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THE CONCLUSION
“Social Time”, page 81
What does the writer do in the
   conclusion?
1. Look to the future

2. “Bookend”: connect back to the hook

3. Does the writer start the conclusion
   with “In conclusion…” or “To sum
   up…” or “To conclude…”?
                NO!
“We Should Cherish Our Children’s
     freedom to Think”, pages 113-114

What does the writer do in the
   conclusion?
1. Implications to the larger world
        Classroom Creativity=Freedom
1.   Does the writer start the conclusion
     with “In conclusion…” or “To sum
     up…” or “To conclude…”?
                    NO!
“Grades and Self-Esteem”, page
120

What does the writer do in the
   conclusion?
1. Look to the future



1.   Does the writer start the conclusion
     with “In conclusion…” or “To sum
     up…” or “To conclude…”?
                    NO!
“The Commencement Speech You’ll Never
Hear”, page 126


What does the writer do in the
   conclusion?
1. Give advice



1.   Does the writer start the conclusion
     with “In conclusion…” or “To sum
     up…” or “To conclude…”?
                    NO!
4 Types of Conclusions

1.   Bookend
      Connect back to the hook
1.   Implications in the larger world
      Describe how your thesis is important in the real
      world
1.   Look to the future
      Describe how your thesis will be important in the
      future

1.   Give advice
      Give advice to the reader based on your thesis
Conclusion Signal Words
1.    Are conclusion signal words necessary?
      (“In conclusion…” “To conclude…” “To
      sum up…”)
         Not always. In fact, more advanced writers
      tend to avoid them. Using conclusion signal
      words is a technique taught to and used by
      beginning writers.

2.    Are conclusion signal words bad?
       Not always. If used judiciously, conclusion
       signal words can be appropriate. However, as
       advanced writers, you should try more

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The conclusion

  • 2. “Social Time”, page 81 What does the writer do in the conclusion? 1. Look to the future 2. “Bookend”: connect back to the hook 3. Does the writer start the conclusion with “In conclusion…” or “To sum up…” or “To conclude…”? NO!
  • 3. “We Should Cherish Our Children’s freedom to Think”, pages 113-114 What does the writer do in the conclusion? 1. Implications to the larger world Classroom Creativity=Freedom 1. Does the writer start the conclusion with “In conclusion…” or “To sum up…” or “To conclude…”? NO!
  • 4. “Grades and Self-Esteem”, page 120 What does the writer do in the conclusion? 1. Look to the future 1. Does the writer start the conclusion with “In conclusion…” or “To sum up…” or “To conclude…”? NO!
  • 5. “The Commencement Speech You’ll Never Hear”, page 126 What does the writer do in the conclusion? 1. Give advice 1. Does the writer start the conclusion with “In conclusion…” or “To sum up…” or “To conclude…”? NO!
  • 6. 4 Types of Conclusions 1. Bookend Connect back to the hook 1. Implications in the larger world Describe how your thesis is important in the real world 1. Look to the future Describe how your thesis will be important in the future 1. Give advice Give advice to the reader based on your thesis
  • 7. Conclusion Signal Words 1. Are conclusion signal words necessary? (“In conclusion…” “To conclude…” “To sum up…”) Not always. In fact, more advanced writers tend to avoid them. Using conclusion signal words is a technique taught to and used by beginning writers. 2. Are conclusion signal words bad? Not always. If used judiciously, conclusion signal words can be appropriate. However, as advanced writers, you should try more