Structure of Essay in TWE

1. TEST OF WRITTEN
ENGLISH
Annas Surdyanto

11. Conclusion
Indicating result, outcome of body paragraphs or your position/response
Body paragraph
Topic sentence & supporting senteces
Body paragraph
Topic sentence & supporting sentences
Introduction
Thesis statement

14. Types of Topic

21. THESIS
STATEMEN
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22. Introductory paragraph
 Introduction
 Defining
 Historical review
 Case issues
 Experiment
 Etc…
 Thesis statement (commonly one sentence)
 The first sentence is a general statement, designed to attract the reader’s attention.
 Second and perhaps third sentences narrow the idea down to your specific idea.
 The last sentence in the introduction must be your thesis.

23. Wedding is a crucial moment that will be a life history. People precisely expect
to have beautiful and unique ceremonies for their weddings. Some people prefer
to hold large weddings because they want lots of people attend in their
weddings. Some others prefer small weddings because they do not expect many
people attending their weddings. They just invite their close friends and family
members instead. However, each large and small wedding has advantages for
its implementation.

24. What you need to do before going on your vacation is deciding where you will go
your vacation. You may decide to go to a quiet place and natural setting instead
of going to a big city with a fast-paced life. Each of these types of vacation is
something to offer.

27. Transitional
Expressions
Examples
Addition additionally, again, also, and, or, as well, besides, further, furthermore,
next, too, in addition, moreover, then, first, second, an alternative is . . .
Opposition, exceptions,
contrasts, differences,
comparison
but, however, in spite of, clearly then, on the one hand . . . on the other
hand, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, still, yet, similarly, also, in
the same manner
Repetition and
restatement
in other words, that is
Sequence first, second, third, . . . next, then, finally, initially, later
Time After, afterwards, at last, before, currently, during, as, earlier, immediately,
next, later, meanwhile, while, now, recently, immediately, simultaneously,
then, when
Example for example, for instance, namely, likewise, in fact, specifically, to
illustrate
Logical sequence/Cause
and effect
accordingly, it follows that, for this reason, as a consequence, consequently,
hence, if, so, clearly then, since, therefore, thus, as a result
Draw emphasis even, indeed, in fact, of course, truly
To conclude or repeat finally, thus, in a word, in brief, in conclusion, therefore, in the end, on the

31. Write the concluding Paragraph
A conclusion is what you will leave with your reader
A conclusion is the opposite of the introduction
 Remember that the introduction begins general and ends specific
 The conclusion begins specific and moves to the general

35. Combining Sentences
Nonverbal communication, or body language, is used everywhere in the world. It
is very powerful means of communication. It communicates much more than
spoken words.
Correction
Nonverbal communication, or body language which is a very powerful means of
communication is used everywhere in the world much more than spoken
language.

36. Another example of nonverbal communication is the image a person shows in public. A
woman is walking alone on an unfamiliar and possibly dangerous street. She wants to
appear confident. She walks quickly. She may be tired. She walks with her shoulders
straight ahead. Someone is looking at her. She returns the glance without hesitation.
In contrast, a nervous woman appears afraid. She walks slowly with her shoulders and
eyes down.
Correction
Another example of nonverbal communication is the image a person shows in public,
for example, a woman who is walking alone on an unfamiliar and possibly dangerous
street wants to appear confident, and walks quickly, although she may be tired, she
walks with her shoulders straight ahead, when someone is looking at her, she returns
the glance without hesitation. In contrast, a nervous woman who appears afraid walks
slowly with her shoulders and eyes down.

37. Indeed, body language can express more than spoken language. Merely by rising
an eyebrow, clenching a jaw, or softening the eyes, a person can express
disapproval, anger, or love. It is a very strong method of communication.
Correction
Indeed, body language can express more than spoken language. Merely by raising
an eyebrow, clenching a jaw, or softening the eyes, a person can express
disapproval, anger, or love, because it is a very strong method of
communication.

38. It is important to keep certain points in mind to succeed on the TOEFL test. The TOEFL test is one
type of standardized test. You must know the subject area well. To do well on the TOEFL test,
you must be fairly fluent in English. You cannot learn English just to succeed on the test. You
should learn the format and test-taking strategies used in the TOEFL test. The goal of the test is
to weed out non-fluent speakers. Some of the questions are tricky. You learn the tricks. You can
be better on these types of questions. It is a good idea to be rested and alert when you take the
test. This means that cramming all night before the test usually doesn’t help. You should arrive
at the test awake and clear-headed. You remember these three basic points. You should do well
on the test.
Correction
It is important to keep certain points in mind to succeed on the TOEFL test which is one type of
standardized test. To do well on the TOEFL test, you must know the subject area well, for
example, first, you must be fairly fluent in English, because you cannot learn English just to
succeed on the test, and second, you should learn the format and test-taking strategies used in
the TOEFL test which the goal is to weed out non-fluent speakers, therefore some of the
questions are tricky. If you learn the tricks, you can be better on these types of questions,
because it is a good idea to be rested and alert when you take the test. Finally, this means that
cramming all night before the test usually does not help, in sum; you should arrive at the test
awake and clear-headed, remember these three basic points, and do well on the test.

39.  My father loves going to restaurants which serve exotic foods. For example, last
week he went to a restaurant which serves deep-fried rattlesnake.
 My father loves going to restaurants which serve exotic foods. For instance, last
week he went to a restaurant which serves deep-fried rattlesnake.
 I can play quite a few musical instruments, for example, the flute, the guitar, and
the piano.
 I can play quite a few musical instruments, for instance, the flute, the guitar, and
the piano.
 I can play quite a few musical instruments,e.g., the flute, the guitar, and the
piano.
 I can play quite a few musical instruments, such as the flute, the guitar, and the
piano.