1. Date Client What we discussed
12/12/19 Mrs Jones We discussedthatmyfirstcopyof
the script andcame to the
conclusionthatI needtochange
All namesintocapitals
Change all yellow
highlightedstops
Addscenesandtime of day
in
Complete the personal
informationonthe front
cover
Addmore detail (e.g.the
name of the filmand
companywhenappearson
the screen)
Change all American
spellingsintoEnglish
19/12/19 Mrs Jones Puttingtimingsinwhen
she’sdancingsoyou can
see how longit’s goingto
happenforand so we
know where the times
comingfrom.E.g. dances
for 20seconds
Addthe scenesat
beginningof eachact
Take out Warner brothers
as it’sa short filmand
doesn’tneedabig
company,onlyme.
Addthe title of the song
for the dance in.
