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DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
THE REDBRIDGE RISE IN CRIME
BY
L.ROSENFELD
M.WEST
B.KARRASS
B.GOLDSTONE
N.AHAMED
SCENE ONE
DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
EXT.HIGH STREET, DAYLIGHT, BEN GOLDSTONE AND MILLIE WEST
STAND SMART CASUALLY DRESSED TO INTRODUCE THE DOCUMENTARY.
BEN GOLDSTONE
(LS,MS)
The crime rate in Redbridge has been on the rise lately.
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS)
And something needs to be done.
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(TWO SHOT, MS)
This is Vibe Reports on the Redbridge Rise In Crime.
CUT TO:
MONTAGE OF WHAT'S TO COME IN THE DOCUMENTARY, TRACKING, INTERVIEWS,
RECONSTRUCTION.
SCENE TWO
EXT.RESIDENTIAL NEIGHBOURHOOD
MILLIE WEST
(TRACKING, MS)
I'm on my way to meet a girl who has been a victim of sexual
assault, called xxxxx.
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MLS,MS)Holds hand out to greet
Hi, how are you?
CUT TO:
VICTIM
(MS)Holds hand out to greet
I am well, thank you.
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS)
So can you walk us through what happened to you, if you feel
uncomfortable you do not have to answer the question.
1
CUT TO:
VICTIM (VO)
DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
(MS,CU)
(EXPLAINS STORY)
CUT TO:
EXT. DARK ALLEYWAY, AFTERNOON
WOMAN
(LS, TRACKING)Walks into alleyway
CUT TO:
ATTACKER
(MS,TRACKING)Follows woman into alley
CUT TO:
WOMAN
(CU) Looks behind her, anxious
CUT TO:
ATTACKER
(LS,MS,LA) Pushes woman up against wall, tries to rip clothes
CUT TO:
TEENAGER (WITH FRIENDS)
(LS,MS)
Stop!!!
CUT TO:
ATTACKER
(MS) Startled, runs off
CUT TO:
WOMAN
(HA,MS) Crying, falls to floor
CUT TO:
TEENAGER (WITH FRIENDS)
(LS,MS,CU) Run over to woman, call police
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS,OTS)
What did you do after the event happened, did you report it to
anyone?
2
CUT TO:
VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
MILLIE WEST
(MS,OTS)
How have you changed, do you feel different?
CUT TO:
VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS,OTS)
What would you say to victims of assault who have not reported it?
CUT TO:
VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS,OTS)
How should perpetrators be dealt with?
CUT TO:
VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
SCENE THREE
INT.SCHOOL CORRIDORS
BEN GOLDSTONE
(TRACKING, MS)
I’m meeting “ “, a statistical analyst specialist, who came to
talk to me about the facts and figures of annual, and regional crime
related data. He will also be able to tell me about what he believes
are the causes for this huge increase in numbers.
3
INT. Well lit office/ room, daytime
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)
DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
Thank you so much for coming to meet us today, and
agreeing to be part of our documentary.
CUT TO:
STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)
What changes have you seen regarding crime in Redbridge over recent
years?
CUT TO:
STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)
How do these figures change regionally and in comparison to other
boroughs?
CUT TO:
STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)
What do you believe is the cause for the increase in crime figures?
CUT TO:
STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)
Are there any specific trends that can be seen regarding the amount
of crime in specific Redbridge region areas or a specific time of
year?
4
CUT TO:
STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)
DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
What do statistical analysts predict for the coming year
regarding the amount of crime reported and occurring?
CUT TO:
STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/LS)
Thank you so much for your time.
CUT TO:
STATISTICAL ANALYST
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
(SHAKE HANDS)
CUT TO:
SCENE FOUR
EXT.BARKINGSIDE HIGH STREET, MORNING, BEN GOLDSTONE STANDS TO
INTRODUCE THE NEW SEGMENT.
BEN GOLDSTONE
(LS,MS)
I’m here today on Barkingside High Street, to ask the public about
their experiences with crime within the borough.
BEN GOLDSTONE
(VOX POPS)
Hi, we're creating a documentary on the rise in Redbridge crime,
would you mind if i asked you a few questions?
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (1)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
5
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/CU)
Have you been a victim of crime?
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (1)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
INTERVIEWEES (2)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/CU)
How did you deal with this experience?
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (1)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (2)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/CU)
What would you do and your first instinct be if you witnessed a
crime being committed?
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (1)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (2)
(MS,CU)
6
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
SCENE FIVE
EXT. DAY, ON RESIDENTIAL STREET
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(LS,MS,TRACKING, ES) Walks through street and into house
I’am about to interview another victim of a crime, that has been
increasing rapidly over the past five years, burglary.
DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MLS,MS)Holds hand out to greet
Hi, thank you for meeting with me today.
CUT TO:
VICTIM
(MS)Holds hand out to greet, sits down
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS, OTS)
So you were a victim of a burglary.
CUT TO:
VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS, OTS)
When did you realise that you had been burgled?
CUT TO:
VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
EXT.RECONSTRUCTION, NIGHT.
7
MAN
(LS,MS,CCTV) Walks up to house, looks through windows, looks around,
forces door open.
CUT TO:
MAN
(MS,CU,LS) Piles valuables into a backpack, runs off
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS, OTS)
Wow, so you actually saw the man burgle you from your phone?
CUT TO:
DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS, OTS)
What happened to the burglar, was he caught?
CUT TO:
VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS, OTS)
Did you feel different in your home, after the crime? How did you
cope?
CUT TO:
VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS, OTS)
What would you say to others in the neighbourhood about burglary and
what can be done to stop it.
CUT TO:
VICTIM
(MS,OTS)
8
(ANSWERS)
SCENE SIX
EXT.BARKINGSIDE HIGH STREET, MORNING
BEN GOLDSTONE
(VOX POPS)
Hi, we're creating a documentary on the rise in Redbridge crime,
would you mind if i asked you a few questions?
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (3)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/CU)
DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
Have you been a victim of crime?
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (3)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (4)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/CU)
How did you deal with this experience?
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (3)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (4)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
9
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS/CU)
What would you do and your first instinct be if you witnessed a
crime being committed?
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (3)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (4)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
BEN GOLDSTONE
DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
(MS/CU)
What do you believe can be done to help try and prevent crime?
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (1)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (2)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (3)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
INTERVIEWEES (4)
(MS,CU)
(ANSWERS)
CUT TO:
SCENE SEVEN
10
EXT. WALKING DOWN ROAD, AFTERNOON
MILLIE WEST
(TRACKING, MS)
I’m on my way to a local Redbridge police station to talk to one of
the officers “ “ about the recent and dramatic increase in crime
figures, and what we can do to try and stop it.
CUT TO:
EXT. Outside police station
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS/LS)
What changes have the police force seen regarding crime in recent
years?
CUT TO:
POLICE OFFICER
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS/LS)
How have these changes impacted the local police force?
CUT TO:
POLICE OFFICER
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS/LS)
What do you believe can be done to help lower the amount of crime
occurring in Redbridge?
CUT TO:
POLICE OFFICER
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS/LS)
If you could give any advice to those who may have been subject to
becoming a victim of crime or to those who may have witnessed one,
what would you say?
CUT TO:
11
POLICE OFFICER
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(MS/LS)
Thank you so much for your time.
CUT TO:
POLICE OFFICER
(MS/CU)
(ANSWER)
(SHAKE HANDS)
CUT TO:
SCENE EIGHT
EXT. BARKINGSIDE HIGH STREET, DAYTIME.
BEN GOLDSTONE
(MS,CU, TRACK)
So there you have it, we have seen that crime is significantly on
the rise and we need to try and do everything we can to try and stop
it.
DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017
CUT TO:
MILLIE WEST
(TWO SHOT, MS, TRACK)
Whether that be to report any incidents that are witnessed, increase
the amount of police patrolling on the streets or simply try to
improve the connection between the police force and the public, we
must do something.
BOTH
(MS-LS)
STOP WALKING - STAND STILL
Shocking, scary and startling - What can you do to help prevent
crime?
CUT TO CREDITS
12

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Script

  • 1. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 THE REDBRIDGE RISE IN CRIME BY L.ROSENFELD M.WEST B.KARRASS B.GOLDSTONE N.AHAMED SCENE ONE
  • 2. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 EXT.HIGH STREET, DAYLIGHT, BEN GOLDSTONE AND MILLIE WEST STAND SMART CASUALLY DRESSED TO INTRODUCE THE DOCUMENTARY. BEN GOLDSTONE (LS,MS) The crime rate in Redbridge has been on the rise lately. CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS) And something needs to be done. CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (TWO SHOT, MS) This is Vibe Reports on the Redbridge Rise In Crime. CUT TO: MONTAGE OF WHAT'S TO COME IN THE DOCUMENTARY, TRACKING, INTERVIEWS, RECONSTRUCTION. SCENE TWO EXT.RESIDENTIAL NEIGHBOURHOOD MILLIE WEST (TRACKING, MS) I'm on my way to meet a girl who has been a victim of sexual assault, called xxxxx. CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MLS,MS)Holds hand out to greet Hi, how are you? CUT TO: VICTIM (MS)Holds hand out to greet I am well, thank you. CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS) So can you walk us through what happened to you, if you feel uncomfortable you do not have to answer the question. 1 CUT TO: VICTIM (VO)
  • 3. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 (MS,CU) (EXPLAINS STORY) CUT TO: EXT. DARK ALLEYWAY, AFTERNOON WOMAN (LS, TRACKING)Walks into alleyway CUT TO: ATTACKER (MS,TRACKING)Follows woman into alley CUT TO: WOMAN (CU) Looks behind her, anxious CUT TO: ATTACKER (LS,MS,LA) Pushes woman up against wall, tries to rip clothes CUT TO: TEENAGER (WITH FRIENDS) (LS,MS) Stop!!! CUT TO: ATTACKER (MS) Startled, runs off CUT TO: WOMAN (HA,MS) Crying, falls to floor CUT TO: TEENAGER (WITH FRIENDS) (LS,MS,CU) Run over to woman, call police CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS,OTS) What did you do after the event happened, did you report it to anyone? 2 CUT TO: VICTIM (MS,OTS) (ANSWERS) CUT TO:
  • 4. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 MILLIE WEST (MS,OTS) How have you changed, do you feel different? CUT TO: VICTIM (MS,OTS) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS,OTS) What would you say to victims of assault who have not reported it? CUT TO: VICTIM (MS,OTS) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS,OTS) How should perpetrators be dealt with? CUT TO: VICTIM (MS,OTS) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: SCENE THREE INT.SCHOOL CORRIDORS BEN GOLDSTONE (TRACKING, MS) I’m meeting “ “, a statistical analyst specialist, who came to talk to me about the facts and figures of annual, and regional crime related data. He will also be able to tell me about what he believes are the causes for this huge increase in numbers. 3 INT. Well lit office/ room, daytime CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/LS)
  • 5. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 Thank you so much for coming to meet us today, and agreeing to be part of our documentary. CUT TO: STATISTICAL ANALYST (MS/CU) (ANSWER) CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/LS) What changes have you seen regarding crime in Redbridge over recent years? CUT TO: STATISTICAL ANALYST (MS/CU) (ANSWER) CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/LS) How do these figures change regionally and in comparison to other boroughs? CUT TO: STATISTICAL ANALYST (MS/CU) (ANSWER) CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/LS) What do you believe is the cause for the increase in crime figures? CUT TO: STATISTICAL ANALYST (MS/CU) (ANSWER) CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/LS) Are there any specific trends that can be seen regarding the amount of crime in specific Redbridge region areas or a specific time of year? 4 CUT TO: STATISTICAL ANALYST (MS/CU) (ANSWER) CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/LS)
  • 6. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 What do statistical analysts predict for the coming year regarding the amount of crime reported and occurring? CUT TO: STATISTICAL ANALYST (MS/CU) (ANSWER) CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/LS) Thank you so much for your time. CUT TO: STATISTICAL ANALYST (MS/CU) (ANSWER) (SHAKE HANDS) CUT TO: SCENE FOUR EXT.BARKINGSIDE HIGH STREET, MORNING, BEN GOLDSTONE STANDS TO INTRODUCE THE NEW SEGMENT. BEN GOLDSTONE (LS,MS) I’m here today on Barkingside High Street, to ask the public about their experiences with crime within the borough. BEN GOLDSTONE (VOX POPS) Hi, we're creating a documentary on the rise in Redbridge crime, would you mind if i asked you a few questions? CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (1) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) 5 CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/CU) Have you been a victim of crime? CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (1) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO:
  • 7. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 INTERVIEWEES (2) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/CU) How did you deal with this experience? CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (1) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (2) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/CU) What would you do and your first instinct be if you witnessed a crime being committed? CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (1) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (2) (MS,CU) 6 (ANSWERS) CUT TO: SCENE FIVE EXT. DAY, ON RESIDENTIAL STREET CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (LS,MS,TRACKING, ES) Walks through street and into house I’am about to interview another victim of a crime, that has been increasing rapidly over the past five years, burglary.
  • 8. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MLS,MS)Holds hand out to greet Hi, thank you for meeting with me today. CUT TO: VICTIM (MS)Holds hand out to greet, sits down (ANSWERS) CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS, OTS) So you were a victim of a burglary. CUT TO: VICTIM (MS,OTS) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS, OTS) When did you realise that you had been burgled? CUT TO: VICTIM (MS,OTS) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: EXT.RECONSTRUCTION, NIGHT. 7 MAN (LS,MS,CCTV) Walks up to house, looks through windows, looks around, forces door open. CUT TO: MAN (MS,CU,LS) Piles valuables into a backpack, runs off CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS, OTS) Wow, so you actually saw the man burgle you from your phone? CUT TO:
  • 9. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 VICTIM (MS,OTS) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS, OTS) What happened to the burglar, was he caught? CUT TO: VICTIM (MS,OTS) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS, OTS) Did you feel different in your home, after the crime? How did you cope? CUT TO: VICTIM (MS,OTS) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS, OTS) What would you say to others in the neighbourhood about burglary and what can be done to stop it. CUT TO: VICTIM (MS,OTS) 8 (ANSWERS) SCENE SIX EXT.BARKINGSIDE HIGH STREET, MORNING BEN GOLDSTONE (VOX POPS) Hi, we're creating a documentary on the rise in Redbridge crime, would you mind if i asked you a few questions? CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (3) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/CU)
  • 10. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 Have you been a victim of crime? CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (3) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (4) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/CU) How did you deal with this experience? CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (3) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (4) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: 9 BEN GOLDSTONE (MS/CU) What would you do and your first instinct be if you witnessed a crime being committed? CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (3) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (4) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: BEN GOLDSTONE
  • 11. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 (MS/CU) What do you believe can be done to help try and prevent crime? CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (1) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (2) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (3) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: INTERVIEWEES (4) (MS,CU) (ANSWERS) CUT TO: SCENE SEVEN 10 EXT. WALKING DOWN ROAD, AFTERNOON MILLIE WEST (TRACKING, MS) I’m on my way to a local Redbridge police station to talk to one of the officers “ “ about the recent and dramatic increase in crime figures, and what we can do to try and stop it. CUT TO: EXT. Outside police station CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS/LS) What changes have the police force seen regarding crime in recent years? CUT TO: POLICE OFFICER (MS/CU) (ANSWER)
  • 12. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS/LS) How have these changes impacted the local police force? CUT TO: POLICE OFFICER (MS/CU) (ANSWER) CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS/LS) What do you believe can be done to help lower the amount of crime occurring in Redbridge? CUT TO: POLICE OFFICER (MS/CU) (ANSWER) CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS/LS) If you could give any advice to those who may have been subject to becoming a victim of crime or to those who may have witnessed one, what would you say? CUT TO: 11 POLICE OFFICER (MS/CU) (ANSWER) CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (MS/LS) Thank you so much for your time. CUT TO: POLICE OFFICER (MS/CU) (ANSWER) (SHAKE HANDS) CUT TO: SCENE EIGHT EXT. BARKINGSIDE HIGH STREET, DAYTIME. BEN GOLDSTONE (MS,CU, TRACK) So there you have it, we have seen that crime is significantly on the rise and we need to try and do everything we can to try and stop it.
  • 13. DRAFT ONE: 20TH NOVEMBER 2017 CUT TO: MILLIE WEST (TWO SHOT, MS, TRACK) Whether that be to report any incidents that are witnessed, increase the amount of police patrolling on the streets or simply try to improve the connection between the police force and the public, we must do something. BOTH (MS-LS) STOP WALKING - STAND STILL Shocking, scary and startling - What can you do to help prevent crime? CUT TO CREDITS 12