
Launch date and permission slips
 
Treatment 2 og
Treatment 2 ogTreatment 2 og
Treatment 2 og
 
Cast and crew
Cast and crewCast and crew
Cast and crew
 
Cast and crew
Cast and crewCast and crew
Cast and crew
 
Equipment guide list
Equipment guide listEquipment guide list
Equipment guide list
 

Recently uploaded

Premium MEAN Stack Development Solutions for Modern Businesses
Premium MEAN Stack Development Solutions for Modern BusinessesPremium MEAN Stack Development Solutions for Modern Businesses
Premium MEAN Stack Development Solutions for Modern Businesses
SynapseIndia
 
April 2024 Nostalgia Products Newsletter
April 2024 Nostalgia Products NewsletterApril 2024 Nostalgia Products Newsletter
April 2024 Nostalgia Products Newsletter
NathanBaughman3
 
RMD24 | Debunking the non-endemic revenue myth Marvin Vacquier Droop | First ...
RMD24 | Debunking the non-endemic revenue myth Marvin Vacquier Droop | First ...RMD24 | Debunking the non-endemic revenue myth Marvin Vacquier Droop | First ...
RMD24 | Debunking the non-endemic revenue myth Marvin Vacquier Droop | First ...
BBPMedia1
 
Kseniya Leshchenko: Shared development support service model as the way to ma...
Kseniya Leshchenko: Shared development support service model as the way to ma...Kseniya Leshchenko: Shared development support service model as the way to ma...
Kseniya Leshchenko: Shared development support service model as the way to ma...
Lviv Startup Club
 
falcon-invoice-discounting-a-premier-platform-for-investors-in-india
falcon-invoice-discounting-a-premier-platform-for-investors-in-indiafalcon-invoice-discounting-a-premier-platform-for-investors-in-india
falcon-invoice-discounting-a-premier-platform-for-investors-in-india
Falcon Invoice Discounting
 
Sustainability: Balancing the Environment, Equity & Economy
Sustainability: Balancing the Environment, Equity & EconomySustainability: Balancing the Environment, Equity & Economy
Sustainability: Balancing the Environment, Equity & Economy
Operational Excellence Consulting
 
RMD24 | Retail media: hoe zet je dit in als je geen AH of Unilever bent? Heid...
RMD24 | Retail media: hoe zet je dit in als je geen AH of Unilever bent? Heid...RMD24 | Retail media: hoe zet je dit in als je geen AH of Unilever bent? Heid...
RMD24 | Retail media: hoe zet je dit in als je geen AH of Unilever bent? Heid...
BBPMedia1
 
Skye Residences | Extended Stay Residences Near Toronto Airport
Skye Residences | Extended Stay Residences Near Toronto AirportSkye Residences | Extended Stay Residences Near Toronto Airport
Skye Residences | Extended Stay Residences Near Toronto Airport
marketingjdass
 
The effects of customers service quality and online reviews on customer loyal...
The effects of customers service quality and online reviews on customer loyal...The effects of customers service quality and online reviews on customer loyal...
The effects of customers service quality and online reviews on customer loyal...
balatucanapplelovely
 
Exploring Patterns of Connection with Social Dreaming
Exploring Patterns of Connection with Social DreamingExploring Patterns of Connection with Social Dreaming
Exploring Patterns of Connection with Social Dreaming
Nicola Wreford-Howard
 
Cree_Rey_BrandIdentityKit.PDF_PersonalBd
Cree_Rey_BrandIdentityKit.PDF_PersonalBdCree_Rey_BrandIdentityKit.PDF_PersonalBd
Cree_Rey_BrandIdentityKit.PDF_PersonalBd
creerey
 
5 Things You Need To Know Before Hiring a Videographer
5 Things You Need To Know Before Hiring a Videographer5 Things You Need To Know Before Hiring a Videographer
5 Things You Need To Know Before Hiring a Videographer
ofm712785
 
What is the TDS Return Filing Due Date for FY 2024-25.pdf
What is the TDS Return Filing Due Date for FY 2024-25.pdfWhat is the TDS Return Filing Due Date for FY 2024-25.pdf
What is the TDS Return Filing Due Date for FY 2024-25.pdf
seoforlegalpillers
 
Unveiling the Secrets How Does Generative AI Work.pdf
Unveiling the Secrets How Does Generative AI Work.pdfUnveiling the Secrets How Does Generative AI Work.pdf
Unveiling the Secrets How Does Generative AI Work.pdf
Sam H
 
Brand Analysis for an artist named Struan
Brand Analysis for an artist named StruanBrand Analysis for an artist named Struan
Brand Analysis for an artist named Struan
sarahvanessa51503
 
Business Valuation Principles for Entrepreneurs
Business Valuation Principles for EntrepreneursBusiness Valuation Principles for Entrepreneurs
Business Valuation Principles for Entrepreneurs
Ben Wann
 
The Influence of Marketing Strategy and Market Competition on Business Perfor...
The Influence of Marketing Strategy and Market Competition on Business Perfor...The Influence of Marketing Strategy and Market Competition on Business Perfor...
The Influence of Marketing Strategy and Market Competition on Business Perfor...
Adam Smith
 
Discover the innovative and creative projects that highlight my journey throu...
Discover the innovative and creative projects that highlight my journey throu...Discover the innovative and creative projects that highlight my journey throu...
Discover the innovative and creative projects that highlight my journey throu...
dylandmeas
 
Search Disrupted Google’s Leaked Documents Rock the SEO World.pdf
Search Disrupted Google’s Leaked Documents Rock the SEO World.pdfSearch Disrupted Google’s Leaked Documents Rock the SEO World.pdf
Search Disrupted Google’s Leaked Documents Rock the SEO World.pdf
Arihant Webtech Pvt. Ltd
 
Memorandum Of Association Constitution of Company.ppt
Memorandum Of Association Constitution of Company.pptMemorandum Of Association Constitution of Company.ppt
Memorandum Of Association Constitution of Company.ppt
seri bangash
 

Recently uploaded (20)

Premium MEAN Stack Development Solutions for Modern Businesses
Premium MEAN Stack Development Solutions for Modern BusinessesPremium MEAN Stack Development Solutions for Modern Businesses
Premium MEAN Stack Development Solutions for Modern Businesses
 
April 2024 Nostalgia Products Newsletter
April 2024 Nostalgia Products NewsletterApril 2024 Nostalgia Products Newsletter
April 2024 Nostalgia Products Newsletter
 
RMD24 | Debunking the non-endemic revenue myth Marvin Vacquier Droop | First ...
RMD24 | Debunking the non-endemic revenue myth Marvin Vacquier Droop | First ...RMD24 | Debunking the non-endemic revenue myth Marvin Vacquier Droop | First ...
RMD24 | Debunking the non-endemic revenue myth Marvin Vacquier Droop | First ...
 
Kseniya Leshchenko: Shared development support service model as the way to ma...
Kseniya Leshchenko: Shared development support service model as the way to ma...Kseniya Leshchenko: Shared development support service model as the way to ma...
Kseniya Leshchenko: Shared development support service model as the way to ma...
 
falcon-invoice-discounting-a-premier-platform-for-investors-in-india
falcon-invoice-discounting-a-premier-platform-for-investors-in-indiafalcon-invoice-discounting-a-premier-platform-for-investors-in-india
falcon-invoice-discounting-a-premier-platform-for-investors-in-india
 
Sustainability: Balancing the Environment, Equity & Economy
Sustainability: Balancing the Environment, Equity & EconomySustainability: Balancing the Environment, Equity & Economy
Sustainability: Balancing the Environment, Equity & Economy
 
RMD24 | Retail media: hoe zet je dit in als je geen AH of Unilever bent? Heid...
RMD24 | Retail media: hoe zet je dit in als je geen AH of Unilever bent? Heid...RMD24 | Retail media: hoe zet je dit in als je geen AH of Unilever bent? Heid...
RMD24 | Retail media: hoe zet je dit in als je geen AH of Unilever bent? Heid...
 
Skye Residences | Extended Stay Residences Near Toronto Airport
Skye Residences | Extended Stay Residences Near Toronto AirportSkye Residences | Extended Stay Residences Near Toronto Airport
Skye Residences | Extended Stay Residences Near Toronto Airport
 
The effects of customers service quality and online reviews on customer loyal...
The effects of customers service quality and online reviews on customer loyal...The effects of customers service quality and online reviews on customer loyal...
The effects of customers service quality and online reviews on customer loyal...
 
Exploring Patterns of Connection with Social Dreaming
Exploring Patterns of Connection with Social DreamingExploring Patterns of Connection with Social Dreaming
Exploring Patterns of Connection with Social Dreaming
 
Cree_Rey_BrandIdentityKit.PDF_PersonalBd
Cree_Rey_BrandIdentityKit.PDF_PersonalBdCree_Rey_BrandIdentityKit.PDF_PersonalBd
Cree_Rey_BrandIdentityKit.PDF_PersonalBd
 
5 Things You Need To Know Before Hiring a Videographer
5 Things You Need To Know Before Hiring a Videographer5 Things You Need To Know Before Hiring a Videographer
5 Things You Need To Know Before Hiring a Videographer
 
What is the TDS Return Filing Due Date for FY 2024-25.pdf
What is the TDS Return Filing Due Date for FY 2024-25.pdfWhat is the TDS Return Filing Due Date for FY 2024-25.pdf
What is the TDS Return Filing Due Date for FY 2024-25.pdf
 
Unveiling the Secrets How Does Generative AI Work.pdf
Unveiling the Secrets How Does Generative AI Work.pdfUnveiling the Secrets How Does Generative AI Work.pdf
Unveiling the Secrets How Does Generative AI Work.pdf
 
Brand Analysis for an artist named Struan
Brand Analysis for an artist named StruanBrand Analysis for an artist named Struan
Brand Analysis for an artist named Struan
 
Business Valuation Principles for Entrepreneurs
Business Valuation Principles for EntrepreneursBusiness Valuation Principles for Entrepreneurs
Business Valuation Principles for Entrepreneurs
 
The Influence of Marketing Strategy and Market Competition on Business Perfor...
The Influence of Marketing Strategy and Market Competition on Business Perfor...The Influence of Marketing Strategy and Market Competition on Business Perfor...
The Influence of Marketing Strategy and Market Competition on Business Perfor...
 
Discover the innovative and creative projects that highlight my journey throu...
Discover the innovative and creative projects that highlight my journey throu...Discover the innovative and creative projects that highlight my journey throu...
Discover the innovative and creative projects that highlight my journey throu...
 
Search Disrupted Google’s Leaked Documents Rock the SEO World.pdf
Search Disrupted Google’s Leaked Documents Rock the SEO World.pdfSearch Disrupted Google’s Leaked Documents Rock the SEO World.pdf
Search Disrupted Google’s Leaked Documents Rock the SEO World.pdf
 
Memorandum Of Association Constitution of Company.ppt
Memorandum Of Association Constitution of Company.pptMemorandum Of Association Constitution of Company.ppt
Memorandum Of Association Constitution of Company.ppt
 

Treatment (1)

  • 1. Idea 1 1. Your working title ‘Dreamscan come true’ I chose thistitle because Ifeel likeitdescribesthe filmbasesreallywell andgivesagoodover viewof the filmscontent. The whole ideaisabouta girl’sdreamcomingtrue butnot inthe original way.So, the title fitsthe narrative reallywell withoutgivingtoomuchaway. I alsolike the title because itsrolesof the tongue andis remember-able because of the well-knownsong ‘dreams’byGabrielle,whichisahit songfromthe early90’s. 2. Lengthof shortfilm The predicted lengthof myshortfilmwill be between5-8minutes. I thinkthisisa goodlengthof time because itwon’tmake the filmdrag meaningitwon’tget boring.Havingitthislengthof time will enableme tofocusmore on the qualityandeffectsof the filmas I onlyhave a limitedtimetoeditandproduce the film.Thiswill hopefulencourage the meaningof the filmtocome acrossstronger as I’ll be able to focus more precisely onthe small meaningful segmentsof the filmandthe editingwillalsohopefully be of higherquality. 3. Logline/tagline ‘Don’tstopdreaming.You neverknow whatmighthappen!?’ I have come up withthisideaformy logline as itaddsmore mysteryto the title of the film.Ithas a directlinkto the title byusingthe word‘dreams’inboth,butextendsonthe audience’s theoriesandknowledge aboutthe filmfromthe title.‘Don’tstopdreaming’suggeststhat a dreamcouldhave beendreamtfora longtime andthe individual wassopassionate andstuck on thisdreamnothingelse evercrossedtheirmind,it’sliketheywantedthisdreamtohappen so badly they’re notgoingtogive upon it until itbecomestrue andthey’ll doeverythingthey possible cantopursue it.‘youneverknow whatmighthappen’relatestothe title andsupports it exactly,as itsuggestingthatsome essence of the dreammust have come true or something bettermightof evenhappened.Youknow thisbythe use of it beingarhetorical questiongetting the audience tofinishesplottingand writingthe storythemselvesuntil theyseethe true outline and narrative.Italsotellsyouthatthere is goingtobe more to the story thanan individual dreamingandit comingtrue,itsuggestsit’s goingtocome true ina particularwayor maybe ina differentwaytohowthe individual waswantingwhichcould’veendedupbetter. Overall, Ithink thislogline reallysumsupthe shortfilmmakingitan easydecisiontowhether it’sgoingtosuit certainaudiencesbeforetheystartwatchingitor evenreadingthe blurb.AnotherreasonIthink it’sgoodbecause it’squite remember-able inthe essence itstwocommonsayingsmix together creatinga catchy logline. 4. Introductionof keycharacters In myshort filmthere’sonlyone maincharacterthroughout the film, makingtheirpresents importantandvital part for the filmtoflow smoothly.Mycharacter isa teen(15 yearsold) girl whohas lovedtodance and hasn’tstoppeddancing since herfirststeps.She haslongbrown hair,5feet2in,has a muscle build,blueeyesandwasverypretty.She was broughtup ina stable middle-classfamilywhosupportherwithall she does andare proudwithall her achievements.
  • 2. Her parentshave beenpayingforhighlevel dance classessince she was alittle girl andnow dance is the onlythingonher mind,exceptfromhereducationandstudiesasshe knowsthey’re importantandwants toachieve the best.School thereforeisn’taproblemforheras she’ssmart and inwiththe populargroup, but likedbyall because of herkindcaringpersonality,she believesandputotherpeople’sfeelingsbefore herownandalwaysthinksbeforeactingto resist makinganyone feel self-conscious or miserable;evenwhenherfriendsachieve betterthanher inher passionsshe still alwayshappyfortheirachievementsand won’tevencontemplateherlevel. Except indance.She is determinedandcommittedandwill doanythingtoimprove andwin. 5. Synopsis Its 2013. And an average eveningfora 15-year-oldgirl whohasa dream.The same dreamshe’s had since a little girl. A dreamtobecome a winner.Firstplace inadance completion.Togeta trophyfor herone passion.There wasnevera momentwhen she hadn’tdanced,evensince she couldwalkshedalwaysdanced,leapedandbouncedaroundthe kitchen,twirledand tumbledto herhearts content,havinganendlessenergyandcommitment. Aftermanyyearsof classesandcompletions one thingwasstoppingherfromachievingher dream.Everyone somuchbetter. Neverwinningacompetitionandforeverbeinginthe bottom group.Yet that didn’tstopherbut made hermore determinedandcommittedto winning. Act1: it wasa typical eveninginherfamilyhouse.She wasgettingshoweredandready forbed, dancingas she didso; plie,releve,tap…everythingshe did,wasfollowedbyadance move, dance was constantlyonhermind. Act2: It startedas a normal dream.Andfinishedasa normal dream.But thistime itfeltreal,like she was actuallythere,livingit.Itbeginswithme walkingontothismassive stage andtakingin all the surreal surroundings.The lightsturnonandI see a humongouscrowdsat inthe auditoriumwatching,waitingforme toperform.Thentorealise there’s4judgessatat a desk whisperingbetweenthem.Tomybelief it’sfourof the mostwell-known,topdancersinhistory, sat lookingatme. I froze! The playlistIhad beentrainingtoforregionalsstartedplaying. Iwasso confused. Torealise this was regionalsanditwasmy turn! I suddenlyclickedintoactionandran to mystartingposition…Idancedmy heartout,like Inever done itbefore.Put100% effortandpassioninandforgot abouteverythingelse andjustlistened to the music,and danced! It wentblank,andskippedall the otherdancers’performancesandwentstraight tothe award ceremony. … Where I won!The firsttime Iwon a trophy.The firsttime I wasin the spotlight.The firsttime I was at the top! Andthat’s where itended. …Black… Act3: I woke up,drowsyand half a sleep,yarningtill myheartcontents.Still dozingandtossing side toside.I catch somethinginthe cornerof my eye. It lookedthe trophyfrommydream.But it couldn’tbe.Surely!
  • 3. I rubbedmyeyesandslowlyopenedthem,tothe trophystill saton mycabinet. Was it true didI actuallywin! 6. Target audience: My targetaudience issecondaryschool age andolder(11+). I’m having such a wide spreadof audience age because Ithinkthe message could meansomethingdifferenttoeveryonefromall classesanderas. AlthoughIwouldlike toreachall audiences,Ifeel like the mainviewers are goingto be teenage girls,Ithinkthisbecause dancingappealsto girlsmore. Also, girlsare more openandexpressiveabouttheirfeelings and private ambitions; so, the title havingthe word‘dreams’initwould automatically appeal togirlsand be a turn off formajorityof boys. Withinthe NRSscale my audience wouldfallbetweenA throughtoE. I thinkthisbecause everyone ineveryclasshasadream thattheywant to come true soin Hinessightitshouldappeal toeveryone. 7. Form andstyle: I am planningonshootingthisfilmintwodifferentstyles;ambientlighting witha yellowtint.Thiswillbe forthe dreamingpartof the film, whenthe girl isdancingon stage.I am planningondoing thisbecause Ifeel by havingthe yellowtint it’llgive itadreamlike effectasits hazyand dull/subtle,givingasleepyfeel,Ialsomighttryto make these scenesout of focusandblurryas well asthiswill addtothe dreamingeffectandmake the filmeasiertofollow.The otherstyle I’mgoingtouse is stage lighting and bightnatural lookinglights. I’musingthisforthe sceneswhereit’sher actual life and she’slivingnormally. I’musingthisstyleforthese scenesas it’sbrightand focuseson what’s real,byit beingnatural lighting ona natural event. 8. Market place: I believethisfilmwill dowell inthe marketerespeciallyforteensandon social media.Thisisbecause of the hiddenmeaning,the storyline and narrative,Ithinkit’ll be well sharedoverFacebookandtwittermeaningit will reachmore people andawideraudience asa widerrange of people will come acrossit.On YouTube thiswill gofar inthe short filmareaas it has a meaningthat’ll appeal tolotsof people andevenhasaneducational background,‘tonevergive up’whatI can imagine teachersusingin assemblies. A dreamwithinina dream