This document provides guidance on scientific writing. It discusses what constitutes scientific writing, who reads scientific papers, and factors that shape writing style. It offers tips for making writing more effective and precise. The main points are that writing science papers is challenging and requires following the format of the intended publication and paying attention to both the science and writing style. Readers should write as if explaining their work to someone familiar with the field but not already knowing the specific study.
Scientific Writing should be fun. It is not for only science students but also for all the person who are associated with education or literature or any type of writing. For students also it is useful for paper writing. Dr. Daxaben N. Mehta
Scientific writing is not just writing about science; it is the technical writing that scientists do to communicate their research to others. Scientific writing is predicated on the rigors of scientific inquiry, so it must reflect the same precision as that demanded in the research process.
Scientific Writing - Dr. P. Saranraj, Assistant Professor, Department of Microbiology, Sacred Heart College (Autonomous), Tirupattur, Vellore District, Tamil Nadu, India.
Scientific Writing should be fun. It is not for only science students but also for all the person who are associated with education or literature or any type of writing. For students also it is useful for paper writing. Dr. Daxaben N. Mehta
Scientific writing is not just writing about science; it is the technical writing that scientists do to communicate their research to others. Scientific writing is predicated on the rigors of scientific inquiry, so it must reflect the same precision as that demanded in the research process.
Scientific Writing - Dr. P. Saranraj, Assistant Professor, Department of Microbiology, Sacred Heart College (Autonomous), Tirupattur, Vellore District, Tamil Nadu, India.
This presentation gives effcient information as for writing a Scientific Research Paper. There is also an article which has more details regarding this topic https://essay-academy.com/account/blog/writing-a-scientific-research-paper
The aim of the journal article is to communicate your research effectively and help readers understand the issues at hand. Structure your manuscript so that readers take away the most important messages.
8 steps for writing an effective research paperSets India
A research paper gives a perspective or make an argument that is important to the chosen area of research, and summarizes the answers to your research questions. Research paper all about stating long lists of facts or explaining the topic.
An attempt to highlight the most common needs for writing a research article, this include the structure of research articles and the highly important parts needed to publish in a high level indexed journals (Clarivate ISI & Scopus).
How to write a research paper: How to write a research paper?
The research paper can be considered as the living thing which grows and changes as the student explores, interprets and evaluates sources related to a specific topic. Steps to write a research paper:
• Choose your topic.
• Begin your search.
• Making an outline.
• Write your paper.
This presentation gives effcient information as for writing a Scientific Research Paper. There is also an article which has more details regarding this topic https://essay-academy.com/account/blog/writing-a-scientific-research-paper
The aim of the journal article is to communicate your research effectively and help readers understand the issues at hand. Structure your manuscript so that readers take away the most important messages.
8 steps for writing an effective research paperSets India
A research paper gives a perspective or make an argument that is important to the chosen area of research, and summarizes the answers to your research questions. Research paper all about stating long lists of facts or explaining the topic.
An attempt to highlight the most common needs for writing a research article, this include the structure of research articles and the highly important parts needed to publish in a high level indexed journals (Clarivate ISI & Scopus).
How to write a research paper: How to write a research paper?
The research paper can be considered as the living thing which grows and changes as the student explores, interprets and evaluates sources related to a specific topic. Steps to write a research paper:
• Choose your topic.
• Begin your search.
• Making an outline.
• Write your paper.
Medical writing is the activity of writing scientific documentation by someone who is a specialized writer (a medical writer) and is generally not one of the scientists or doctors whose research it was..
AQUACULTURE TECHNOLOGY TO BE HIGHLIGHTED AT GFIA 2015Gareth Lott
Global companies with expertise in aquaculture are to be presented with a major opportunity to showcase their expertise in the United Arab Emirates in March 2015.
The 2nd Global Forum for Innovations in Agriculture (GFIA) is the world’s largest showcase of game-changing innovations in sustainable agriculture and the 2015 event will have specific opportunities for aquaculture companies.
Writing a Formal Lab Report and Scientific PapersG.docxodiliagilby
Writing a Formal Lab Report and Scientific Papers
General Tips o Be concise. In scientific writing, it is very important to say as much as is needed while using as few words as possible. Lab reports should be thorough, but repetition should be avoided. The entire report should be clear and straightforward.
· Write in the third person. Avoid using the words “I” or “we” when referring to the experimental procedure. For example, instead of “I boiled 50 mL of water for 10 minutes,” the report should read, “50 mL of water was boiled for 10 minutes.” This can be a bit difficult to get used to, so it is important to pay close attention to the wording in the report
· Use correct verb tenses. Many students become confused when trying to decide whether to use past or present tense in their reports. If referring to anything that happened in the past, then use the past tense. For example, if you are writing about an experiment you have already performed, then refer to it in the past tense. Present tense should be used when referring to a scientific principle, such as, “Water is two parts hydrogen and one part oxygen.” The general rules for verb tenses are as follows:
· The experimental procedure has already been conducted, so use the past tense of the verb when referring to it:
Ex: The purpose of the experiment was...
The compound was weighed to 5 g...
· The report, equipment, and theory still exist, so use the present tense of the verb for them:
Ex: The purpose of this report is...
Bunsen burners are used...
Document created by: Lakesha Allen
Document created by: Lakesha Allen
LAB REPORT FORMAT
Style Guidelines:
· Typed
· Paper: 8.5” x 11”
· Spacing: Double-spaced
· Margins: 1 inch
· Font: Times New Roman, 12 pt (EVERY word in your paper should have this font type and size)
· APA FORMAT
Major Paper Sections:
· Title Page
· Abstract
· Introduction
· Materials and Methods
· Results
· Discussion
· References
TITLE PAGE
The title should be less than ten words and should reflect the factual content of the paper. A good title is straightforward and uses keywords that researchers in a particular field will recognize. It should not contain abbreviations or words that serve no purpose.
Type your title in upper and lowercase letters centered in the upper half of the page. Your title may take up one or two lines. All text on the title page, and throughout your paper, should be double-spaced. Beneath the title, type the author's name: first name, middle initial(s), and last name. Do not use titles (Dr.) or degrees (PhD). Beneath the author's name, type the institutional affiliation, which should indicate the location where the author(s) conducted the research.
ABSTRACT
Begin a new page. On the first line of the abstract page, center the word “Abstract” (no bold, formatting, italics, underlining, or quotations marks). Beginning with the next line, write a concise summary of the key points of your research. ...
Writing a Formal Lab Report and Scientific PapersG.docxbillylewis37150
Writing a Formal Lab Report and Scientific Papers
General Tips o Be concise. In scientific writing, it is very important to say as much as is needed while using as few words as possible. Lab reports should be thorough, but repetition should be avoided. The entire report should be clear and straightforward.
· Write in the third person. Avoid using the words “I” or “we” when referring to the experimental procedure. For example, instead of “I boiled 50 mL of water for 10 minutes,” the report should read, “50 mL of water was boiled for 10 minutes.” This can be a bit difficult to get used to, so it is important to pay close attention to the wording in the report
· Use correct verb tenses. Many students become confused when trying to decide whether to use past or present tense in their reports. If referring to anything that happened in the past, then use the past tense. For example, if you are writing about an experiment you have already performed, then refer to it in the past tense. Present tense should be used when referring to a scientific principle, such as, “Water is two parts hydrogen and one part oxygen.” The general rules for verb tenses are as follows:
· The experimental procedure has already been conducted, so use the past tense of the verb when referring to it:
Ex: The purpose of the experiment was...
The compound was weighed to 5 g...
· The report, equipment, and theory still exist, so use the present tense of the verb for them:
Ex: The purpose of this report is...
Bunsen burners are used...
Document created by: Lakesha Allen
Document created by: Lakesha Allen
LAB REPORT FORMAT
Style Guidelines:
· Typed
· Paper: 8.5” x 11”
· Spacing: Double-spaced
· Margins: 1 inch
· Font: Times New Roman, 12 pt (EVERY word in your paper should have this font type and size)
· APA FORMAT
Major Paper Sections:
· Title Page
· Abstract
· Introduction
· Materials and Methods
· Results
· Discussion
· References
TITLE PAGE
The title should be less than ten words and should reflect the factual content of the paper. A good title is straightforward and uses keywords that researchers in a particular field will recognize. It should not contain abbreviations or words that serve no purpose.
Type your title in upper and lowercase letters centered in the upper half of the page. Your title may take up one or two lines. All text on the title page, and throughout your paper, should be double-spaced. Beneath the title, type the author's name: first name, middle initial(s), and last name. Do not use titles (Dr.) or degrees (PhD). Beneath the author's name, type the institutional affiliation, which should indicate the location where the author(s) conducted the research.
ABSTRACT
Begin a new page. On the first line of the abstract page, center the word “Abstract” (no bold, formatting, italics, underlining, or quotations marks). Beginning with the next line, write a concise summary of the key points of your research..
Running Head Title1Title3TitleNameSCI 207 De.docxagnesdcarey33086
Running Head: Title
1
Title
3
Title
Name
SCI 207: Dependence of man on the environment
Instructor
Date
*This template will provide you with the details necessary to finalize a quality Final Lab Report. Utilize this template to complete the Week 5 Final Lab Report and ensure that you are providing all of the necessary information and proper format for the assignment. Before you begin, please note the following important information:
1. Carefully review the Final Lab Report instructions before you begin this assignment.
2. The Final Lab Report should cover all 3 experiments from your Week Two Lab.
3. Review instructor feedback from the Week Three outline of the Final Lab Report and make changes as necessary.
4. Review the Sample Final Lab Report for an example of a final product on a different topic. Your format should look like this sample report before submission.
5. Run your Final Lab Report through Turnitin using the student folder to ensure protection from accidental plagiarism
Title
Abstract
The abstract should provide a brief summary of the methods, results, and conclusions. It should very briefly allow the reader to see what was done, how it was done, and the results. It should not exceed 200 words and should be the last part written (although it should still appear right after the title page).
Introduction
The introduction should describe the background of water quality and related issues using cited examples. You should include scholarly sources in this section to help explain why water quality research is important to society. When writing this section, make sure to cite all resources in APA format.
The introduction should also contain the objective for your study. This objective is the reason why the experiment is being done. Your final report should provide an objective that describes why we want to know the answer to the questions we are asking.
Finally, the introduction should end with your hypotheses. This section should include a hypothesis for each one of the three experiments. These hypotheses should be the same ones posed before you began your experiments. You may reword them following feedback from your instructor to illustrate a proper hypothesis, however, you should not adjust them to reflect the “right” answer. You do not lose points for an inaccurate hypothesis; scientists often revise their hypotheses based on scientific evidence following an experiment.
Materials and Methods
The materials and methods section should provide a brief description of the specialized materials used in your experiment and how they were used. This section needs to summarize the instructions with enough detail so that an outsider who does not have a copy of the lab instructions knows what you did. However, this does not mean writing every little step like “dip the pH test strip in the water, then shake the test strips,” these steps can be simplified to read “we used pH test strips to measure water pH”, etc. Additionally, this se.
Dance_3_2015
1
Scientific Project Details: Dance 3
Due Date 11/25/15 by 5:00pm
Purpose:
• The main goal of this project is to apply principles of the scientific method to a self-
experiment based on one of the dimensions of wellness that you have identify you would
like to modify.
Important Dates and Deadlines:
1. Hypothesis Statement 10/1
2. Methods due 10/8
3. Data Collection update 10/20
4. Previews of final project can be arranged thru office hours or appointment.
• Due Date is 11/25/15
BASICS:
• For this project you will take your wellness goal set at the beginning of class, formulate a
hypothesis, design a self-experiment, run the experiment, and then write up the results in a
scientific lab report format.
Step 1: Develop a hypothesis based on one of the dimensions of wellness you learned in class
that you have identified you would like to investigate for yourself. This statement gives a possibility
(if) and explains what may happen because of the possibility (then).
Examples:
• If I set goals before studying, I will spend an average of 10 less minutes per hour on
Social Media.
• If I eat an overall healthy diet (one which does not include fast food), then I will have
more energy daily.
• I hypothesize that without restrictive diet (2,000 a day), cardio workout alone (60
minutes daily at 85 % target heart rate, then I will drop of three pounds a week for a
total of nine pounds for three weeks.
• If I run 5 miles a day for 6 days a week for 4 weeks, I will lose 1 pound a week for a total
of 4 pounds.
• If I only eat out once a week for 4 weeks, I will save $20.00 a week for a total of $80.00
Step II: Develop and identify the materials and the methods needed to conduct your self-
experiment. Explain what are your methods for your experiment.
Make sure to include:
• Length of study (at least 3 weeks)
Dance_3_2015
2
• What do you need to conduct the experiment?
• Define your outcome measures (what are you going to measure?)
• Details on how, when, where you are going to conduct the experiment?
Step III: Data Collection Update 10/20*
• Please provide an update on how your data collection is progressing in a word
document (.doc).
• Please provide data for at least one week of data collection (Can be in a table format)
• Please provide details on what has been easy or challenging.
• What is your plan to stay on task for the rest of experiment?
Step IV: Follow the below instructions for writing up your experiment in a report format.
• Please use word and save it as a .doc file.
• Make sure to use 11-12 point font.
• Please proofread your reports carefully.
• Can be written in first person.
• Please add your name and ID number to rubric and turn is as separate document
on DROPBOX Return Assignments.
Basic Format Requirements For the Report
The report should consist of the following:
1. Title
2. Abstract
3. Introduction
4. Materials an.
How to write a scientific paper - PowerPoint to support the associated workbook handout. Workshop held as part of the USAID AIP Pakistan project. Workshop delivered by Tom Rost and Mark Bell.
Running Head Title1Title4TitleNameSCI 207 De.docxagnesdcarey33086
Running Head: Title
1
Title
4
Title
Name
SCI 207: Dependence of man on the environment
Instructor
Date
*This template will provide you with the details necessary to finalize a quality Final Lab Report. Utilize this template to complete the Week 5 Final Lab Report and ensure that you are providing all of the necessary information and proper format for the assignment. Before you begin, please note the following important information:
1. Carefully review the Final Lab Report instructions before you begin this assignment
2. The Final Lab Report should cover all 3 experiments from your Week Two Lab
3. Review instructor feedback from the Week Three outline of the final lab report and make changes as necessary
4. Review the Sample Final Lab Report for an example of a final product on a different topic. Your format should look like this sample report before submission.
5. Run your Final Lab Report through turnitin using the student folder to ensure protection from accidental plagiarism
Title
Abstract
The abstract should provide a brief summary of the methods, results, and conclusions. It should very briefly allow the reader to see what was done, how it was done, and the results. It should not exceed 200 words and should be the last part written (although it should still appear right after the title page).
Introduction
The introduction should describe the background of water quality and related issues using cited examples. You should include scholarly sources in this section to help explain why water quality research is important to society. When writing this section, make sure to cite all resources in APA format.
The introduction should also contain the objective for your study. This objective is the reason why the experiment is being done. Your final report should provide an objective that describes why we want to know the answer to the questions we are asking.
Finally, the introduction should end with your hypotheses. This section should include a hypothesis for each one of the three experiments. These hypotheses should be the same ones posed before you began your experiments. You may reword them following feedback from your instructor to illustrate a proper hypothesis, however, you should not adjust them to reflect the “right” answer. You do not lose points for an inaccurate hypothesis; scientists often revise their hypotheses based on scientific evidence following an experiment.
Materials and Methods
The materials and methods section should provide a brief description of the specialized materials used in your experiment and how they were used. This section needs to summarize the instructions with enough detail so that an outsider who does not have a copy of the lab instructions knows what you did. However, this does not mean writing every little step like “dip the pH test strip in the water, then shake the test strips,” these steps can be simplified to read “we used pH test strips to measure water pH”, etc. Additionally, this se.
Communication is important part of science.
If a scientist carries out a major research project, but no one knows about it, or no one can understand it, the research if of little use.
Ways of scientific communication
Scientific papers
Poster presentations
Book chapter's and professional lectures
Acetabularia Information For Class 9 .docxvaibhavrinwa19
Acetabularia acetabulum is a single-celled green alga that in its vegetative state is morphologically differentiated into a basal rhizoid and an axially elongated stalk, which bears whorls of branching hairs. The single diploid nucleus resides in the rhizoid.
2024.06.01 Introducing a competency framework for languag learning materials ...Sandy Millin
http://sandymillin.wordpress.com/iateflwebinar2024
Published classroom materials form the basis of syllabuses, drive teacher professional development, and have a potentially huge influence on learners, teachers and education systems. All teachers also create their own materials, whether a few sentences on a blackboard, a highly-structured fully-realised online course, or anything in between. Despite this, the knowledge and skills needed to create effective language learning materials are rarely part of teacher training, and are mostly learnt by trial and error.
Knowledge and skills frameworks, generally called competency frameworks, for ELT teachers, trainers and managers have existed for a few years now. However, until I created one for my MA dissertation, there wasn’t one drawing together what we need to know and do to be able to effectively produce language learning materials.
This webinar will introduce you to my framework, highlighting the key competencies I identified from my research. It will also show how anybody involved in language teaching (any language, not just English!), teacher training, managing schools or developing language learning materials can benefit from using the framework.
Synthetic Fiber Construction in lab .pptxPavel ( NSTU)
Synthetic fiber production is a fascinating and complex field that blends chemistry, engineering, and environmental science. By understanding these aspects, students can gain a comprehensive view of synthetic fiber production, its impact on society and the environment, and the potential for future innovations. Synthetic fibers play a crucial role in modern society, impacting various aspects of daily life, industry, and the environment. ynthetic fibers are integral to modern life, offering a range of benefits from cost-effectiveness and versatility to innovative applications and performance characteristics. While they pose environmental challenges, ongoing research and development aim to create more sustainable and eco-friendly alternatives. Understanding the importance of synthetic fibers helps in appreciating their role in the economy, industry, and daily life, while also emphasizing the need for sustainable practices and innovation.
Executive Directors Chat Leveraging AI for Diversity, Equity, and InclusionTechSoup
Let’s explore the intersection of technology and equity in the final session of our DEI series. Discover how AI tools, like ChatGPT, can be used to support and enhance your nonprofit's DEI initiatives. Participants will gain insights into practical AI applications and get tips for leveraging technology to advance their DEI goals.
A review of the growth of the Israel Genealogy Research Association Database Collection for the last 12 months. Our collection is now passed the 3 million mark and still growing. See which archives have contributed the most. See the different types of records we have, and which years have had records added. You can also see what we have for the future.
Operation “Blue Star” is the only event in the history of Independent India where the state went into war with its own people. Even after about 40 years it is not clear if it was culmination of states anger over people of the region, a political game of power or start of dictatorial chapter in the democratic setup.
The people of Punjab felt alienated from main stream due to denial of their just demands during a long democratic struggle since independence. As it happen all over the word, it led to militant struggle with great loss of lives of military, police and civilian personnel. Killing of Indira Gandhi and massacre of innocent Sikhs in Delhi and other India cities was also associated with this movement.
Safalta Digital marketing institute in Noida, provide complete applications that encompass a huge range of virtual advertising and marketing additives, which includes search engine optimization, virtual communication advertising, pay-per-click on marketing, content material advertising, internet analytics, and greater. These university courses are designed for students who possess a comprehensive understanding of virtual marketing strategies and attributes.Safalta Digital Marketing Institute in Noida is a first choice for young individuals or students who are looking to start their careers in the field of digital advertising. The institute gives specialized courses designed and certification.
for beginners, providing thorough training in areas such as SEO, digital communication marketing, and PPC training in Noida. After finishing the program, students receive the certifications recognised by top different universitie, setting a strong foundation for a successful career in digital marketing.
Read| The latest issue of The Challenger is here! We are thrilled to announce that our school paper has qualified for the NATIONAL SCHOOLS PRESS CONFERENCE (NSPC) 2024. Thank you for your unwavering support and trust. Dive into the stories that made us stand out!
This slide is special for master students (MIBS & MIFB) in UUM. Also useful for readers who are interested in the topic of contemporary Islamic banking.
Francesca Gottschalk - How can education support child empowerment.pptxEduSkills OECD
Francesca Gottschalk from the OECD’s Centre for Educational Research and Innovation presents at the Ask an Expert Webinar: How can education support child empowerment?
2. Outline
q What is scientific writing?
q Who reads your writing?
q What factors shape the style?
q How can I make my writing more effective?
q How I can make my writing more precise?
3. What is scientific writing?
q Research paper Research note
q Scientific article Review article
q Conference paper Meeting poster
q Thesis or dissertation Book chapter
q Annual report Newsletter
q Project proposal Magazine article
4. Why?
Scientific writing is the culmination or end product of
scientific research. Scientists pose questions and then
perform experiments to answer their questions. The
results that come from experimentation must finally
be presented to the rest of the scientific community in
the form of a published paper in a primary journal
before the research is considered finished.
5. Main Point
Writing an effective scientific paper is not easy. A
good rule of thumb is to write as if your paper will
be read by a person who knows about the field in
general but does not already know what you did.
Before you write a scientific paper it is a good idea
to read some scientific papers in the format of the
paper you will use. In addition to the science, pay
attention to the writing style and format.
6. Example (1)
q An evaluation of the program by us will
encourage increase in efficiency in the
servicing of clients.
q We will evaluate the program so that we can
serve our clients more efficiently.
7. Example (2)
q The design of the experiment, in terms of the
establishment of a clear control and the practicability of
timing the reactions precisely, although compensations
were included to address these factors, was not
successful.
q The design of the experiment was not entirely
successful, because the failure to establish a clear
control and time reactions precisely, although
compensation were included to address these factors.
8. A step-by-step procedure (1)
The Preliminaries
2. Choose a topic
3. Begin preliminary reading
4. Restrict the subject
5. Develop a preliminary thesis statement
9. A step-by-step procedure (2)
Gathering Data
3. Compile the working bibliography
4. Prepare the bibliography on cards
5. Working in libraries or office
10. A step-by-step procedure (3)
Taking Notes
2. Develop a preliminary outline
3. Prepare to write:Consider your real and imagined
readers
4. Write the rough draft
5. Check your documentation carefully
6. Revise and rewrite
7. Check the format of the text, citations…
8. Proofread
11. The layout of a Scientific Paper
(IMRAD)
Introduction
2. Presents clearly the background and scope of a
problem
3. Review pertinent literature
4. Presents the investigation method
5. Lists principal findings
6. Summarizes main conclusions
12. Additional Tips
1. Move from general to specific
2. Engage your reader
3. Make clear the links
4. Be selective
5. Ask your instructor
13. Additional Tips
This study investigates the relationship between
tree density and fruit size.
The purpose of this study is to determine the effect
of enzyme concentration on the reaction rate of ....
14. Additional Tips
The hypothesis is the explanation you are proposing
for certain observations. It is a tentative answer to the
question you have posed above. It should be
accompanied by a prediction of results expected
under certain conditions if the hypothesis is correct.
If competition lowers reproductive output, then fruit
size should be smaller when tree density increases.
15. Materials and Methods
– Describes exactly materials, quantity, and sources
– Makes possible repetition of experiment
– Describes clearly the experimental design
– Uses past tense
– Gives references for methods used
– States the statistical analysis
16. Additional Tips
1. Provide enough detail for replication
2. Order
3. Use past tense
4. Quantity
5. Don’t mix results with procedures
17. Additional Tips
1. Provide enough detail for replication
2. Order
3. Use past tense
4. Quantity
5. Don’t mix results with procedures
18. Results
q B ig p ic ture o n re s ults
q Imp a rtia l p re s e nta tio n
q Re p re s e nta tive d a ta
q Us e s ta b le s a nd fig ure s
19. Results
q 1. Explain why each procedure was done, i.e., what variable were you measuring and why? Example:
Difficult to understand: First, I removed the frog muscle and then I poured Ringer’s solution on it.
Next, I attached it to the kymograph.
Improved: I removed the frog muscle and poured Ringer’s solution on it to prevent it from drying out. I then
attached the muscle to the kymograph in order to determine the minimum voltage required for contraction.
q 2. Experimental procedures and results are narrated in the past tense (what you did, what you found, etc.) whereas
conclusions from your results are given in the present tense.
q 3. Mathematical equations and statistical tests are considered mathematical methods and should be described in this
section along with the actual experimental work.
q 4. Use active rather than passive voice when possible. Always use the singular "I" rather than the plural "we" when
you are the only author of the paper. Throughout the paper, avoid contractions, e.g. did not vs. didn’t.
q 5. If any of your methods is fully described in a previous publication (yours or someone else’s), you can cite that
instead of describing the procedure again.
20. Right and Wrong
q NO: Dissolved oxygen results are shown in Table 1.
q YES: Table 1 shows that dissolved oxygen
concentrations ranged from 14 ppm to 9 ppm.
q NO: Figure 1 shows the relationship between water
depth and dissolved oxygen concentration.
q YES: As shown in Figure 1, dissolved oxygen
concentration decreases with depth.
21. Right and Wrong
q NO: The geologic cross section shows the makeup of the
subsurface.
q YES: The geologic cross section illustrates that the
subsurface consists of sand and gravel with some clay
lenses.
q NO: The geologic cross-section shows that groundwater
can travel quickly through the subsurface. (discussion).
22. Additional Tips
1. Order: from most to least important, from
simple to complex, organ by organ
2. Use past tense
3. Don’t simply repeat table data
4. Don’t interpret results
5. Avoid extra words
23. Discussion
1. Principles, patterns, relationships, generalizations
2. Exceptions and unsettled points
3. Results compared with previous work
4. Implications, applications, beneficiaries
5. Clear conclusions
6. Evidence summarized for each conclusion
7. Possible future research arising, if any
24. Additional Tips
1. Move from specific to general
2. Don’t bury or ignore the major issue
3. Make explanations complete
• Don’t overgeneralize
• Don’t ignore deviations in your data
• Avoid speculation that can not be tested in the
foreseeable future
25. Examples
•NO: The groundwater is getting cleaner.
YES: On February 12, 1990 the monitoring well contained
23,000 ppb of dissolved hydrocarbons; while on September
16, 1996 the same well contained only 87 ppb. This indicates
the groundwater is getting cleaner.
•NO: The lake is not in danger of becoming acidified.
YES: An alkalinity of 140 ppm helps to prevent the lake from
becoming acidified.
26. Titles
1. Categorize titles
4. Identify mistakes in titles
27. Titles
q The title should contain three elements:
q 1. the name of the organism studied;
q 2. the particular aspect or system studied;
q 3. the variable(s) manipulated.
28. Types of Titles
1. Indicative
2. Informative
3. Question type
4. Main/subtitle type
29. In d ic ative
•Effects of differential irrigation on
maize growth and yield on a clay soil
•Effect of Injected Sea Anemone toxin
on Symbiotic Fish Species
30. Informative
q Differential
irrigation decreases maize growth
and yield on a clay soil
q Enhanced reproduction of strawberry plants
under low light conditions
31. Q u e s tio n Typ e
Does differential irrigation affect maize growth
and yield on a clay soil?
Will reproduction of strawberry plants be
enhanced under low light conditions
32. Main /S u b title Typ e
Differential irrigation: effects on maize growth and
yield on a clay soil
33. N o te s
1. Never too long or too short
3. Avoid using waste words: A study of, investigations
of, Observations on
5. Avoid using many abbreviations
34. Ke y Wo rd s
1. Generally not appeared in the title
3. Do not fabricate key words
5. Order: follow the instruction of the
journal
36. This is a brief synopsis of the paper so that the reader can get the point
and decide whether to read the entire paper. Abstracts are typically
included along with titles in bibliographic sources such as the ones
you use in on-line searches. In about 100 or 200 words, an abstract
summarizes the purpose of the study or question investigated, the
method used, the major results, and the conclusions drawn from the
study. It is good practice to write the abstract last, even though it
appears at the beginning.
37. Introduction
q Opening statement
q Example of examples
q Literature review (exhaustive historical review)
q Citations
q Criticizing previous work
q Ending the introduction
38. The Method Section
q Lead the reader through the procedure
q Name all groups, variables and operations
q Reliability and validity of data
q Data deletions
q References
39. Results Section
q Setting the stage
q Statistical analysis
q Remind reader of the the hypothesis
q Remind reader of the operations performed
q Speak to the audience in numbers
q Smooth transition
q Figures and tables
40. The Discussion Section
q Beginning by telling us what you have learned
q Comparison with findings of others
q Do not dwell compulsively on every flaw
q Questions undressed
q End with a bang, not a whimper
41. References
q Citation style (following the guide of the journal)
q Relevance
q Accurate
q Availability
q Balance (geographical, academic schools)
42. Remember
q Alphabetize literature citations by first author's last name.
q Within a journal citation, give authors, year date, title of paper,
title of journal, volume and pages. Do not use quotation marks
around title of paper. Capitalize first word of title and any proper
nouns. Do not underline or italicize title of journal.
q Within a book citation, give authors, year date, title of book,
publisher, city. Capitalize first word of book title and any proper
nouns. Do not underline or italicize book title.
43. For example
q Greene, E., L. J. Orsak, and D. W. Whitman. 1987.
A tephritid fly mimics the territorial displays of its
jumping spider predators. Science 236:310 312.
q Merritt, J. F. 1987. Guide to the mammals of
Pennsylvania. University of Pittsburgh Press,
Pittsburgh.
44. Acknowledgments
q Give credits to others (field work, lab analysis,
comments on manuscripts, language editing)
q Source of grants
q Other helps
45. Notes
q • Interest, inform, and persuade the reader
q • Write for your reader and write clearly
q • Eliminate unnecessary redundancy
q • Avoid digressions
q • Don't over explain and avoid overstatement
q • Avoid unnecessary qualifiers
q • Use consistent tenses
q • Use the precise word
q • Simpler words are preferred over complex words and use concrete words and examples
q • Simpler sentences are preferred over more complicated sentences
q • Use the active voice (except generally in methods)
q • Make sure the subject and verb agree
q • Use affirmative rather than negative constructions
q • Avoid use of the indefinite "this"
q • Use transitions
q • Cite sources as well as findings
q • Proofread your paper carefully; spell check does not catch everything; "there" is spelled
q correctly but not if you meant "their"
46. Acknowledgments
q Give credits to others (field work, lab analysis,
comments on manuscripts, language editing)
q Source of grants
q Other helps
47. Acknowledgments
q Give credits to others (field work, lab analysis,
comments on manuscripts, language editing)
q Source of grants
q Other helps
48. Acknowledgments
q Give credits to others (field work, lab analysis,
comments on manuscripts, language editing)
q Source of grants
q Other helps
49. Acknowledgments
q Give credits to others (field work, lab analysis,
comments on manuscripts, language editing)
q Source of grants
q Other helps
50. More to tell ……
q Logic flow
q Context
q Accuracy
q Concise and clear (clarity)
q Tense
q Complete
q Honesty
51. How can we improve our writing?
q Read more papers.
q Learn basic English grammar, vocabulary,
sentence- making.
q Collocations
q Associations
q Synonyms
q Classifications
52. Get some good dictionaries
q Advanced Learner’s English Chinese Dictionary
(Oxford, Sixth Edition)
q 孙谷陆编,英汉大字典(第二版)
q 牛津英语搭配字典(英汉双解版)
q 朗文英语联想活用词典(第二版)
q 英汉联想搭配词典 ( 商务印书馆 )
53. Get some good dictionaries
q Webster’s New Dictionary of Synonyms
q 英语搭配大辞典 ( 外语教学版 , 市川繁荣治郎
)
q 当代英语搭配大词典 ( 高教出版社 )
q 朗文英语联想活用词典(第二版)
q 英汉联想搭配词典 ( 商务印书馆 )
q 英语词汇逻辑记忆法 ( 黎学智 )
q 英语同义词词典 ( 商务 )
54. What is English Collocations?
q Mr. Wang wrote a book. The book was about a
story happened in the 1930’s in China. This story
portrayed a family of five brothers who were
struggling to resist the invasions of Japanese
army. After I quickly read the book that had Mr.
Wang’s name in it, I started to like the book very
much. I would like to recommend it to you.
55. Write
q 副词 +Write : Clearly, neatly, busily, beautifully,
well, badly, extensively, anonymously, briskly,
entertainingly, despairingly, gracefully, distinctly,
expressly, forcibly
q Write+ 介词: Down, on, away, back, about, for, of,
on, upon
q 动词 +write” Commission somebody to, inspire
somebody to, prompt somebody to
56. Book
q 形容词 +Book: Latest, new, recent, forthcoming,
hardback, paperback, printed, rare, second-hand,
delightful, excellent, fascinating, remarkable,
useful, influential, memorandum, voluminous
q 动词 +Book: Be engrossed in, be immersed in,
inscribe, dedicate, translate, edit, bind, censor,
borrow, take out, renew
q Book+ 动词: Appear, come out, be out, go out
q Book+ 介词: About, on, for, from, of
57. Story
q 形容词 +Story: True, plausible, false, made-up, apocryphal ( 假的 ), cock-and-bull,
official, wild, convincing, compelling, delightful, dramatic, exciting, amazing,
fascinating, exciting, fantastic, good, great, interesting, intriguing, nice, wonderful,
bizarre, colorful, crazy, extraordinary, incredible, outrageous, remarkable, strange,
inspiring, amusing, entertaining, epic, elaborate, complex, straightforward, awful,
horrific, horrifying, nasty, shocking, depressing, poignant, coherent…
q 动词 +Story: Read, write, relate, rate, recount, embellish ( 装饰 ), embroider ( 润饰 ),
believe, stick to, swap…
q Story+ 动词 : Abound, circulate, get about, go around, be entitled with, revolve around
sth.
q Story+ 词组 : So the story goes, the story goes that, the story of my life, a version of a
story
58. Happen
q 副词 +Happen: Actually, really, just, spontaneously, overnight,
often, frequently, easily, sometimes
q 动词 +Happen: Going to, be bound to, be likely, tend to, make sth.
To, want sth. To, let sth. To
q 介词 : To
Portray
q 副词 +Portray: Accurately, faithfully, clearly, dramatically,
graphically, vividly,
q 动词 +Portray: Attempt to, try to
q 介词: As
60. Read
q 副词 +Read: Aloud, silently, carefully, avidly, voraciously,
q 动词 +Read: Be able to, learn to, teach sb how to
q Read+ 介词 : About, from, of, through, to
q Story+ 词组 : Read and write
Start
q 副词 +Start: Suddenly, immediately, just, out, off
q 介词: By, from, on, with
q 词组: Get started, Let’s start
Recommend
q 副词 +Recommend: Highly, thoroughly, certainly, definitely, heartily, personally
q 介词: For, to
q 词组: Sth has a lot to recommend, sth has much to recommend
61. A forthcoming book…
q A fascinating book written by Mr. Wang will be coming
out soon. This epic book vividly portrays the life of a
penniless family with five brothers to go into the army to
combat with the fully armed inhuman Japanese invaders,
taking place in the 1930’s in the northern China plains.
After I skimmed through the sample copy in which Mr.
Wang inscribed his name, I was immediately engrossed
in it. This book should be a highly recommended must
read for all Chinese people who want to recall that
bloody war between the brave Shandong people and the
brutal Japanese aggressors.
62. What is association?
包办 : Be the whole show, monopolize everything;
惩办 : Punish, chastise
承办 : Undertake, handle
筹办 : Make preparations
创办 : Set up, establish
催办 : Press for implementation
大办 : Go in for sth. in a big way
代办 : Act on sb.’s behalf, agent, charge d’affaires
公办 : State-run, state-owned
63. q 公事公办 : Do official business according to
official principles
q 好办 : Easily arranged
q 举办 : Host, hold
q 申办 : Bid for
q 严办 : Punish with severity
q 置办 : Purchase
q 酌办 : Proceed at one’s discretion
69. 习惯用语 ( 习语 ) (Idioms)
q It’s chucking it down: It is raining heavily.
q Charity begins at home: 近水楼台先得月 .
q He’s got no money to speak of. 他没钱了 .
q His complaints have a familiar ring. 他的抱怨听
上去耳熟 .
q I recognize his face but I can’t put a name to it.
( 面熟 , 但记不得他的名字 )