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Vince Ricci, Part-time Lecturer | The University of Tokyo | Center for Innovation in Engineering Education (CIEE) | English for Engineers and Scientists
This document provides information on 4 plants: sunflower, calendula, joe pye weed, and dragon tree. Sunflowers are annuals that grow 4-10 feet tall, attract bees and birds, and self-sow. Calendula are annual herbs 12-24 inches tall that bloom yellow or orange in spring and fall. Joe pye weed is a perennial that grows 4-6 feet tall, blooms purple or white in early fall, and attracts butterflies. Dragon tree is a 10 foot tall indoor foliage plant that prefers bright indirect light and moist soil.
This document provides information about 10 different plant varieties: Butterfly Bush, Daylily, Dusty Miller, Garden Geranium, True Geranium, Heuchera, Ornamental Grass, Pansy, Salvia, and Sedum. It describes each plant's growth habits, hardiness zones, sunlight requirements, flowering characteristics, and landscaping uses. Butterfly Bush attracts butterflies with lavender or pink blooms in summer. Daylilies come in many colors and varieties and bloom all summer. Dusty Miller is grown for its silvery foliage and used in borders and containers.
This document provides an overview of hoofed mammals or ungulates and their digestive systems. It defines key terms like ungulates and ruminants. It describes how ruminants have a four-chambered stomach that allows bacteria to break down fibrous foods. The four chambers - reticulum, rumen, omasum, and abomasum - each play a role in digestion. The document also briefly discusses horns and antlers, noting key differences, and lists some common North American and Virginia ungulates.
This document provides information on the characteristics and properties of 6 different flower types: hyacinth, narcissus (daffodil), paperwhite, tuberose, tulip, and types of tulips. It describes their availability periods, colors, fragrances, sizes, longevity as cut or potted flowers, and selling information like cost and whether sold individually or in bunches.
1) The document discusses various barriers to effective communication including sender barriers, verbal and non-verbal barriers, cross-cultural barriers, and physical barriers.
2) Specific sender barriers mentioned are approach, attitude, language, frame of reference, relationships, and expression. Verbal barriers include differences in language and interpretation, while non-verbal barriers involve emotions and body language.
3) Cross-cultural barriers make understanding different cultures difficult due to varying communication styles between nationalities.
4) Physical barriers include noise, filters, and failures of communication channels.
Asian Food and Agriculture Cooperation InitiativeExternalEvents
http://www.fao.org/ag/againfo/programmes/en/genetics/natcord.html
This presentation by Changyeon Cho was held at a side event during the 9th Session of the Intergovernmental Technical Working Group on Animal Genetic Resources for Food and Agriculture, from 6-8 July 2016 in Rome, Italy.
This document summarizes key aspects of the phylum Porifera (sponges). It describes their multicellular origins, body structures, cell types, skeleton formation, water circulation, feeding, reproduction, development, and classification. The four classes of sponges - Hexactinellida, Calcarea, Demospongiae, and Sclerospongiae - are introduced along with examples.
This is a thorough covering of flower photography, with an emphasis on composition and aesthetics. Many examples show what to do and what not to do. There is a lot of visual humor used, to make the presentation entertaining as well as informative.
This document provides information on 4 plants: sunflower, calendula, joe pye weed, and dragon tree. Sunflowers are annuals that grow 4-10 feet tall, attract bees and birds, and self-sow. Calendula are annual herbs 12-24 inches tall that bloom yellow or orange in spring and fall. Joe pye weed is a perennial that grows 4-6 feet tall, blooms purple or white in early fall, and attracts butterflies. Dragon tree is a 10 foot tall indoor foliage plant that prefers bright indirect light and moist soil.
This document provides information about 10 different plant varieties: Butterfly Bush, Daylily, Dusty Miller, Garden Geranium, True Geranium, Heuchera, Ornamental Grass, Pansy, Salvia, and Sedum. It describes each plant's growth habits, hardiness zones, sunlight requirements, flowering characteristics, and landscaping uses. Butterfly Bush attracts butterflies with lavender or pink blooms in summer. Daylilies come in many colors and varieties and bloom all summer. Dusty Miller is grown for its silvery foliage and used in borders and containers.
This document provides an overview of hoofed mammals or ungulates and their digestive systems. It defines key terms like ungulates and ruminants. It describes how ruminants have a four-chambered stomach that allows bacteria to break down fibrous foods. The four chambers - reticulum, rumen, omasum, and abomasum - each play a role in digestion. The document also briefly discusses horns and antlers, noting key differences, and lists some common North American and Virginia ungulates.
This document provides information on the characteristics and properties of 6 different flower types: hyacinth, narcissus (daffodil), paperwhite, tuberose, tulip, and types of tulips. It describes their availability periods, colors, fragrances, sizes, longevity as cut or potted flowers, and selling information like cost and whether sold individually or in bunches.
1) The document discusses various barriers to effective communication including sender barriers, verbal and non-verbal barriers, cross-cultural barriers, and physical barriers.
2) Specific sender barriers mentioned are approach, attitude, language, frame of reference, relationships, and expression. Verbal barriers include differences in language and interpretation, while non-verbal barriers involve emotions and body language.
3) Cross-cultural barriers make understanding different cultures difficult due to varying communication styles between nationalities.
4) Physical barriers include noise, filters, and failures of communication channels.
Asian Food and Agriculture Cooperation InitiativeExternalEvents
http://www.fao.org/ag/againfo/programmes/en/genetics/natcord.html
This presentation by Changyeon Cho was held at a side event during the 9th Session of the Intergovernmental Technical Working Group on Animal Genetic Resources for Food and Agriculture, from 6-8 July 2016 in Rome, Italy.
This document summarizes key aspects of the phylum Porifera (sponges). It describes their multicellular origins, body structures, cell types, skeleton formation, water circulation, feeding, reproduction, development, and classification. The four classes of sponges - Hexactinellida, Calcarea, Demospongiae, and Sclerospongiae - are introduced along with examples.
This is a thorough covering of flower photography, with an emphasis on composition and aesthetics. Many examples show what to do and what not to do. There is a lot of visual humor used, to make the presentation entertaining as well as informative.
This PowerPoint is one small part of the Taxonomy and Classification unit from www.sciencepowerpoint.com. A 3800+ slide Five Part PowerPoint presentation becomes the roadmap for an amazing and interactive science experience full of built-in lab activities, built-in quizzes, video links, class notes(red slides),review games, projects, unit notes, answer keys, and much more. Also included is a student version of the unit that is much like the teachers but missing the answer keys, quizzes, PowerPoint review games, hidden box challenges, owl, and surprises meant for the classroom. This is a great resource to distribute to your students and support professionals. The Classification and Taxonomy Unit covers topics associated with Taxonomy and Classification. The unit examines all of the Kingdoms of Life in detail. Areas of Focus within The Taxonomy and Classification Unit: -Taxonomy, Classification, Need for Taxonomy vs. Common Names, What is a Species?, Dichotomous Keys, What does Classification Use?, The Domains of Life, Kingdoms of Life,The 8 Taxonomic Ranks, Humans Taxonomic Classification, Kingdom Monera, Prokaryotic Cells, Types of Eubacteria, Bacteria Classification, Gram Staining,Bacterial Food Borne Illnesses, Penicillin and Antiseptic, Oral Hygiene and Plaque, Bacterial Reproduction (Binary Fission), Asexual Reproduction, Positives and Negatives of Bacteria, Protista, Plant-like Protists, Animal-like Protists, Fungi-like Protists, Animalia, Characteristics of Animalia, Animal Symmetry, Phylums of Animalia (Extensive), Classes of Chordata, Mammals, Subclasses of Mammals, Characteristics of Mammals, Fungi, Positives and Negatives of Fungi, Divisions of Fungi (Extensive), Parts of a Mushroom, 3 Roles of Fungi, Fungi Reproduction, Mold Prevention, Plant Divisions, Kingdom Plantae. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me. Thanks again and best wishes. Sincerely, Ryan Murphy www.sciencepowerpoint@gmail.com
Schmidt's three lens corrector for a spherical mirrorDave Shafer
Schmidt's aspheric plate in a Schmidt telescope design can be replaced by a group of three spherical lenses, as Schmidt himself showed, but he died before he could publish anything on this. Here I show many alternate versions to Schmidt's design.
Roof top and vertical gardening for greening the citiesgirija kumari
This document summarizes a presentation on green roofs and vertical gardens. It discusses the history of roof gardens dating back to ancient Mesopotamian structures. It also describes the benefits of green roofs and vertical gardens such as reducing the urban heat island effect and energy consumption. The document presents two case studies, one on integrating green roofs with solar panels which found energy savings, and another on using vertical gardens to reduce indoor carbon dioxide levels. In conclusion, green roofs and vertical gardens can help the environment if designed sustainably and cost-effectively.
This document summarizes microbial production of various solvents like ethanol, acetone, butanol, and glycerol. It describes the common uses of solvents and details the processes of ethanol production through both petrochemical and biological fermentation methods. The biological fermentation process involves steps like saccharification, liquefaction, milling, fermentation, and distillation. It also discusses the advantages of using bacteria like Z. mobilis and C. ljungdahlii over yeast for ethanol production, as well as the production methods for acetone, butanol, and glycerol.
The document lists various cut flower plants and provides information on their local season, major producers, growing requirements, and pricing. It discusses 26 different flowers, including zinnias, sunflowers, delphiniums, sweet peas, gerberas, snapdragons, carnations, roses, alstroemerias, chrysanthemums, lisianthus, celosia, tulips, narcissus, lilies, ranunculus, calla lilies, gladiolus, asters and hydrangeas. For each flower, it specifies the local season, countries that are major producers, growing details, and how they are typically sold and priced.
Elasticities of Demand and Supply and ApplicationKarl Obispo
Elasticities of Demand and Supply and Application
[1] Elasticity refers to the responsiveness of quantity demanded or supplied to changes in factors like price and income. There are different types of elasticity including own price elasticity and cross price elasticity.
[2] Elasticities are measured using the percentage change formula and can be point or arc elasticities. Own price elasticity measures the responsiveness of quantity to price changes. Inelastic demands are less responsive than elastic demands.
[3] Elasticities help determine how taxes impact consumers versus producers. Demands more elastic than supply means producers bear more of the tax burden.
Lecture 6: Postharvest Control of Senescence and Related ProcessesKarl Obispo
This document provides an overview of modified atmosphere and modified humidity packaging. It defines these terms and discusses their commercial uses and principles. Modified atmosphere packaging involves exposing produce to a controlled gas mixture inside a sealed package to extend shelf life. Benefits include reduced respiration and ethylene effects, while risks include disorder development if not designed properly. Modified humidity packaging controls the relative humidity inside packages using additives like salts to prevent issues from very high humidity. The document outlines the key learning objectives and lessons that will be covered.
role of nanotechnology for crop protection in horticultural cropsgirija kumari
includes contents related to introduction about nanotechnology, nano particles, applications in agriculture and horticulture, crop protection applications and case studies
The document discusses the floriculture industry in India, including production levels and major producing states. It analyzes the supply chain and pricing of flowers like marigolds and roses from farmers to wholesale markets to retailers. The key challenges are lack of infrastructure, high import tariffs, and inadequate transportation and storage facilities. The government has implemented schemes to promote exports and develop infrastructure, but the sector remains largely unorganized with inconsistent commission rates and decreasing exports.
The document describes the morphological parts of flowers including the sepals, petals, stamens, carpels, and their arrangements. It also discusses different types of inflorescences such as spikes, umbels, racemes, heads, and panicles. Examples are provided for each floral part and inflorescence structure.
A poster is used to promote a product, event, idea or cause through visual and textual elements. An effective poster catches attention, uses striking design elements like captions, slogans, logos and pictures/diagrams, and conveys a clear and concise message or call to action in a few words. Key elements of good poster design include being eye-catching, using imagery and statistics to engage viewers, and posing open-ended questions. Posters should aim to quickly inform and persuade viewers about the topic being promoted.
The document discusses the effective use of posters. It notes that posters should stop, read, and remember people. A good poster is self-explanatory and captures attention in order to influence many people. When creating a poster, one should consider the audience, message, brevity, readability, use of images, and essential details. Posters should be attention-grabbing, have brief and clear information, be neat, use relevant visuals, and include important details like date and location. Color, letters, spelling, and simplicity are also important design considerations.
Proposal writing fms research seminar seriesShameem Ali
This document provides guidance on developing a research proposal. It discusses what reviewers look for in a proposal and emphasizes the importance of clearly relating objectives, methodologies, and expected outcomes. It also addresses common questions students have about the need to prepare a detailed proposal before beginning their study. The document outlines what a research proposal should include, such as the introduction/background, literature review, methodology, and reference sections. It provides examples of proposal structures and tables of contents. Finally, it offers tips for identifying a legitimate research problem and gap in the literature to address.
Floriculture is the cultivation of flowering and ornamental plants for gardens, floristry, and the floral industry. It is an important commercial industry in India, with over 232,000 hectares under cultivation in 2012-2013 producing over 1.7 million tons of loose flowers and 76.73 million tons of cut flowers. Major floriculture crops in India include roses, tuberose, gladiolus, chrysanthemum, and jasmine. The country exports over 22,000 tons of floricultural products annually, mainly to the United States, Netherlands, Germany, United Kingdom, and United Arab Emirates. Floriculture has become a major commercial crop in several Indian states like West Bengal, Karnataka
Lecture 2: Biological Aspect of Postharvest Handling of CropsKarl Obispo
This document provides an overview of the biological aspects of postharvest handling of crops. It begins with learning objectives focused on classifying fruits and vegetables based on their structures and postharvest life, and understanding the physiological processes that affect quality after harvest. The document then outlines topics that will be covered, including classification, morphological structures, chemical properties, postharvest physiology, and factors affecting quality. It provides details on these topics, such as how cuticle thickness, stomata, and other structures influence water loss and susceptibility to damage. The goal is to understand how crop structure relates to perishability and how to properly handle crops after harvesting.
Vince Ricci, University of Tokyo, Center for Innovation in Engineering Education (CIEE).
Please check out the course blog here
http://techwritingtodai.blogspot.com
Special thanks Morimura-sensei, Mr. Entzinger and the CIEE staff.
Present status of Floriculture industry in Tamilnadu, India & World. All other aspects of floriculture industry including merits, demerits, oppurtunities, strategies to develop, potentials, scope etc..
Food waste and loss is a large and increasingly urgent problem and is particularly acute in developing countries where food loss reduces income by at least 15 percent (according to the FAO) for 470 million smallholder farmers and downstream value chain actors, most of whom are part of the 1.2 billion people who are food insecure.
The document provides information about career opportunities in the hotel management industry. It discusses the various educational qualifications and courses required to pursue a career in hotel management. It also outlines the many career prospects available, including opportunities in hotels, restaurants, cruise ships, hospitals and more. Higher studies options and starting one's own business in the industry are also mentioned.
Review the Global Issues in Context Left Homeless, Storm Victims.docxinfantkimber
Review
the "Global Issues in Context: Left Homeless, Storm Victims Turn to Internet to Find Shelter" podcast, located in this week's Electronic Reserve readings.
The podcast discusses the use of technology to locate available places where homeless storm victims can find shelter. If a family locates a place using the electronic resource, they are expecting it to be a guarantee. Consider some of the risks associated with misinformation.
Imagine
you are a reporter for a national news syndication. You are tasked with writing a summation of the usefulness of technology in a crisis situation. Be sure to include in your article your opinion of or personal experience with crisis.
Write
a 350- to 700-word article that discusses the following:
How was the use of technology demonstrated in this podcast?
Identify uses of information technology to connect clients to online resources.
Is there any danger in being dependent on technology, specifically in the scenario from the podcast?
Evaluate the differences between and benefits of electronic information over receiving information in a written printed format.
When considering the needs of people in crisis, how effective is the use of technology in the following circumstances?
Speed of information
Accuracy
Access to the technology
Updating data
How can a human service agency ensure that they are not liable for information that could be wrong?
Are there any regulations you can think of that should be considered when providing access to materials using technology?
Faculty Materials
...
ENGL 301B Sections 12 & 15
Prof. Guzik Spring 2020
Assignment #2: Mis and Dis
Purpose and Logistics:
Normally, as we work on assignment #2 in ENGL 301B we would be revisiting key structural elements of essays more advanced than the Five-Paragraph-Style (FPS) Essay. However, many of the lessons that I usually use for this assignment to focus on global organization are activities that (despite my best efforts) are activities that I don’t have an easy fix for to convert them to activities that can be done at home or online. So this is going to be a bit awkward.
Instead, we’ll drill down on paragraph development and strategies for introductory paragraphs and concluding paragraphs.
Moreover, since many (but not all) of you are taking the class C/NC instead of for a letter grade, some of you will only plan to write two out of class essays instead of all three.
This assignment topic should be completed by all students taking the class who DO NOT plan to use A1 in the final portfolio. It’s another argumentative, thesis-driven essay, and every passing portfolio should have one. A3 is a more narrative topic (although it does involve some heavy-duty analysis.)
However, I am mindful that even though this assignment has two topic options, both of them may be close enough to current events that students who either struggle with issues of anxiety or who are easily distracted by news in our current study and work environments might find this assignment hard to complete, even if you choose to focus on political mis and dis instead of public health mis and dis. (Those terms will make sense soon.)
To that end, I am posting the materials for A2 and A3 at the same time and asking students to make the choices that work best for them when selecting which assignment to work on next.
When we hold online classes, we may divide up into A2 and A3 groups to discuss the topics. Stay tuned for details.
Readings:
Truth Decay: An Initial Exploration of the Diminishing Role of Facts and Analysis in American Public Life by Jennifer Kavanagh and Michael D. Rich (you are only required to read the summary and the introduction of this book-length report. If you choose to use this as a reading for your essay, you are welcome to draw on other parts of the text, but in no way required to.)
“Why We Believe Lies” by Cailin O’Connor and James Owen Weatherall. (This article was published in Scientific American but is locked behind a paywall if you try to google the article. I suggest using the Academic Search Complete database, which has the HTML version of the article. It was published in the September 2019 edition.)
“YouTube, The Great Radicalizer” by Zeynep Tufekci from The New York Times
“Evaluating Information: The Cornerstone of Civic Online Reasoning” the executive summary published by the Stanford History Education Group in 2016.
“Misinformation Telephone” by Renee Diresta from Slate
Background:
Current events have driven home yet again that the infras.
This PowerPoint is one small part of the Taxonomy and Classification unit from www.sciencepowerpoint.com. A 3800+ slide Five Part PowerPoint presentation becomes the roadmap for an amazing and interactive science experience full of built-in lab activities, built-in quizzes, video links, class notes(red slides),review games, projects, unit notes, answer keys, and much more. Also included is a student version of the unit that is much like the teachers but missing the answer keys, quizzes, PowerPoint review games, hidden box challenges, owl, and surprises meant for the classroom. This is a great resource to distribute to your students and support professionals. The Classification and Taxonomy Unit covers topics associated with Taxonomy and Classification. The unit examines all of the Kingdoms of Life in detail. Areas of Focus within The Taxonomy and Classification Unit: -Taxonomy, Classification, Need for Taxonomy vs. Common Names, What is a Species?, Dichotomous Keys, What does Classification Use?, The Domains of Life, Kingdoms of Life,The 8 Taxonomic Ranks, Humans Taxonomic Classification, Kingdom Monera, Prokaryotic Cells, Types of Eubacteria, Bacteria Classification, Gram Staining,Bacterial Food Borne Illnesses, Penicillin and Antiseptic, Oral Hygiene and Plaque, Bacterial Reproduction (Binary Fission), Asexual Reproduction, Positives and Negatives of Bacteria, Protista, Plant-like Protists, Animal-like Protists, Fungi-like Protists, Animalia, Characteristics of Animalia, Animal Symmetry, Phylums of Animalia (Extensive), Classes of Chordata, Mammals, Subclasses of Mammals, Characteristics of Mammals, Fungi, Positives and Negatives of Fungi, Divisions of Fungi (Extensive), Parts of a Mushroom, 3 Roles of Fungi, Fungi Reproduction, Mold Prevention, Plant Divisions, Kingdom Plantae. If you have any questions please feel free to contact me. Thanks again and best wishes. Sincerely, Ryan Murphy www.sciencepowerpoint@gmail.com
Schmidt's three lens corrector for a spherical mirrorDave Shafer
Schmidt's aspheric plate in a Schmidt telescope design can be replaced by a group of three spherical lenses, as Schmidt himself showed, but he died before he could publish anything on this. Here I show many alternate versions to Schmidt's design.
Roof top and vertical gardening for greening the citiesgirija kumari
This document summarizes a presentation on green roofs and vertical gardens. It discusses the history of roof gardens dating back to ancient Mesopotamian structures. It also describes the benefits of green roofs and vertical gardens such as reducing the urban heat island effect and energy consumption. The document presents two case studies, one on integrating green roofs with solar panels which found energy savings, and another on using vertical gardens to reduce indoor carbon dioxide levels. In conclusion, green roofs and vertical gardens can help the environment if designed sustainably and cost-effectively.
This document summarizes microbial production of various solvents like ethanol, acetone, butanol, and glycerol. It describes the common uses of solvents and details the processes of ethanol production through both petrochemical and biological fermentation methods. The biological fermentation process involves steps like saccharification, liquefaction, milling, fermentation, and distillation. It also discusses the advantages of using bacteria like Z. mobilis and C. ljungdahlii over yeast for ethanol production, as well as the production methods for acetone, butanol, and glycerol.
The document lists various cut flower plants and provides information on their local season, major producers, growing requirements, and pricing. It discusses 26 different flowers, including zinnias, sunflowers, delphiniums, sweet peas, gerberas, snapdragons, carnations, roses, alstroemerias, chrysanthemums, lisianthus, celosia, tulips, narcissus, lilies, ranunculus, calla lilies, gladiolus, asters and hydrangeas. For each flower, it specifies the local season, countries that are major producers, growing details, and how they are typically sold and priced.
Elasticities of Demand and Supply and ApplicationKarl Obispo
Elasticities of Demand and Supply and Application
[1] Elasticity refers to the responsiveness of quantity demanded or supplied to changes in factors like price and income. There are different types of elasticity including own price elasticity and cross price elasticity.
[2] Elasticities are measured using the percentage change formula and can be point or arc elasticities. Own price elasticity measures the responsiveness of quantity to price changes. Inelastic demands are less responsive than elastic demands.
[3] Elasticities help determine how taxes impact consumers versus producers. Demands more elastic than supply means producers bear more of the tax burden.
Lecture 6: Postharvest Control of Senescence and Related ProcessesKarl Obispo
This document provides an overview of modified atmosphere and modified humidity packaging. It defines these terms and discusses their commercial uses and principles. Modified atmosphere packaging involves exposing produce to a controlled gas mixture inside a sealed package to extend shelf life. Benefits include reduced respiration and ethylene effects, while risks include disorder development if not designed properly. Modified humidity packaging controls the relative humidity inside packages using additives like salts to prevent issues from very high humidity. The document outlines the key learning objectives and lessons that will be covered.
role of nanotechnology for crop protection in horticultural cropsgirija kumari
includes contents related to introduction about nanotechnology, nano particles, applications in agriculture and horticulture, crop protection applications and case studies
The document discusses the floriculture industry in India, including production levels and major producing states. It analyzes the supply chain and pricing of flowers like marigolds and roses from farmers to wholesale markets to retailers. The key challenges are lack of infrastructure, high import tariffs, and inadequate transportation and storage facilities. The government has implemented schemes to promote exports and develop infrastructure, but the sector remains largely unorganized with inconsistent commission rates and decreasing exports.
The document describes the morphological parts of flowers including the sepals, petals, stamens, carpels, and their arrangements. It also discusses different types of inflorescences such as spikes, umbels, racemes, heads, and panicles. Examples are provided for each floral part and inflorescence structure.
A poster is used to promote a product, event, idea or cause through visual and textual elements. An effective poster catches attention, uses striking design elements like captions, slogans, logos and pictures/diagrams, and conveys a clear and concise message or call to action in a few words. Key elements of good poster design include being eye-catching, using imagery and statistics to engage viewers, and posing open-ended questions. Posters should aim to quickly inform and persuade viewers about the topic being promoted.
The document discusses the effective use of posters. It notes that posters should stop, read, and remember people. A good poster is self-explanatory and captures attention in order to influence many people. When creating a poster, one should consider the audience, message, brevity, readability, use of images, and essential details. Posters should be attention-grabbing, have brief and clear information, be neat, use relevant visuals, and include important details like date and location. Color, letters, spelling, and simplicity are also important design considerations.
Proposal writing fms research seminar seriesShameem Ali
This document provides guidance on developing a research proposal. It discusses what reviewers look for in a proposal and emphasizes the importance of clearly relating objectives, methodologies, and expected outcomes. It also addresses common questions students have about the need to prepare a detailed proposal before beginning their study. The document outlines what a research proposal should include, such as the introduction/background, literature review, methodology, and reference sections. It provides examples of proposal structures and tables of contents. Finally, it offers tips for identifying a legitimate research problem and gap in the literature to address.
Floriculture is the cultivation of flowering and ornamental plants for gardens, floristry, and the floral industry. It is an important commercial industry in India, with over 232,000 hectares under cultivation in 2012-2013 producing over 1.7 million tons of loose flowers and 76.73 million tons of cut flowers. Major floriculture crops in India include roses, tuberose, gladiolus, chrysanthemum, and jasmine. The country exports over 22,000 tons of floricultural products annually, mainly to the United States, Netherlands, Germany, United Kingdom, and United Arab Emirates. Floriculture has become a major commercial crop in several Indian states like West Bengal, Karnataka
Lecture 2: Biological Aspect of Postharvest Handling of CropsKarl Obispo
This document provides an overview of the biological aspects of postharvest handling of crops. It begins with learning objectives focused on classifying fruits and vegetables based on their structures and postharvest life, and understanding the physiological processes that affect quality after harvest. The document then outlines topics that will be covered, including classification, morphological structures, chemical properties, postharvest physiology, and factors affecting quality. It provides details on these topics, such as how cuticle thickness, stomata, and other structures influence water loss and susceptibility to damage. The goal is to understand how crop structure relates to perishability and how to properly handle crops after harvesting.
Vince Ricci, University of Tokyo, Center for Innovation in Engineering Education (CIEE).
Please check out the course blog here
http://techwritingtodai.blogspot.com
Special thanks Morimura-sensei, Mr. Entzinger and the CIEE staff.
Present status of Floriculture industry in Tamilnadu, India & World. All other aspects of floriculture industry including merits, demerits, oppurtunities, strategies to develop, potentials, scope etc..
Food waste and loss is a large and increasingly urgent problem and is particularly acute in developing countries where food loss reduces income by at least 15 percent (according to the FAO) for 470 million smallholder farmers and downstream value chain actors, most of whom are part of the 1.2 billion people who are food insecure.
The document provides information about career opportunities in the hotel management industry. It discusses the various educational qualifications and courses required to pursue a career in hotel management. It also outlines the many career prospects available, including opportunities in hotels, restaurants, cruise ships, hospitals and more. Higher studies options and starting one's own business in the industry are also mentioned.
Review the Global Issues in Context Left Homeless, Storm Victims.docxinfantkimber
Review
the "Global Issues in Context: Left Homeless, Storm Victims Turn to Internet to Find Shelter" podcast, located in this week's Electronic Reserve readings.
The podcast discusses the use of technology to locate available places where homeless storm victims can find shelter. If a family locates a place using the electronic resource, they are expecting it to be a guarantee. Consider some of the risks associated with misinformation.
Imagine
you are a reporter for a national news syndication. You are tasked with writing a summation of the usefulness of technology in a crisis situation. Be sure to include in your article your opinion of or personal experience with crisis.
Write
a 350- to 700-word article that discusses the following:
How was the use of technology demonstrated in this podcast?
Identify uses of information technology to connect clients to online resources.
Is there any danger in being dependent on technology, specifically in the scenario from the podcast?
Evaluate the differences between and benefits of electronic information over receiving information in a written printed format.
When considering the needs of people in crisis, how effective is the use of technology in the following circumstances?
Speed of information
Accuracy
Access to the technology
Updating data
How can a human service agency ensure that they are not liable for information that could be wrong?
Are there any regulations you can think of that should be considered when providing access to materials using technology?
Faculty Materials
...
ENGL 301B Sections 12 & 15
Prof. Guzik Spring 2020
Assignment #2: Mis and Dis
Purpose and Logistics:
Normally, as we work on assignment #2 in ENGL 301B we would be revisiting key structural elements of essays more advanced than the Five-Paragraph-Style (FPS) Essay. However, many of the lessons that I usually use for this assignment to focus on global organization are activities that (despite my best efforts) are activities that I don’t have an easy fix for to convert them to activities that can be done at home or online. So this is going to be a bit awkward.
Instead, we’ll drill down on paragraph development and strategies for introductory paragraphs and concluding paragraphs.
Moreover, since many (but not all) of you are taking the class C/NC instead of for a letter grade, some of you will only plan to write two out of class essays instead of all three.
This assignment topic should be completed by all students taking the class who DO NOT plan to use A1 in the final portfolio. It’s another argumentative, thesis-driven essay, and every passing portfolio should have one. A3 is a more narrative topic (although it does involve some heavy-duty analysis.)
However, I am mindful that even though this assignment has two topic options, both of them may be close enough to current events that students who either struggle with issues of anxiety or who are easily distracted by news in our current study and work environments might find this assignment hard to complete, even if you choose to focus on political mis and dis instead of public health mis and dis. (Those terms will make sense soon.)
To that end, I am posting the materials for A2 and A3 at the same time and asking students to make the choices that work best for them when selecting which assignment to work on next.
When we hold online classes, we may divide up into A2 and A3 groups to discuss the topics. Stay tuned for details.
Readings:
Truth Decay: An Initial Exploration of the Diminishing Role of Facts and Analysis in American Public Life by Jennifer Kavanagh and Michael D. Rich (you are only required to read the summary and the introduction of this book-length report. If you choose to use this as a reading for your essay, you are welcome to draw on other parts of the text, but in no way required to.)
“Why We Believe Lies” by Cailin O’Connor and James Owen Weatherall. (This article was published in Scientific American but is locked behind a paywall if you try to google the article. I suggest using the Academic Search Complete database, which has the HTML version of the article. It was published in the September 2019 edition.)
“YouTube, The Great Radicalizer” by Zeynep Tufekci from The New York Times
“Evaluating Information: The Cornerstone of Civic Online Reasoning” the executive summary published by the Stanford History Education Group in 2016.
“Misinformation Telephone” by Renee Diresta from Slate
Background:
Current events have driven home yet again that the infras.
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The "Global Issues in Context: Left Homeless, Storm Victims Turn to Internet to Find Shelter" podcast, located in this week's Electronic Reserve readings.
The podcast discusses the use of technology to locate available places where homeless storm victims can find shelter. If a family locates a place using the electronic resource, they are expecting it to be a guarantee. Consider some of the risks associated with misinformation.
Imagine
you are a reporter for a national news syndication. You are tasked with writing a summation of the usefulness of technology in a crisis situation. Be sure to include in your article your opinion of or personal experience with crisis.
Write
a 350- to 700-word article that discusses the following:
How was the use of technology demonstrated in this podcast?
Identify uses of information technology to connect clients to online resources.
Is there any danger in being dependent on technology, specifically in the scenario from the podcast?
Evaluate the differences between and benefits of electronic information over receiving information in a written printed format.
When considering the needs of people in crisis, how effective is the use of technology in the following circumstances?
Speed of information
Accuracy
Access to the technology
Updating data
How can a human service agency ensure that they are not liable for information that could be wrong?
Are there any regulations you can think of that should be considered when providing access to materials using technology?
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The document discusses the differences between argumentative and discursive essays. An argumentative essay requires taking a stance on an issue and using evidence to convince the audience that the arguments are valid. The goal is to further convince readers that the author's position is right. A discursive essay presents both sides of an argument equally and draws tentative conclusions based on the evidence without trying to convince readers of a particular position. Sample topics are provided for both types of essays.
Analytical exposition aims to persuade by presenting arguments to support the writer's position on a topic. It includes an introduction stating the thesis, arguments supporting the position, and a reiteration of the position. Language features include relational processes, conjunctions, and the simple present tense. Hortatory exposition aims to persuade the reader to act in a certain way. It includes a thesis, arguments, and recommendations. Language features focus on the writer and action verbs. Discussion presents different viewpoints on an issue by outlining supporting and contrasting points before making a recommendation.
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The document discusses similarities between two historical works - A Narrative of the Captivity and Restoration of Mrs. Mary Rowlandson and Our Nig. Both works are described as captivity narratives that deal with struggles of faith and silenced sexuality. Specific details from the texts are not included out of respect for copyright.
This document provides information about different text structures used in writing. It defines text structure as how information is organized in a passage and explains that text structure helps authors organize their thoughts and helps readers find and understand information. Six common text structures are then described: chronological, cause and effect, compare and contrast, problem and solution, sequence/process, and spatial/descriptive. Each structure is defined and examples are provided to illustrate how it organizes information. Signal words that typically indicate each structure are also listed. The document concludes by providing tips for identifying text structure in passages.
This document provides details about Arian Mohamadi's personal project on creating a miniature hydroelectric power plant. The goals of the project are to spread awareness about hydroelectric power and encourage sustainable energy use. Arian will create a 3,800 word report and miniature model to demonstrate how hydroelectric power plants work. The project aligns with the global context of scientific and technical innovation. Arian developed guiding questions to stay on track to perfectly model the power plant and communicate findings effectively. Specifications for the miniature include an external power source to rotate the turbine, LED lights, and dual sockets to power the lights.
The document provides strategies for improving reading comprehension of academic texts in English. It recommends preparing for reading by thinking about the reasons for reading and making predictions. When reading, the strategies include reading for specific vs general information, keeping focused on the main path, identifying the main idea, asking and answering questions, and re-reading carefully while noting unfamiliar words. After reading, it advises reviewing the strategies used and re-evaluating one's understanding of the main ideas and opinions in the text.
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Joseph Haydn is considered the father of string quartets. When he started composing, string quartets were called divertimentos, a general term for instrumental music. In the 1780s, under Haydn's influence, the terms "quartet" and "quintet" became standard for chamber music pieces with the now-familiar scoring. Haydn played a major role in developing the string quartet as a serious musical genre with its own identity, conventions, and aesthetic principles.
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Informative Essay
Cause and Effect
Important Terms:
Informative Writing is a specific type of nonfiction writing that teaches the reader about a topic.
The thesis of informative writing explains the main idea and what the writer is teaching about. This is the topic
the writer is explaining.
Each topic sentence is the first sentence of each body paragraph. These first sentences break the topic down
into the most important aspects of what the writer is teaching.
The supporting details are the evidence you find that explain each of your topic sentences. There are six types
of evidence. You can remember the six types of evidence using the acronym F.E.A.S.T.ExO.
F Facts Facts come from a source and can be proven true from that source.
Ex. Renewable energy comes from natural sources and can be
replenished.
E Examples This type of evidence gives a specific example to illustrate your point.
Ex. One type of renewable energy source is solar energy. Solar energy
is energy from the sun and is the cleanest and most abundant
renewable energy.
A Anecdotes An anecdote is a short, personal, true story.
Ex. When my neighbor installed solar panels on his roof, he not only
saved money, but he also received a monthly check from the electric
company for any additional energy collected from his panels.
S Statistics Statistics include numbers and percentages.
Ex. Renewable energy has increased 100% from 2000 to 2018.
T Truths Truths include information that is widely accepted.
Ex. Renewable energy is considered an alternative to fossil fuels.
Ex. Solar energy comes from the sun.
ExO Expert Opinions The opinion of an expert in a specific field has significant experience
and knowledge about the topic.
Ex. The Environmental Protection Agency is an example of a source for
expert opinions related to renewable energy.
Identifying Cause and Effect
Cause-and-Effect Writing requires that you do some backwards planning. Usually, a writer can see the effect of
something right away, but identifying the reason, or cause, of that effect might take some exploring.
We ask certain questions in order to discover who or what is responsible for an action; in other words, we ask,
“What is the cause of the effect I see?”
Take a look at the photo of the car accident below.
We can see the effect right away:
• two cars are damaged,
• the front end of each vehicle is damaged, and
• there is debris on the road.
This is where we start to ask questions to figure out the cause.
• Was someone driving too fast or driving distracted?
• Did one of the drivers run a stop sign or traffic light?
• Was one of the drivers on the wrong side of the road?
• Did one of the drivers turn into the wrong lane?
• Were there any factors in the weather leading to this accident?
We can also start asking ourselves questions about the longer effects of the accident.
• Will the insurance rates go up for one or bo.
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IND301 Milestone 4 Template
1. Paraphrasing activity:
Quote from source: “The transition to electrification of vehicles will probably be gradual, for three primary reasons: consumer caution when it comes to large purchases, the high initial cost of manufacturing electric vehicles, and pushback from vested interests. There will be special circumstances, such as in Norway, where rapid transitions are possible. But in places such as the United States, where the automotive market is large and diverse, and many players are involved—including the thousands of cities and states that impose rules and offer incentives—the pace will be slower. Cost reductions will take time. Gasoline cars have benefited from a century of intensive development, while electric cars have been the focus of major manufacturers on a commercial scale only since about 2010.”
Paraphrase: The shift from traditional vehicles to EVs (electric vehicles) was rapid in Norway, but the same pace is not expected in the United States, which has a much higher population, state and local laws to contend with, and a large and diverse auto industry. In addition, consumers are often hesitant about large purchases. This hesitance, along with the high costs for EV production, and pressure from oppositional groups, will slow the transition. While the cost of EV production will eventually decrease, this will take time; in comparison to gas-powered cars’ long history, EVs have only been widely available since 2010. (Sperling, 2018, p. 15)
2. List of references:
Li, C., Cao, Y., Zhang, M., Wang, J., Liu, J., Shi, H., & Geng, Y. (2015). Hidden benefits of electric vehicles for addressing climate change. Scientific Reports, 5, 9213. https://doi.org/10.1038/srep09213
National Research Council (U.S.). (2015). Overcoming barriers to deployment of plug-inelectric vehicles. Washington, DC: National Academies Press. https://doi.org/10.17226/21725
Noori, M., & Tatari, O. (2016). Development of an agent-based model for regional market penetration projections of electric vehicles in the United States. Energy, 96, 215–230. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.energy.2015.12.018
Sperling, D. (2018). Electric vehicles: Approaching the tipping point. Bulletin of the Atomic
Scientists, 74(1), 11–18. https://doi.org/10.1080/00963402.2017.1413055
Zhang, X., Bai, X., & Shang, J. (2018). Is subsidized electric vehicles adoption sustainable: Consumers’ perceptions and motivation toward incentive policies, environmental benefits, and risks. Journal of Cleaner Production, 192, 7179. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jclepro.2018.04.252
IND301 Cornerstone Discussion Rubric
Criteria A+ (100) A (95) B (85) C (75) D (65) F (55) F (0)
Possible Points: 20 20 19 17 15 13 11 0
Discussion Expectations:
Initial posts and replies
fulfill the specified
discussion requirements,
advance the discussion,
and utilize effective
discussion techniques.
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Article #1 Citation Ellcessor, E. (2019). Call If You Can, Temallisonshavon
Article #1
Citation: Ellcessor, E. (2019). Call If You Can, Text If You Can't: A Dismediation of U.S. Emergency Communication Infrastructure. International journal of communication
Main Points:
The consumer may notice that 911 is becoming more familiar with technology as well as a enhancement for the disadvantaged users that they will not question what took as long. Text-to-911 is using disabilities as a “preoccupation” or used to help promote the program. 911 emergency communication system traditional methods have failed the consumer expectations due to dropped calls, delayed reverse lookups, etc. which may have led to tragic events.
Research Questions/Purpose: The purpose of this article is to explain that the change to the traditional 911 emergency communication system I necessary for the function of life to include those who have disabilities. However, the authors make the argument that they are using people with disabilities as a pawn to promote the new feature. They are using the improvement of the system as an excuse to not address why it has taken so long.
Why and how is this infrastructural change being made sense of through disability, and for whom?
Methods: Archive of Educational Material
Sample: 911 communication material such as Public Service Announcement, Brochures and web pages from the Federal Communications Commission and the National Number Association.
Variables: The change of media and technical design from the perspective of people with disabilities.
Procedure: The use of dismediation and analyzing the media looking at the information from an infrastructure perspective.
Results:
Statistical Test:
Findings: When considering the ability to talk to 911 or have a peaceful encounter with the police or 911 emergency system is a privilege. People with disabilities are not always understood and could lead to a violent encounter because officer began to assume, they are not cooperating. Although this a infrastructural change for everyone to the emergency communication system, they use disabilities as a way to justify the change and it will not be questioned.
Discussion/Interpretation:
The limitations that have been placed in the system for years is being covered up with the introduction of this new system. It has not been challenged yet and consumers will not challenge it because there was a infrastructural change.
Problems: Th argument seemed to be one sided and the author assumed that consumers would not see how this advancement is very essential if they do not have a disability.
Take home message: Technology has become domesticated by societies demand and Text-to-Call is trying to implement it into their system. 911 system has withstood being domesticated for people with thick accents or people with disabilities.
Notable Quotes:
Ultimately, I argue that in these materials, deafness and disability function as what Mara Mills refers to as an "assistive pretext" (2010)--a preoccupation--that discursively refra ...
Article #1 Citation Ellcessor, E. (2019). Call If You Can, Te.docxssusera34210
Article #1
Citation: Ellcessor, E. (2019). Call If You Can, Text If You Can't: A Dismediation of U.S. Emergency Communication Infrastructure. International journal of communication
Main Points:
The consumer may notice that 911 is becoming more familiar with technology as well as a enhancement for the disadvantaged users that they will not question what took as long. Text-to-911 is using disabilities as a “preoccupation” or used to help promote the program. 911 emergency communication system traditional methods have failed the consumer expectations due to dropped calls, delayed reverse lookups, etc. which may have led to tragic events.
Research Questions/Purpose: The purpose of this article is to explain that the change to the traditional 911 emergency communication system I necessary for the function of life to include those who have disabilities. However, the authors make the argument that they are using people with disabilities as a pawn to promote the new feature. They are using the improvement of the system as an excuse to not address why it has taken so long.
Why and how is this infrastructural change being made sense of through disability, and for whom?
Methods: Archive of Educational Material
Sample: 911 communication material such as Public Service Announcement, Brochures and web pages from the Federal Communications Commission and the National Number Association.
Variables: The change of media and technical design from the perspective of people with disabilities.
Procedure: The use of dismediation and analyzing the media looking at the information from an infrastructure perspective.
Results:
Statistical Test:
Findings: When considering the ability to talk to 911 or have a peaceful encounter with the police or 911 emergency system is a privilege. People with disabilities are not always understood and could lead to a violent encounter because officer began to assume, they are not cooperating. Although this a infrastructural change for everyone to the emergency communication system, they use disabilities as a way to justify the change and it will not be questioned.
Discussion/Interpretation:
The limitations that have been placed in the system for years is being covered up with the introduction of this new system. It has not been challenged yet and consumers will not challenge it because there was a infrastructural change.
Problems: Th argument seemed to be one sided and the author assumed that consumers would not see how this advancement is very essential if they do not have a disability.
Take home message: Technology has become domesticated by societies demand and Text-to-Call is trying to implement it into their system. 911 system has withstood being domesticated for people with thick accents or people with disabilities.
Notable Quotes:
Ultimately, I argue that in these materials, deafness and disability function as what Mara Mills refers to as an "assistive pretext" (2010)--a preoccupation--that discursively refra.
Article #1 Citation Ellcessor, E. (2019). Call If You Can, Te.docxfestockton
Article #1
Citation: Ellcessor, E. (2019). Call If You Can, Text If You Can't: A Dismediation of U.S. Emergency Communication Infrastructure. International journal of communication
Main Points:
The consumer may notice that 911 is becoming more familiar with technology as well as a enhancement for the disadvantaged users that they will not question what took as long. Text-to-911 is using disabilities as a “preoccupation” or used to help promote the program. 911 emergency communication system traditional methods have failed the consumer expectations due to dropped calls, delayed reverse lookups, etc. which may have led to tragic events.
Research Questions/Purpose: The purpose of this article is to explain that the change to the traditional 911 emergency communication system I necessary for the function of life to include those who have disabilities. However, the authors make the argument that they are using people with disabilities as a pawn to promote the new feature. They are using the improvement of the system as an excuse to not address why it has taken so long.
Why and how is this infrastructural change being made sense of through disability, and for whom?
Methods: Archive of Educational Material
Sample: 911 communication material such as Public Service Announcement, Brochures and web pages from the Federal Communications Commission and the National Number Association.
Variables: The change of media and technical design from the perspective of people with disabilities.
Procedure: The use of dismediation and analyzing the media looking at the information from an infrastructure perspective.
Results:
Statistical Test:
Findings: When considering the ability to talk to 911 or have a peaceful encounter with the police or 911 emergency system is a privilege. People with disabilities are not always understood and could lead to a violent encounter because officer began to assume, they are not cooperating. Although this a infrastructural change for everyone to the emergency communication system, they use disabilities as a way to justify the change and it will not be questioned.
Discussion/Interpretation:
The limitations that have been placed in the system for years is being covered up with the introduction of this new system. It has not been challenged yet and consumers will not challenge it because there was a infrastructural change.
Problems: Th argument seemed to be one sided and the author assumed that consumers would not see how this advancement is very essential if they do not have a disability.
Take home message: Technology has become domesticated by societies demand and Text-to-Call is trying to implement it into their system. 911 system has withstood being domesticated for people with thick accents or people with disabilities.
Notable Quotes:
Ultimately, I argue that in these materials, deafness and disability function as what Mara Mills refers to as an "assistive pretext" (2010)--a preoccupation--that discursively refra ...
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This document summarizes Vince Ricci's presentation on how to secure a Fulbright Fellowship. It provides tips on developing a strong statement of grant purpose describing the proposed research project, as well as an impactful personal statement. It emphasizes starting early, getting feedback from non-specialists, and demonstrating how one's background prepares them to execute their Fulbright plans. Additional resources and next steps are provided, including researching the host country's program, drafting documents with the interview in mind, and enjoying the process.
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As AI technology is pushing into IT I was wondering myself, as an “infrastructure container kubernetes guy”, how get this fancy AI technology get managed from an infrastructure operational view? Is it possible to apply our lovely cloud native principals as well? What benefit’s both technologies could bring to each other?
Let me take this questions and provide you a short journey through existing deployment models and use cases for AI software. On practical examples, we discuss what cloud/on-premise strategy we may need for applying it to our own infrastructure to get it to work from an enterprise perspective. I want to give an overview about infrastructure requirements and technologies, what could be beneficial or limiting your AI use cases in an enterprise environment. An interactive Demo will give you some insides, what approaches I got already working for real.
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Join us to learn how UiPath Apps can directly and easily interact with prebuilt connectors via Integration Service--including Salesforce, ServiceNow, Open GenAI, and more.
The best part is you can achieve this without building a custom workflow! Say goodbye to the hassle of using separate automations to call APIs. By seamlessly integrating within App Studio, you can now easily streamline your workflow, while gaining direct access to our Connector Catalog of popular applications.
We’ll discuss and demo the benefits of UiPath Apps and connectors including:
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Enjoying high-performance CRUD (create, read, update, delete) operations, for
seamless data management.
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Charlie Greenberg, host
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ScyllaDB is making a major architecture shift. We’re moving from vNode replication to tablets – fragments of tables that are distributed independently, enabling dynamic data distribution and extreme elasticity. In this keynote, ScyllaDB co-founder and CTO Avi Kivity explains the reason for this shift, provides a look at the implementation and roadmap, and shares how this shift benefits ScyllaDB users.
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This slide deck presents DLHT, a concurrent in-memory hashtable. Despite efforts to optimize hashtables, that go as far as sacrificing core functionality, state-of-the-art designs still incur multiple memory accesses per request and block request processing in three cases. First, most hashtables block while waiting for data to be retrieved from memory. Second, open-addressing designs, which represent the current state-of-the-art, either cannot free index slots on deletes or must block all requests to do so. Third, index resizes block every request until all objects are copied to the new index. Defying folklore wisdom, DLHT forgoes open-addressing and adopts a fully-featured and memory-aware closed-addressing design based on bounded cache-line-chaining. This design offers lock-free index operations and deletes that free slots instantly, (2) completes most requests with a single memory access, (3) utilizes software prefetching to hide memory latencies, and (4) employs a novel non-blocking and parallel resizing. In a commodity server and a memory-resident workload, DLHT surpasses 1.6B requests per second and provides 3.5x (12x) the throughput of the state-of-the-art closed-addressing (open-addressing) resizable hashtable on Gets (Deletes).
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In this webinar, we explored essential aspects of Customer Journey Management and personalization. Here’s a summary of the key insights and topics discussed:
Key Takeaways:
Understanding the Customer Journey: Dr. Hill emphasized the importance of mapping and understanding the complete customer journey to identify touchpoints and opportunities for improvement.
Personalization Strategies: We discussed how to leverage data and insights to create personalized experiences that resonate with customers.
Technology Integration: Insights were shared on how inQuba’s advanced technology can streamline customer interactions and drive operational efficiency.
11. For example, “I propose
developing a mobile information
terminal to help people access
information in the event of a
power failure caused by a natural
disaster.”
16. Do write:
“I propose developing
a mobile information terminal
to help people access information
in the event of a power failure
caused by a natural disaster.”
20. Find and circle your contribution.
If you cannot find your contribution, or if
it is spread out across several
sentences, spend a moment crystalizing
your ideas into one clear contribution
sentence.
Then, draw an arrow to the top of the
page. Your contribution goes at the top!
21. Reorganize and write your paper so that
your contribution appears in the first
sentence.
22.
23. Japan is the country where a
lot of natural disaster such as
earthquakes or typhoons
exists every year.
27. Japan is the country where a lot of
natural disaster such as
earthquakes or typhoons exists
every year.
I propose developing a mobile
information terminal to help
people access information in the
event of a power failure caused
by a natural disaster.
28. The adult male obtains 2000
kcal from food in a day, and
uses 75% among them for the
basal metabolic rate.
29. When people lose power due
to a natural disaster, they
might want to use their
cellular phones to access news
and information.
30. The adult male obtains 2000 kcal
from food in a day, and uses
75% among them for the basal
metabolic rate.
When people lose power due to a
natural disaster, they might want
to use their cellular phones to
access news and information.
31. Circle the first sentence of each
paragraph.
These are your topic sentences.
Read them all to yourself, one after the
other (four or five total sentences).
32. Now, ask yourself this question
If someone only read my
topic sentences, would he be
able to understand my
contribution and main ideas?
33. 1. Japan is the country where a lot of natural
disaster such as earthquakes or typhoons exists
every year.
2. The adult male obtains 2000 kcal from food in a
day, and uses 75% among them for the basal
metabolic rate.
3. Here, I suggest the single-function device that
displays information data received from digital
broadcasting airwave.
4. The reliability of the cellular phone is low as the
information terminal for the emergency due to
battery problem.
34. 1. I propose developing a mobile information terminal to
help people access information in the event of a power
failure caused by a natural disaster.
2. When people lose power due to a natural disaster, they
might want to use their cellular phones to access news
and information.
3. If energy harvested from human motion could be
converted into electric power, it would be possible to
operate various devices.
4. I propose the creation of a single-function device to
display information data received from digital
broadcasting airwaves.
5. In closing, cellular phones are not reliable information
terminals in the event of an emergency.
35. 1. I propose developing a mobile information terminal to
help people access information in the event of a power
failure caused by a natural disaster.
2. When people lose power due to a natural disaster, they
might want to use their cellular phones to access news
and information.
3. Cellular phones, however, are not reliable information
terminals in the event of an emergency.
4. If energy harvested from human motion could be
converted into electric power, it would be possible to
operate various devices.
5. In closing, I propose the creation of a single-function
device to display information data received from digital
broadcasting airwaves.
36. Re-write your topic sentences so that
they best express your contribution and
main ideas.
39. Here, I suggest the single-
function device that displays
information data received
from digital broadcasting
airwave.
40. RELATIONSHIP TRANSITION
Consequence therefore, thus
Contrast & Comparison but, however, still, yet
Similarity likewise, moreover
Summarizing in conclusion, on balance
41. RELATIONSHIP TRANSITION
Restatement in other words,
that is to say,
to put it differently,
42. Find and circle the transitions in your
paper.
Ask yourself, "Do my transitions express
the connections between my ideas?"
Are my transitions misleading in any
way?
43. Re-write your transitions so that they
best express the connections between
your ideas
61. Find and circle all of the articles in your
paper.
Can you tell which nouns require definite
and indefinite articles, and which require
no article at all?
62. Find and fix any mistakes in your use of
articles.
65. ① Be respectful
② Use "I" statements
③ Offer suggestions, not
commands
66. ④ Provide reader's point of view
⑤ Phrase comments clearly and
carefully
⑥ Make sure comments are
constructive and specific
67. "This paper is confusing. It keeps
saying the same things over and
over again"
"It sounds like paragraph five
makes the same point as
paragraphs two and three."
Editor's Notes
Good afternoon. I am Vince Ricci. It is my honor to be here at University of Tokyo, Center for Innovation in Engineering Education (CIEE). This is English for Engineers and Scientists, Section A. I am going to spend the next 100 minutes giving an Introduction to Technical Writing in English. Special thanks Morimura-sensei, and staff and TAs of CIEE. I am happy to be with you and I want to thank you all for being here today.
Learn how to write for peers from a different academic disciplineYou wrote a draft paper abut the topic you will be studying during your Master course
Divide job details: responsibilities vs. achievements Make every responsibility sound like an achievement
Identify your contribution
A contribution includes an addition to your field’s overall knowledge.For example, “I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster.”
What is a contribution? A contribution includes an addition to your field’s overall knowledge.For example, “I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster.” It is the main idea of your paper, and the main purpose of your research. It answers questions like: What are you researching?What are you trying to discover, prove, or create?How do you plan to add value to your academic field?
It is the main idea of your paper, and the main purpose of your research.It answers questions like:What are you researching?What are you trying to discover, prove, or create?How do you plan to add value to your academic field?
Don’t write, “I analyzed mobile information terminals and found many issues related to power failures and natural disasters.” Explain what the central results are. For example, “I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster.”Distilling your one central contribution will take some thought. It will cause some pain, because you will start to realize how much you’re going to have to throw out. Once you do it, though, you’re in a much better position to focus the paper on that one contribution, and help readers to get it quickly.Your readers are busy and impatient. No reader will ever read your entire paper from start to finish. Readers skim. You have to make it easy for them to skim. Most readers want to know your basic result first.
Often, my clients’ first drafts are written in a funnel style, with the main idea at the end.
I often read essays where the writer explains why he believes something, and how he found his answer. As a reader, I am not interested in why and how until I know if WHAT he was to say (his conclusion or main point) is in fact interesting, new, valuable.
Don’t write, “I analyzed mobile information terminals and found many issues related to power failures and natural disasters.” Explain what the central results are. For example, “I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster.”Distilling your one central contribution will take some thought. It will cause some pain, because you will start to realize how much you’re going to have to throw out. Once you do it, though, you’re in a much better position to focus the paper on that one contribution, and help readers to get it quickly.Your readers are busy and impatient. No reader will ever read your entire paper from start to finish. Readers skim. You have to make it easy for them to skim. Most readers want to know your basic result first.
“triangular” style means that the main idea comes first. A fellow counselor tells his clients to put the end at the beginning. This counselor is a journalist by training (Fulbright Fellow with a Masters from UC Berkeley). Then, you can explain the context at the end
Think of this as what and how. Write WHAT you thinkBefore explaining WHY you think it and HOW you found that answer
Figure out the one central and novel contribution of your paper. Write this contribution down in your first sentence.As with all your writing, this must be concrete. Don’t write, “I analyzed mobile information terminals and found many issues related to power failures and natural disasters.” Instead, explain what the central results are. For example, “I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster.”Distilling your ideas into one central contribution will take some thought. Once you do it, though, you’re in a much better position to focus the paper on that one contribution, and help readers to get it quickly.Most writers do not tell us the contribution of their paper until the end of the paper. This seems to be especially true in Japan, where writers are taught to put their main idea at the end of their papers (lines 61 – 63 on page 2).Please do not make this mistake when writing in English (lines 140 – 141 on page 6).
Figure out the one central and novel contribution of your paper. Write this contribution down in your first sentence.As with all your writing, this must be concrete. Don’t write, “I analyzed mobile information terminals and found many issues related to power failures and natural disasters.” Instead, explain what the central results are. For example, “I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster.”Distilling your ideas into one central contribution will take some thought. Once you do it, though, you’re in a much better position to focus the paper on that one contribution, and help readers to get it quickly.Most writers do not tell us the contribution of their paper until the end of the paper. This seems to be especially true in Japan, where writers are taught to put their main idea at the end of their papers (lines 61 – 63 on page 2).Please do not make this mistake when writing in English (lines 140 – 141 on page 6).
Figure out the one central and novel contribution of your paper. Write this contribution down in your first sentence.As with all your writing, this must be concrete. Don’t write, “I analyzed mobile information terminals and found many issues related to power failures and natural disasters.” Instead, explain what the central results are. For example, “I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster.”Distilling your ideas into one central contribution will take some thought. Once you do it, though, you’re in a much better position to focus the paper on that one contribution, and help readers to get it quickly.Most writers do not tell us the contribution of their paper until the end of the paper. This seems to be especially true in Japan, where writers are taught to put their main idea at the end of their papers (lines 61 – 63 on page 2).Please do not make this mistake when writing in English (lines 140 – 141 on page 6).
Identify your contribution
Original topic sentences from technical writing sample Japan is the country where a lot of natural disaster such as earthquakes or typhoons exists every year. The adult male obtains 2000 kcal from food in a day, and uses 75% among them for the basal metabolic rate. Here, I suggest the single-function device that displays information data received from digital broadcasting airwave. The reliability of the cellular phone is low as the information terminal for the emergency due to battery problem.
Often, my clients’ first drafts are written in a funnel style, with the main idea at the end.
Final, edited topic sentences from technical writing sample I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster. When people lose power due to a natural disaster, they might want to use their cellular phones to access news and information. If energy harvested from human motion could be converted into electric power, it would be possible to operate various devices. I propose the creation of a single-function device to display information data received from digital broadcasting airwaves. In closing, cellular phones are not reliable information terminals in the event of an emergency.
“triangular” style means that the main idea comes first. A fellow counselor tells his clients to put the end at the beginning. This counselor is a journalist by training (Fulbright Fellow with a Masters from UC Berkeley). Then, you can explain the context at the end
1Japan is the country where a lot of natural disaster such as earthquakes or typhoons exists every year. I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster.
Original topic sentences from technical writing sample Japan is the country where a lot of natural disaster such as earthquakes or typhoons exists every year. The adult male obtains 2000 kcal from food in a day, and uses 75% among them for the basal metabolic rate. Here, I suggest the single-function device that displays information data received from digital broadcasting airwave. The reliability of the cellular phone is low as the information terminal for the emergency due to battery problem.
Final, edited topic sentences from technical writing sample I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster. When people lose power due to a natural disaster, they might want to use their cellular phones to access news and information. If energy harvested from human motion could be converted into electric power, it would be possible to operate various devices. I propose the creation of a single-function device to display information data received from digital broadcasting airwaves. In closing, cellular phones are not reliable information terminals in the event of an emergency.
2The adult male obtains 2000 kcal from food in a day, and uses 75% among them for the basal metabolic rate. When people lose power due to a natural disaster, they might want to use their cellular phones to access news and information.
Circle the first sentence of each paragraph. These are your topic sentences. Read them all to yourself, one after the other (four or five total sentences).Now, ask yourself this question:If a reader only read my topic sentences, would he be able to understand my contribution and main ideas?
Circle the first sentence of each paragraph. These are your topic sentences. Read them all to yourself, one after the other (four or five total sentences).Now, ask yourself this question:If a reader only read my topic sentences, would he be able to understand my contribution and main ideas?
Original topic sentences from technical writing sample Japan is the country where a lot of natural disaster such as earthquakes or typhoons exists every year. The adult male obtains 2000 kcal from food in a day, and uses 75% among them for the basal metabolic rate. Here, I suggest the single-function device that displays information data received from digital broadcasting airwave. The reliability of the cellular phone is low as the information terminal for the emergency due to battery problem.
Final, edited topic sentences from technical writing sample I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster. When people lose power due to a natural disaster, they might want to use their cellular phones to access news and information. If energy harvested from human motion could be converted into electric power, it would be possible to operate various devices. I propose the creation of a single-function device to display information data received from digital broadcasting airwaves. In closing, cellular phones are not reliable information terminals in the event of an emergency.
Final, edited topic sentences from technical writing sample I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster. When people lose power due to a natural disaster, they might want to use their cellular phones to access news and information. If energy harvested from human motion could be converted into electric power, it would be possible to operate various devices. I propose the creation of a single-function device to display information data received from digital broadcasting airwaves. In closing, cellular phones are not reliable information terminals in the event of an emergency.
Homework #2: Re-write your topic sentences so that they best express your contribution and main ideas.
Figure out the one central and novel contribution of your paper. Write this contribution down in your first sentence.As with all your writing, this must be concrete. Don’t write, “I analyzed mobile information terminals and found many issues related to power failures and natural disasters.” Instead, explain what the central results are. For example, “I propose developing a mobile information terminal to help people access information in the event of a power failure caused by a natural disaster.”Distilling your ideas into one central contribution will take some thought. Once you do it, though, you’re in a much better position to focus the paper on that one contribution, and help readers to get it quickly.Most writers do not tell us the contribution of their paper until the end of the paper. This seems to be especially true in Japan, where writers are taught to put their main idea at the end of their papers (lines 61 – 63 on page 2).Please do not make this mistake when writing in English (lines 140 – 141 on page 6).
Original topic sentences from technical writing sample Japan is the country where a lot of natural disaster such as earthquakes or typhoons exists every year. The adult male obtains 2000 kcal from food in a day, and uses 75% among them for the basal metabolic rate. Here, I suggest the single-function device that displays information data received from digital broadcasting airwave. The reliability of the cellular phone is low as the information terminal for the emergency due to battery problem.
Analytical Skills - evaluatedCreative Skills - conceived, designedMediating Skills - mentoredSales Skills - negotiated, resolvedMy personal fave – spearheaded! Try to use that one at least once on your resume.
Analytical Skills - evaluatedCreative Skills - conceived, designedMediating Skills - mentoredSales Skills - negotiated, resolvedMy personal fave – spearheaded! Try to use that one at least once on your resume.
Find and circle the transitions in your paper. Ask yourself, "Do my transitions express the connections between my ideas?" Are my transitions misleading in any way?
Re-write your transitions so that they best express the connections between your ideas
Value statement, beginning, middle, and end.
Value statement, beginning, middle, and end.
Value statement, beginning, middle, and end.
Value statement, beginning, middle, and end.
Value statement, beginning, middle, and end.
Value statement, beginning, middle, and end.
Much bad writing comes down to trying to avoid responsibility for what you’re saying. That’s why people resort to passive sentences and use poor organization that puts the literature first and your idea last, and so on. Take a deep breath, and take responsibility for what you’re writing.
Use active tense. Not: “it is assumed that x = 3”, “data were constructed as follows.” Gee, I wonder who did that assuming and constructing?
Use active tense. Not: “it is assumed that x = 3”, “data were constructed as follows.” Gee, I wonder who did that assuming and constructing?
Use active tense. Not: “it is assumed that x = 3”, “data were constructed as follows.” Gee, I wonder who did that assuming and constructing?
Use active tense. Not: “it is assumed that x = 3”, “data were constructed as follows.” Gee, I wonder who did that assuming and constructing?
Find and circle all examples of passive voice in your paper. Do they fit one of the five reasons below?
1. The 'actor' is not known.Oil was discovered off the coast of Australia.The number of Internet users was estimated to be over one million. 2. The 'actor' is not important.The report has been published.The results will be presented at the conference. 3. It is considered desirable to conceal the identity of the 'actor'.The results are invalid, as the correct testing procedure was not followed. Research funding will be cut next year. 4. An impersonal tone is needed for academic writing.In this report, the stress fields in a C-shape plate will be analyzed.An impersonal tone is also used for describing processes.First, the raw materials are loaded into a container ... 5. A tactful tone is needed to smooth over an error or difficulty.Compare these two examples.Example of passive voice: The samples were not checked at the second stage . . . Example of active voice: We forgot to check the samples . . .
1. The 'actor' is not known.Oil was discovered off the coast of Australia.The number of Internet users was estimated to be over one million. 2. The 'actor' is not important.The report has been published.The results will be presented at the conference. 3. It is considered desirable to conceal the identity of the 'actor'.The results are invalid, as the correct testing procedure was not followed. Research funding will be cut next year. 4. An impersonal tone is needed for academic writing.In this report, the stress fields in a C-shape plate will be analyzed.An impersonal tone is also used for describing processes.First, the raw materials are loaded into a container ... 5. A tactful tone is needed to smooth over an error or difficulty.Compare these two examples.Example of passive voice: The samples were not checked at the second stage . . . Example of active voice: We forgot to check the samples . . .
Find all passive voice sentences that do not fit one of the five reasons. Then, change them into active voice .
Find and circle all of the articles in your paper. Can you tell which nouns require definite and indefinite articles, and which require no article at all?
Find and fix any mistakes in your use of articles.
Any questions? If none, use this: Last class, people asked about pronouns. My rule - Use pronoun "I" if solo research.Use "we" if group research in lab.
Good luck. Thank you!
APPROPRIATECOMMENTSBe respectful and considerate of the writer's feelings.Use "I" statements.Offer suggestions, not commands.
CONSTRUCTIVE COMMENTSRaise questions from a reader's point of view, points that may not have occurred to the writer.Phrase comments clearly and carefully so that the writer can easily understand what needs to be improved.Make sure comments are constructive and specific (not "This paper is confusing. It keeps saying the same things over and over again" but rather "It sounds like paragraph five makes the same point as paragraphs 2 and 3.").Avoid turning the writer's paper into YOUR paper.
(not "This paper is confusing. It keeps saying the same things over and over again" but rather "It sounds like paragraph five makes the same point as paragraphs 2 and 3.").